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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 2
so MR. Shlok agnohotri is cooking 😆
shavi is still stuck u to her demand
and astha is thinking she forget
shavi is whose daughter u have see na
awesome😊
Edited by fatima_FM - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 3
that was cutest update😳
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😛coming very soon
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coming soon dear😛
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Love your cute stories, the pics fit the scenes well. I can imagine how much effort this takes, great job!
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Aashlok ss-My family...My heaven

Chapter3 LINK:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/97251586

Chapter 4







They were driving towards their hotel...

Shlok:astha u remember...when we came here last time...



Astha:how can I forget ...our honeymoon shlok...our beautiful memories..she said placing her head on his shoulder...

Shlok:took her hand in his and said u gave me a beautiful gift here...our beautiful daughter...

Astha:shavi is in our lives only because of your immense love...u gave me...




Shlok:shavi is because of ...our love ...not only because of my love...she is symbol of our love astha...hum dono ke pyaar ki nishani ...




AStha:watched him lovingly all the way...thinking that how much he loves me...how much love he gave me...he is my life... who can say that in past he married me just to take revenge ...to give me pain...but one can never predict future...I never thought that this devil in my life is actually angel of my life...most of the time we just see superficial of the things...and we find it too difficult to break that superficial layer...and feel the softness and sweetness filled in the core...I also took sometime in understanding that one's inner is always pure and true compared to one's outer layers...today he is only truth of my life...he gave me sooo much love that I feel the pain he gave me is nothing in front of the love he has for me...for our relation. ..and for our daughter...today I can proudly say that I love Mr.shlok agnihotri...though he is akdu...but my life...my soul...she smiled with tears in her eyes...

aaj phir tum peh pyar aaya hai,
behad aur behisab aaya hai


meree har sans me samaye raho
yahee hai rat din duva meree
har khushee tumse jindagee tumse
tum hee ummid, tum hee wafa meree
maine sub kuchh tum hee se paya hai
aaj phir tum peh pyar aaya hai, behad aur behisab aaya hai


Shlok noticed tears in her eyes...

Shlok:what happened astha???...r u ok???...


Astha:nothing ...just something went into my eyes...I m fine...

He stopped the car on one side...

Shok:let me see...he cupped her face with one hand and with other tried to check her eye...but astha resisted...

Shlok:what's wrong...let me check it na. ...

Astha: I said na I m fine shlok...


Shlok:just stare her for a while and said ...I love u 2 ...wiping her tears gently with his thumb...



Shlok:even if u will not say
it...I can understand what's going on in your mind...your eyes speak everything astha...



Astha was unable to control her feelings...she hugged him saying...you are my everything...I love u shlok...u r my life...



Shlok: tightly hugged her too...I love u too meri jaan ...

After few minutes...she break the hug...


Astha: sorry I got a little emotional shlok...now let's go ...I don't want u to be late because of me...

Shlok:for me nothing is more important than your feelings astha...always keep saying me I love u...always keep making me realize that u love me...it helps me to rise above my guilt...my sins...



Astha:placed her hand on his mouth ...please shlok...we promised each other that we will never talk about our bitter past...we will live in our present not in our past...


Shlok:kissed her hand ...saying ...I m sorry ...we will never talk about this again...

Astha:let's go now shlok...we are getting late...


Shlok:said ok ...and started the car...

FInally they reached the hotel...

Shlok:please book one room on the name of Mr. and Mrs.shlok agnihotri...



Manager:sir u visited here before????ur name is in our records?????

Shlok:oh yeah...5 OR 6 years ago I stayed in your hotel during my honeymoon trip...



Manager:nice to see u again sir ...so are u on your 2nd honeymoon trip????

Shlok:no this time I am here in case of some business deal...



Manager:OK sir...here are your keys...have a nice stay...




Shlok:opened the door for astha...



Shlok:please come inside my dear wife...

Astha:thank u my sweet husband...

Both were staring each other with a smile on their faces...as the room freshened their some beautiful memories...



Shlok slowly stepped towards astha and hugged her from back ...and... whispered in her ear...sooo Mrs.astha shlok agnihotri ...kuch yaad aaya?????



A huge smile appeared on her face ...



Shlok:say something na...u remember our first honeymoon night...

Astha was blushing now...



Shlok:say something na please. ...


But all she can say was ...shlokkk and she turned to hug him...she was still blushing now...



Shlok break the hug and lift her face ...

Shlok:look into my eyes ...Am I any stranger...from whom u r feeling shy???...haan tell me?????...



Astha:looked in his eyes..and said sweetly...the whole world is stranger to me except u...u r the one who is my all...and how can I forget that night...when we give our relation a name...name of love...

Suddenly someone knocked at the door...
sir lunch is ready...



shlok OK ...thank u ...u can leave now...

Shlok:stupid hotel staff just spoilt our beautiful moment...he muttered...



A huge smile appeared on astha's face hearing this...




Precap:The guy said ...u have to pay for the insult your husband caused me..
Astha shouted for help...


Edited by meerab... - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: fatima_FM

Part 2
so MR. Shlok agnohotri is cooking 😆
shavi is still stuck u to her demand
and astha is thinking she forget
shavi is whose daughter u have see na

awesome😊

thanks a lot dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved the update thank you, god I wonder what Shlok did that Astha has yo pay for it
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Posted: 11 years ago
Super se uper wala update plzz update soon waiting 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome!!! And thanks for using more english!! 🤗
Precap is worrying though...

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