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Posted: 12 years ago

AWESOME

Ik Aur Badhne Lagey Jo
Ik Dor Bandhne Lagey Jo
Ik Shor Karne Lagey Jo

Do Dil
Ik Chaal Chalne Lagey Jab
Ik Dhaal Dhalne Lagey Jab
Ik Thaal Chakne Lagey Jab

Do Dil
Judne Lagey Lagey Do Dilon Ke Jab Kinaare
Udne Lagey
Ishaqzaade

Arnav and khushi relationship on right path and the best part of the update is that both of them don't want to hurt each other. They are giving so much importance to each other and to their marriage I was really happy while reading their monologues.

khushi you are truly adorable love you bas keh diya the way you console bade papa and your senses were on high alert when arnav stiffen at the mere mention of rishabh and you control situation with ease and give more importance to your husband its really remarkable you don't want to make him unhappy you truly and genuinely cares for arnav and you are ready to let go of your friendship to make your husband comfortable other people in her life can wait but not her husband he is her first priority this shows how wise and mature she is, feeling something for arnav but unable to decipher it because arnav is not sure about his feeling. She wants to be his equal/wife in true sense. His aloofness actually confusing her she wants to let go all her inhibitions and want enjoy her life as MRS. ARNAV SING RAIZADA . arnav's coldness or aloofness stir deep insecurities within her that she is not physically attractive (she is questioning herself after every physical encounter why he is not feeling the same way)and she is not liking this at all.

My heart goes out for her and I literally cried while reading this

No Arnavji. You can not avoid doing things in life because of me. It would be nice if you understand that sooner' she replied practically, ignoring the clench in her heart.

She wants to lead a normal life, like other girls and feel so bad for her poor soul and want to be perfect for him I really feel for khushi and you pen down brilliantly

Arnav an enigma according to his wife, full of flaws and have many insecurities but still ready to change only for his wife this shows he is truly a gentleman, instead of claiming his right as husband or instead of giving into desire and attraction first he wants to realize what exactly he feels for his khushi, this is his way of giving respect to his wife, don't want to rush things specially don't want to use her (though he needs to be bit vocal about it but after all he is arnav who hardly say anything) and it was clearly written in one the previous chapter

"That if someone interested in him he/she has to walk extra miles...

He don't want to rob her innocence and naivety because for him khushi is priceless, the only person who never hurt him and cheery on top he wants to return the favor. Arnavji you rock when he lifted her, giving her immense happiness and pleasure and assuring her that they well enjoy life together

Love the way you pen physical aspect of their relation very well portrayed her confusion and his hesitancy brilliant absolutely brilliant, portrayed each and everything very realistically

Dil Pe Jo Bhi, Bayr Beeta
Dil Pe Jo Bhi Bayr Beeta, Teri Khair Pe Vaar Diya
Jal Jala Kar Jo Bhi Jeeta, Tere Pyaar Pe Haar Diya
Hum Ko Khud Mein Shamil Kar Le, Ab Toh Khud Ke Qabil Kar Le
Rung Tumhare, Rung Jaaye Ge
Sung Tumhare, Sung Jaaye Ge

Things i love the most in this update

laddo ji please don't ever underestimate your beauty and charms ap ko pata nahi arnav ji ap ke ishq mei kitna doobe hain aur unki nazar se dekho ap kitni khubsoorat ho

He better not think of her as a baby and He would have to be practically gay to not feel attracted to her this is EPIC

He valued her most awww so sweet

Feeling of belonging with him another awww

His and her concern for each other love it

she pack food for him awww so sweet

The way he lifted her hayeee

And her blush an other hayeee

Saree is bloody dangerous hahahahah

And last but not the least arshi ka HONEYMOON now I am desperately waiting for the next chapter please update soon

Thanks for the pm

Edited by faree - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh wow so much happened in this one chapter that my mind is just reeling and is full of jumbled up thoughts and my thoughts are all over the place so I apologise in advance if my comment comes across a bit disjointed but to be honest with you it will not be my fault really as it's your wonderful writing with so much depth and full of detail is to be blamed and that's just one of the things I love about this awesome story and let me not stray anymore as I can just go on and on, i should really concentrate on what I want to say.
Khushi is looking after her bare papa really well and I am sure Arnav must be very proud with it as well but he ended up mentioning the dreaded name 'Rishab' and I just paused for a second just like Arnav and the thought that came to my mind was 'yes lovely' now Arnav will have to come out of his comfort zone and once again start to think about strategies and while planning and plotting to keep Khushi out of Rishab's orbit will have to rethink about where is he going with this marriage which he did't believe in the first place but later as I read on I got to know more about his views and I agree with him in not to rush Khushi into consummating the marriage although he wants her and the desires run deep with in his as I think he is a very intense person and is passionate bout the things he believe in... so he really want tread carefully. May be he had some trivial relation in the past purely based on satisfying the basic needs and for him Khushi doest fall in that category... Loved his monologue which made it very clear that Khushi is his life and no matter what she is not going no where, they are together for life, he is committed to her, khushi's happiness is very important to him , he sees her as his equal, he needs her for his own survival just as he needs air...and the guy says he doest believe in marriage..I would say he doest know what he is talking about or someone needs to teach him that what he thinks and feels in his heart of hearts for Khushi is called 'The Ultimate Commitment' and that is what marriage is all about and he has nothing to worry about as he is nothing like his mother.

As soon as the name Rishab was mentioned Arnav became very still and very stiff and because Khushi is so attuned to him she instantly understood that Arnav doest want Rishab to come and she refused to invite him on the pretext of bare papa being not very well and shouldn't be entertaining any guests but for how long she will not see her friend whom she does want to see? She doest know that Arnav doest really want her to go to work and taking her to Dubai is just an excuse to keep them from seeing each other and sooner or later she is going to be cottoned on to this fact and how will she feel then and if she asks Arnav about it what justification he is going to give?


Khushi is love with Arnav and that's the reason she feels this special connection with him, his opinion matters to her, she wants to do what he wants, the reason she is stopping herself from letting him know about him holding her at night just in case he stops and the importance she gives to his happiness but she has not realised it yet. She wants Arnav to look at her as man does to woman hence the dislike for the word 'baby'..would love to see what happens if Arnav calls her 'baby'.

Loved their little trip to 'Chandinichonk' that was just full of the lovely moments and we got to see them as a newly married couple where Khushi probably wore a see through sari and a hardly there blouse to impress her handsome husband and boy was he impressed, she is lucky or should I say unlucky that he did't devour her instead of the sandwich she got HP to pack it for him not that he did't want to.
Awww poor Khushi could't tell him about the stairs and felt insecure about not being normal and I really hope very soon Arnav put her mind at rest and help her get rid of feeling this way forever but I am so glad that he picked her up and just carried her and that's what he should just do if similar situation ever comes again.

Awesome chapter and beautifully written and I am still not sure if I have said everything that I wanted to say.
Please continue soon.




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Posted: 12 years ago
wow, arnav and khushi getting closer. It is understandable that Khushi is not understanding Arnav's behaviour. And knowing Arnav, it is not something he is going to tell Khushi right away. MAybe Khushi will burst and ask him right away before he will se out to clear up her doubts.
Rishab-Khushi relationship is surely cracked but maybe rishab will realise that Khushi is happy and Arnav might accept him.
Waiting too see Arnav and Kushi in Dubai. I am sure the coming updates will be fun...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesommeee update...
totallyyy fantastic...
loved khushi jovial nature n arnav possessive nature...

u dint mail me .. :(
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Posted: 12 years ago
As obvious from the like presses... more than 700. You can evaluate how successfully you are narrating the feelings and bond developing between both Arnav & Khushi.

I enjoyed a lot reading it. You have portrayed the sequences in a very mature but sensitive way. It was not light but it was neither a burden or dry feeling. But actually I felt a lot of depth and concern in attitudes of both.

I feel its a slow but steady realisation of each others presence and importance that has been maintained throughout the update today. Loved it buddy!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Annoy...start the likening ritual soon...itching to read the next update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wonderful chapter... I like the way you are moving with the story. . The slow transition is quite beautiful...
Khushi is long over rishabh but looks like arnav is never the one to let go fast..
So dubai? Wow...I really want them to go...
And the small picnic day was nice... :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update n loving their slow progress in their relation n excited for their dubai trip..
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Posted: 12 years ago
the best way to make a man feel is to make him jealous
like the outcome...DUBAI😃
amazing update
cant wait to read more
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Posted: 12 years ago
This was Super!!!
we are seeing the change Khushi is having, she is thinking of Arnav before herself and its not only because of what her Bade Papa asked for
she is actually wanting to please him, not upset him which is why she redirected the coversation of Rishabh without her Bade Papa becoming suspicious but also reassuring Arnav
Khushi has now been aware that she is sleeping in Arnav's arms for two weeks which she is enjoying ofcourse, and Arnav has an idea she knows but will not open up and let him feel vulnerable
i think its sweet that he wants to be able to fully figure out the relationship and marriage before he takes it into physical levels as he feels that he will be doing wrong to Khushi and it will be like he was using her, and here Khushi is thinking is there anymore to their relationship or not because he hasn't been physical with her

the outing they had together was adorable..Khushi getting him to choose a place he would enjoy rather than going to places for Khushi..also packing his food beforehand because she knows he doesn't eat from the stalls..i felt sorry for Khushi when she couldn't climb them steps and she actually for the first time regretted the limp as she was seeing that she is holding Arnav back BUT he does such a cute thing and lifts her up, where both felt alot due to the proximity

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