A Brief synopsis

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Posted: 11 years ago

I once started this fanfic but absolutely forgot to update it and now the topic is closed. So i am writing A brief story of how i planned it. I no means want to offend the history so history lovers DO NOT BOTHER TO READ IT.

Here is the link of original fanfic

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3342050/ff-time-travel

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Due to lack of time i have abandoned writing fanfictions or coming to forum but as i loved this story very much i want to atleast write its superficial synopsis.

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OK the story was like this.

All the modern protagonists except prof. and his wife time travels in a machine built by the prof. and enters in 4 century A.D. There they become separate sayali, peter and riddhi together and piyali, ranveer and yug together. Sayali, peter and riddhi encounters dhanananda and magadhans while piyali, ranveer and yug encounter chandragupta and chanakya. Due to the effect of machine the ancient one could not recognise the resemblance of face and they could understand each other's language.

Slowly and Slowly Piyal and chandu come close much annoyance to chankya though, Dhuru notices it and feels highly jealous. While piyali was just modest chandu feels really passionate love for her and tries to resist it for his aim and for dhuru. It was perfectly evident to everyone that chandu has strongly started liking her, ranveer feels highly jealous and proposes piyali. While she was extremely shocked and surprised, she neither refused not accepted the proposal. One day dhanu attacks and piyali and chandu are forced to run away together alone while other gang goes with chanakya and shashanka. With spending more time chandu and piyali come more close and finally on one cold night accept each other with body and soul. Though next day she had to choose to either stay or go back.She remembers chanakya's words(by the way he had realised that she was his daughter as he saw her and her father's picture in a locket who was uncanny of his appearance.) and decides to leave. While chandu asking her to stay she reminds her of his duty and returns to gang. She accepts ranveer's proposal. In night a warmhole appears and chandu comes, he saw they were leaving and he knowing chanakya won't allow them to be together, he gives a goodbye kiss to her in front of everyone, chanakya was seeing all this behind from a tree(chandu did not realize he was there, everyone was shocked to their chilly spine), she gladly bows and leaves with everyone. Five years later, ranveer and piyali are married and she bore chandu's daughter, ranveer was fine with it and they at first married because she was pregnant. She wanted chandu to meet his daughter and puts this wish in front of ranveer playfully.Ranveer again intentionally time travels with his daughter again and goes to chandu's court with great difficulty. Chandu was surprised and shocked to see him at first but then seeing his daughter he at first realised she was his. He touched her, kissed and then asked to leave, he enquired about piyali's health and confessed ranveer he never forgot her, he gave a huge neckless to ranveer as his memory and asked him never to visit him again as it will give him more pain. He was also happy that piya was happily married with ranveer. He returns to modern world with his daughter.

pLEASE dO NOT take fanfic seriously and abuse me for destroying history. I have done it before. 😆😆

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THis is a scene that i most dearly wanted to write. 😭

piya when first meets chandu.

piya, yug and ranveer are lost.

ranveer-where are we?

yug-seems like...like...ah...maybe 3 or 4 centure B.C.

piya-what?😲 how, why are we here? that machine worked?

ranveer- i think so... in all cool attitude.

piya-how can you act so cool? we are in great danger.

ranveer-that is your father's fault

piya-that is your fault, you suggest to try that machine.

ranveer-oh come on, who could have thought such a machine works.

piya-and we are struck here, i need to go back.

yug-dears, we are forgetting something

piya-what?

yug-idiots,where are saya, peter and riddhi?

ranveer-mare gaye, kaash bebe yahan hote.

piya-for what ?

ranveer-ek bodyguard toh hota.

suddenly he saw a soldier beating a man.

man-shama kar dijiye, shama kar dijiye...

soldier-samanta bhadrashaal ke agya ke awhelna ke hain tune murkh, dand toh awashya milega.

yug thinks-bhadrashaal???? 😕oh god, kahin hum...

piya-hey you stop it...she shouted.

soldier looks at her. He was amused seeing them and their weird clothes.

soldier-tum log kaun hon, ye kaise vichitra vastra pehen rakhe hain.

piya-ah ...weird clothes? do i look weird to you ran?

ran-all the time my dear..

piya went straight to the soldier angrily...

piya-stop it, why are you beating an old man? its against rules...

soldier-huh...tum kaun ho? awashya he koi bhedya hoge,chalo mere saath samanta ke pass.he grabbed her shoulder tightly.

ran-hey...leave her...😡

yug-ran calm down.

ran punched his face but ended up injuring his own hand.

ran-aw..aw..aw...my hand.

yug-i told you to calm down, these soldiers are 1000 times stronger than us.

piya-listen, leave this old man or i will complain to the police.

soldier thinks-huh ye stri kya bol rahe hain, muzhe in sabhi ko abhe samanta ke paas le jaana chahiye.

he grabbed piya's hands and when she resisted he slapped her face.

suddenly two gentleman with swords came and slapped that soldier.

chandu-ek stri pe haath uthate hue lajja nahin tujhe.

they all started fighting, the three friends were very impressed with those two's bravery.

the soldiers ran away in fear.

chandu turned back and his eyes met piya's. 😳

piya was dusky but her eyes were captivating.piya was highly impressed with chandu and he started at her for one minute.

shanky-chandu, ye vichitra manushya kaun hain.

chandu-han,,ah...ah...inhe se he puchte hain.

chandu-aap sab theek hain?

ran-awesome dude, you were brilliant.

shanky-ye tumhe dudh kyun keh raha hain?

chandu-kya pata mera toh varna bhe saawala hain, ye...

piya-nice to meet you.

chandu-huh...ah...hmmm...humein bhe aapse milkar accha laga.

piya-you were so brave, just like a gladiator.

chandu-gometeshwar?////////
yug started talking to him in sanskrit and chandu took them to acharya.

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My God Di !! That Was Fantastic ! Dude Aur Dudh ! Please Do Try To Visit Us Sometime, nds Try To Continue This FF !!

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