ArHi SS: Seduction *Thread Four* (COMPLETED)

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sweetydoll32

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Posted: 11 years ago

#651

Superb epilogue dear loved it will definitely miss this story a lot hope to see another masterpiece soon

Edited by sweetydoll32 - 11 years ago

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Milii

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Posted: 11 years ago

#652

Yippieee...getting the epilogue today...🥳 🤪🤪🤪🤪

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celinawalter

@celinawalter

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Posted: 11 years ago

#653

Epilogue
Part-1
what a start to this much awaited Epilogue. loved it.
Aadrita is a beautiful name and so apt. she is so cute. Her POV was so apt and lovely. i loved the little girls maturity level. she appears a little incarnation of Khushi as per her description not only by her looks but also by the thoughts she have.

Anjali and Aman are finally one and i liked the unconditional love of Aman as he continued to support Anjali and brought her out of depression. it was sad to know that Devyani is no more but that was inevitable at some point for Anjali to move on or she would not have left London anytime soon. I just wonder how she, being so inquisitive in nature has let go of any doubt that she had regarding Khushi... then again, Aadrita's change in nature when turning 5, is something related to Khushi's freedom from curse as the child was the only one who would have brought the curse to cure.

Arshi expecting new baby and the curse is finally broken but how??? Again waiting for it to know.
Arnav's business expansion and conversion into AR empire that is a combination of both his dreams and his brother Aakash's dream of continuing the business was a masterstroke in the update. then also Khushi's NGO Aakash to enhance and bring forward the legacy of Lucknowi Handicrafts was another story.

Part-2
i loved the little protagonist Aadrita in this beautiful journey. till the very end you have kept the mystery level to the very high point. loved it the way you narrated this epic tale.
the little Aadrita's selflessness and her maturity level was commendable. the explanation of Dr. Mudler was so apt and the last line's mystery was clear so nicely by the end...

the scene of Aadrita sacrificing herself to the painting instead of her mother was so touching and had ours nerves end freezing with the curiosity. loved it.

with this SS completion you have added another feather to you hat. and as usual it was a brilliant piece of writing.
waiting for your new ss/ff...

till then, cya!!
God bless!!!

Edited by celinawalter - 11 years ago

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vandana.sagar

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#654

Yah...am so happy! Cannot wait!

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-Saumya-

@-Saumya-

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#655

Edited 😳

First of all, your writing is magical <3 The words seem to flow, nothing seems forced. I've been reading your work for some time and safe to say, Seduction has been one of your best writing till now. Right from the concept which is so damn intiguing to the characters, very well written to your words, Seduction has made for one compelling read.

Coming to the epilogue, just like the professor said, it had been so easy and yet no one could guess. Innocence dared, and innocence won. Wonderful story 😳

And just to let you know, I have deleted you from the PM list because I'm just way too busy and I know for the fact that you don't mind PMimg but it's just unfair on my behalf. And well I can always stalk 😛

Edited by -Saumya- - 11 years ago

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nishu_shorna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#656

Yay...New Story is on its way...I'm so happy...now patiently waiting for the epilogue...

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beenish

@beenish248

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Posted: 11 years ago

#657

Wohoo [Dancing] di is starting new ss yayyy :D di eagerly waiting for epilouge di .. :) i hope u are fine di ..

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Arathy-V

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Posted: 11 years ago

#658

Res

Cant wait for the epilogue

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AR_EternalLove

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Posted: 11 years ago

#659

i am really speechless ...it was an amazing ending of the story👏

though i am very sad that the story has ended 😭...but i am happy that i was part of it😃

part 1

the article has rightly described the importance of sheesh mahal but still less than what is known to arnav and khusi who had been bound to it and found each other because of this mahal...😊

arnav had planned great celebration that too on that grand scale..hs business has done good he had home in delhi tooo.and in lucknow too they had new venture in name of akash to train people in arts and handcraft which was under khusi...well she is perfect for it ..had beautiful daughter rightly named aadrita and she is just like her name and she is like her mother and father...born out of true love..

😊

anjali too had great life now..she had her love aman as his husband..who has been immense support for her thrugh tough times and even when she got to know she cant be pregnant ..but now her life will be fulfilled too...😊

she too didnt understood many things about arnav and khusi and thier daughter...and will never know...but their daughter had made thier home ...😊

lavanaya with nk were too there ..and everytme aadrita saw them or anjali and aman she remind of her parents..she knows they are best and her mom is most beautiful in world hehe...😊

khusi came after her checkup...anav was angry as she left alone but her one presence is enough to melt him...gosh i am soo happy she is pregnant and started ageing too..she was normal...arnav was soo happy and they are happy in thier world full of love..😊

i just loved the aadrita and khusi scene where she was dressing her princess and making her ready for celebration...and the moment where arnav took her alone at poolside and was being as usual naughty with her...the surprise he gave her was awesome...she has always wished for it and now there was no curse and she was and will be with him forver...😊

this scene made me hell curious how curse broke...😉

part 2

i must say u gave us a wonderful and emotional flashback and reasoning how the curse was broken forever...😭

aadrita was soo unique and adorable child...she did missed her mom she can see her pain behind her smile...whenever her mom left her she too cried .😭..and finally she got to know the reason ...and accompainied her mom as her father use to do...but still she want her mom to be with her forever...😊

khusi too cried with her as she cant help it...and the little girl was way to brave and smart than her age...she knew everything ..she had seen her father pain and his tears when her mom wasnt around..😭.

i just loved the scene where the cute girl took the decision of offering herself instead of her mom...the way arshi were panicked was justified as they cant let her be captured and khusi cried as they failed to protect her from effect of curse and now her daughter is their as she cant see her father alone crying for mom.😭..aww...sooo emotional...and finaly she offered herself and she dared to painting to take her instead of mom as she had that toy but papa doesnt have mumma...the girl was innocent but daring ..this girl knew their parents love for each other and was ready to sacrifice herself.😭...her innocent and untainted and sacrificing love for her parents finally broke the curse...😳

even aarshi couldnt accept it for sometime though the prof assured it...but finally after three years they beileved it..😊.and arnav did the right thing ..he burned the painting forver turning it to ashes along with curse forever...😃and this was the reason for the grand celebration and of course it should be...😊

they have won their love won and their daughter who was born out of love was the innocence which dared and won finally.😳...the reason of the celebration might not be known to anyone but for arnav and khusi it was the most happiest day of their life 😃 their love 😳

i am crying now...omg its soo beautiful ending ever...😭

thank u for giving this story 😃

Edited by AR_EternalLove - 11 years ago