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Arshaya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#201

Its an awsme story.
ArIya married!
Me dancing!
Dhating dhating dhating dhating dhating dhating dhating naach! 😃
Thank god itz not Arakshi.
I would have stangled sakshi to death! 🤣

Oopss.
Maine toh apne apko introduce hi nahi kia!
Well... I'm Arshaya.
Nyc to meet... Sry chat with you 😛

Thnx mere jese idiot ki comment padne keliye

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henna33

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Posted: 11 years ago

#202

Waiting for next part
Please gve more Ariya momentsd

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archi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#203

Originally posted by: AriyaBestLover
Its an awsme story.
ArIya married!
Me dancing!
Dhating dhating dhating dhating dhating dhating dhating naach! 😃
Thank god itz not Arakshi.
I would have stangled sakshi to death! 🤣

Oopss.
Maine toh apne apko introduce hi nahi kia!
Well... I'm Arshaya.
Nyc to meet... Sry chat with you 😛

Thnx mere jese idiot ki comment padne keliye

nice 2 meet with u dr 😊

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abhya/akanksha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#204

Oh my hunny bunny koi update milengii ya nahi...??????

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srividhya68

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Posted: 11 years ago

#205

nice one..
loved it..
continue soon..
thanks for pm..

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archi

@hunny1993

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Posted: 11 years ago

#206

Originally posted by: Aks13
Oh my hunny bunny koi update milengii ya nahi...??????

Friday raat ki andhere me shayad update de sakta hu 😆

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archi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#207

thx 2 all of the 55 readers who like the previous part .& ofcourse special thx 2 those who did comments .now time 4 nxt part .hope u all will njoy it ...😊

PART -31

Etf r discussing about the case in conference room .

Suddenly they heard a voice 4m door step .

Man :may i come in ???

Everyone turned their head & found akash was standing there .

[Guyz ,4 akash role i have chosen mudit nayer ]

Rathod :harre akash tum ??? yaha ???😕

Akash :kyu ,mein yaha nehi aa sakti kya ???😉

Rathod :nehi nehi aisa baat nehi hai .bas achanak se aye ...

Akash :nehi yr .achanak se nehi .kamk silsile me hi ayi hu .

Sameer :kam ???? kaisa kam ???

Akash :commissioner sir ne aj subhe phone kark mr. malhotra ki case k bare me batayi .wo chahte hai mein v tum logo ko iss case me assist karu .kyu ki mr. malhotra chahti hai ye case aj ki aj hi lipte .jahatak etf me man power kam hai that's why hum log v tumare help kar sakte hai .

Arjun :jitna tak mujhe pata hai akash u r in national crime investigation department to tum ye sab case me involve hokar case solving me hamari majat kar paogi ???

Akash :arjun jitna mujhe pata hai u were in security department .but etf me akar v tumne apna kabiliyat ka proof di hai .kya tab tumse aisa sawal koi pucha tha???? [he smirked]

Rathod could realise if he don't stop the topic here it will take a serious situation

Rathod :tum dono ab bas karo .aur rawte agar akash ye case me hamari majat karegi to tumari problem kya hai ??? aur ye faisla commissioner sir ki hai .so we have 2 follow .

Arjun didn't say anything & left 4m there .

Everyone can understand something is fishy among the three seniors .

Akash (turning 2 sakshi):hye sakshi ...how r u ????😊

Sakshi :yah ..i m fine akash 😊

Then akash greeted others .

Rathod :akash tum meri cabin me ao .mein tumhe case ka details aur hamare plan xplain karta hu .

Akash :ok .

Rathod & akash left .

After their leaving everyone turned 2 sakshi with smirk

Sakshi gave a what look

Sakshi :tum log mujhe aise kyu dikh rahe ho ???😕

Shree (in teasing tone):chakkar kya hai sakshi ????

Sakshi :kaisa chakkar ???😕

Ankita :aha ...itni voli v maat bano .hume sab pata hai .

Sakshi :kya pata hai ???

Ayesha :ki tumari aur akash k bich kya chal raha hai ...😉

Sakshi :tum log ye kya keh rahe ho meri kuch samaj me nehi aa raha hai ????

Liza :achsa ji ...uss din party me dono ek saath dance ki ,aj itne logo ko chodkar akash sir ne sabse pehle tumare bare me pucha .kyu ???

Sakshi :aisa kuch v nehi hai jaisa tum log samaj rahe ho ...

Chotu :kya re sakshi ...hum sab to tumare dost hai .hamse kya chupana ...

Sakshi :guyz aisa kuch v nehi hai ...

but everyone continuing their teasing .so riya interpreted

Riya :guyz ab bas v karo ...kyu bechari ko itna tang kar rahi ho ...

Shree :kya riya ab tu iska side le rahi hai ...

Riya :harre baba ...mein to bas ye kehna chahti hu ki sakshi se ye pucho ki wo unk saath date me kab janewale hai 😉

Sakshi's jaw dropped 😲

actually riya not supporting her .she also teasing her .

Sakshi (with fake angry tone):riya ki bachchi !!!

Riya started running & sakshi running bhind her

Everyone laughing 2 c their act

In rathod's cabin ...

Rathod :i m sry akash arjun ki rude bhave k liye .

Akash :its ok sameer .i can understand .

Rathod :roshni ki death k baad se hi wo aisa baan chuka hai .u know na ...

Akash :its ok sameer .mujhe bura nehi laga .balki itne din baad arjun ne mujhse baat ki its enough 4 me .

Rathod :par ek achsi khabar v hi ...

Akash :kya ???

Rathod :arjun is in luv again ...

Akash :what !!! r u serious ????😲

Rathod :yah !!!😊

Akash :kaun hai wo ???

Rathod :its riya

Akash :wow !!! its amazing !!! Kya arjun ne usse propose kiya ???

Rathod :shayad nehi ...un dono me ek misunderstanding ho gayi jisk wajah se riya usse naraz hai .

Then rathod eloborate everything about the party incident .

Akash :hmmm .galti to arjun ki hi thi .fir arjun ne maafi to mangi hogi .kya riya usse maaf nehi kiya ???

Rathod :nehi yr .balki usse naraz hai .ek dusre se 1 week tak bate nehi kar rahe hai .

Akash :fir to hume kuch karna chahiye .kyu na un dono ko ek karne ki ek koshish kar sakte hai ...😉

Rathod :kaise ???

Akash xplain him his plan

Rathod :wow yr !!!! shayad ye plan kam karega ...

Akash just gave him a thumsup

on the other hand ...

Riya went 2 arjun's cabin as everyone busy with their works

Arjun was standing at the window

Riya came & put her hand on his shoulder

Riya :kya baat hai arjun sir ???? ap aise wahase kyu chale aye ????

Arjun :bas aise hi ...(still looking out)

Riya :to ap mujse share nehi karma chahte ...

Arjun (turning his face 2 her ):no riya aisa baat nehi hai .mein bas iss topic k upar koi baat nehi karna chahti .

Riya easily can understand at this moment it is impossible 2 dig out anything .so she ignored the matter .

Riya :wo sab chodiye .mein yaha thoda sa mauka milte hi daudkar apk pas chali ayi .aur ap muuh ladka kar khade hai ...(making a puppy face)

Arjun smiled & pulled riya 2 him

Arjun :to mein v kaha iss mauk ko haat se jane dunga ...😉

Riya blashed at his complement .

Riya(in shy voice):meine kav socha nehi tha ap itne naughty ho ...😳

Arjun :hmmm .aur tumhe pata hai pata hai iss waqt mera naughtyness 7 v asmaan par hai ...😉

Saying this he placed his lips on her .both kissed each other passionately .

nxt day morning ...

Rathod :guyz humne party me jane ka sare planning karli hai .hum waha couples bankar jayenge .isk jariye hum group group bankar waha rahenge .investigation me asani hogi .back up me akash ki under ki kuch officers rahegi .

Arjun :kya mein jaan sakti hu ye couple wala plan kiska hai ???

Rathod & akash looked at each other .akash signaled something & rathod nodded

Rathod :ofcourse meri rawte bcoz i m the etf chief .

Arjun :ha .par yaha NCB ki chief v to baithi hai .

Rathod :rawte iss waqt mein tumare sath faltu k behes me nehi jana chahti .😡
Its final we will go there as couples .me-ayesha (hearing this ayesha blashed),arjun -riya(as usual dono k maan me laddu fut raha hai but couldn't show) ,shree -liza(glared at each other ) ,Chotu -ankita (chotu is in cloud 9 & ankita's jaw dropped)...

Sakshi :aur mein ????

B4 rathod say anything akash spoke up -

Akash :ofcourse mein aur ap ...😉

Sakshi get shock of 600 volts hearing this & others chuckled seeing her condition

Rathod :so its final .hum log party me apne apne partner k sath jayenge .waha par hi milenge .filhaal k liye sab log apne apne ghar jao aur 7pm se pehle malhotra mansion pouch jana

So everyone going 2 leave

Rathod went 2 ayesha

Rathod : ayesha chalo mein tumhe drop kar deti hu

Ayesha :ok sir .😳

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Shree :ri yaha par khadi kyu hai ??? niche chotu hamare liye khade hai .chal ...

Riya :wo ...shree ...tum log jao .mujhe thoda kam hai .badme chali jaungi .

Shree :ok .

So shree ,chotu & liza left

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Akash came 2 sakshi

Akash :sakshi ji chaliye mein apko ghar chod deti hu

Sakshi :no thx .mein chali jaungi .

Akash :plz sakshi mana maat kijiye .

Sakshi :ok .chaliye ...

so they too left

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Arjun just going 2 leave but felt one hand holding him

Arjun smiled & turned

Arjun :so tum un logo k sath gaye nehi .

Riya :nehi .mujhe apk sath jani hai .😊

Arjun nodded & both left 2gether .

PRECAP : etf in party .etf romance .a big fire incident in malhotra mansion

Guyz plz leave ur opinions .don't forget 2 hit the like button .i know this part was quite small . Nxt part will b posted soon.

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Anika_VR

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Posted: 11 years ago

#208

*unres*
wow...
It was a superb and awesome update.
Loved it.
So,Akash ki entry hogayi...
Lovely...
Akash going to help ETF...
Aate hi Akash aur Arjun ke beech small nokjhok hogayi...
Others felt something fishy in between the three seniors.
Aate hi Sakshi se uski halchal puchlia.
Not bad.
Now,everybody else teasing her.
Akash and Sameer bhai make a plan to make Arjun confess his feleings to Riya.
So,shaam ko sab Malhotra mansion mein milenge for the party...
So,party mein as couples' jarahe hai.
Raesha,Shriza,Chotu-Ankita,Ariya and Akash-Sakshi...
Wow...
Loved the Ariya moments...
Continue sooonish... :)
Precap is interesting,as well as scary...
Jaldi jaldi next update dena.

Edited by zebbie0504 - 11 years ago