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meerab

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Superb
Loved it dear
U r just awesome

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Snehal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: avi_ashi
very nyc dear.. keep it up.. do write more 😳

Originally posted by: ..mandy..
Good one Snehal 👍🏼 concept of the thread is nice.

Originally posted by: SHINYSHREYA
nice os

Originally posted by: riddzykhanmalik
Nice os...very nice...keep it up...

Originally posted by: shoniharsha12
Great idea..
Concept is gud and so i will be a stalker :)

Originally posted by: tabby999
waiting ..
congrats for the start ...

Originally posted by: luv_rk
Lovely story

Originally posted by: ArshiAms
awesome yaar loved it
do write more
keep up

Originally posted by: meerab147
Superb
Loved it dear
U r just awesome

THANK YOU ALL FOR SUCH AN SUPPORT

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Chitra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

fabulous thread👏⭐️ !! lovely os sneha😃 !! tfs for pm dear😳

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Snehal

@Vivirti_Suvian2

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Chitrarocking
fabulous thread👏⭐️ !! lovely os sneha😃 !! tfs for pm dear😳

Originally posted by: goolab
so nice

thank you so much for feedback

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aishwarya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

awesomeee onee👏

well-written⭐️

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Neelum.drashti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Really interesting concept👍🏼

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Snehal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: aishu3003
awesomeee onee👏
well-written⭐️

Originally posted by: Neelum.drashti

Really interesting concept👍🏼

thank you

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Snehal

@Vivirti_Suvian2

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Ek ladki jo kisi ladke se be-imtehaan pyaar karti thi par woh banda use humesha lightlly leta tha that she is just a girlfriend not an future life partner and he neglect her aur jab pyaar proof karne ki baari aayi tab usne apne hath khade kar diya that
"I LOVE YOU BOUT ISHQ WALA LOVE NOT WITH YOU"

aur woh ladki bina kuch kahe waha se nikal jati hai aur usi din sham ko woh ladka us ladki se phirse milta hai and he is pretainning jaise ke kuch hua hi nahi aur tabhi us ladke ko kahti hai
"I LOVE YOU FOR THE LAST TIME I SAY IT TO YOU AND THANKS FOR EVERYTHING AND HOPE YOU WILL GET YOUR HOPEFULL LIFE PARTNER"

Aur dusare din woh ladki kisi dusare sheher rahne chali jaati hai aur woh ladka uske jaane ke 2-3 haftoon baad uske ahsaas ko samjhta hai par woh ladki kaha gayi yeah kisi ko nahi pata aur shayad us ladki ko pata tha ke woh ladka use dhundhte hue us tak pohochne ki koshish karega aur isi liye usne apne ghar ke neighbour ko ek chithhi di thi aur kaha tha ke JIS DIN EK LADKA USE DHUNDHTE HUE MERI JANKARI MANGE TOH YEAH LETTER DE DENA us letter mein likha tha

TUMSE MILLI CHAHAT KA AHSAAS HUA
TUMSE JUDA HUE TOH TUMHE CHAHAT KA AHSAAS HOGA
AUR YEAH CHITHHI JAB TUM PADHOGE TAB SHAYAD MEIN IS SHEHER MEIN NA HOOONN AUR SHAYAD HUMESHA KE LIYE HI . . . . .
BYEEE HOPE YOU WILL GET YOUR LOVE
HMMM YOUR LIFE PARTNER SOON

and then that boy just missing that moments that spend with her

" JAB KOI PAAS HOTA HAI TAB USKE HONE KA AHSAAS NAHI HOTA JAB WOH HUMSE BOHOT DUR CHALA JATA HAI TOH AHSAAS HOTA HAI "

previous Story :- http://www.urlremoved/forum_posts.asp?TID=3828235

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Well written Snehal 👍🏼 Its sad but true that u never realise the value of a person when they r present in ur life. Only their absence does

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Snehal

@Vivirti_Suvian2

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: ..mandy..
Well written Snehal 👍🏼 Its sad but true that u never realise the value of a person when they r present in ur life. Only their absence does

ya actually