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Posted: 11 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: poorni_vishali

awesome update yr loved the way u showed kria character nd rey still loves taani superb update soon


thanx dear..
i am glad that u all like kria character..

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Posted: 11 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: Bista-anzana

I dun think dt nw i can w8 for de updte..
Prolouge is soo emotional..
Jo v khaungi kaam hoga...
Plzzz updte soon


thanx dear..
and the comment was so sweet..
will update soon..

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Posted: 11 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: navu

wow!!!!!!

awesome prologue...!!!!
thanks for this...now it means i will watch D3 with my taarey and only taarey through your FF...!!!!
wow..still rey loves only taani <3 <3
start it soon dear...!!!
waiting for the first chapter!!!!


thanx dear..
i am glad that to knw that u are comparing my ff with original d3..
they ruin our taarey but i wont...
will update soon..

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Posted: 11 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: Natasha.

Wonderful prologue
Aww I'm so happy that Rey love Taani and no one else :)
Taani is all broken and Rey can sense that something is wrong with her
Swayam broken down and tell the gang and Rey about Taani situation was heartbreaking


thanx dear..
rey will always love taani..

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Posted: 11 years ago
#85

CHAPTER 1

Rey was sitting in fire exist... tears are there in his eyes but they are not coming out.. becoz tears also knw that by coming out from his eyes they also cant reduce his pain... they don't have the courage to wipe his pain with them.. since this is not his pain that he is suffering from.. its pain of his love.. till now he was living with his pain which was bearable for him and only thing which kept him alive that his taani is happy with someone who will take care of her and living her life.. which some how reduced his pain... but now that reason was also not there... his love is not happy.. the person whom he believed that he will keep her happy also left her... he want to kill that person whom he trusted and gave most precious thing of his life... Vishesh also did the same mistake which once he did.. but the only difference is.. that time the game is played by rey but this time destiny played the game and the common thing is that in both the time the person who is suffering the most is taani..

FLASHBACK

Rey: vishesh ne kya kiya...

Swayam: usne taani ka sath chod diya...

Gang: what??

Rey's grip on swayam hand become strong.. he was shocked and angry..

Swayam; wo taani ko akele chodkar chala gaya... meri behen phir akeli ho gayi... phir se todh dala usse..

Rey's hand who was holding swayam shoulder immediately left him.. and his hand turned into fist.. anger is clearly visible on his face... He got up with a jolt and tuned to go but swayam hold his hand..

Swayam: kaha ja raha hai..

Rey: mai usse choduga nahi... maine bola tha ki taani ko kabhi bhi taklif di to mere se bura aur koi nahi hoga.. usne mera bharosa toda.. meri taani ko toda mai usse nahi chodunga..

Swayam: tu kuch nahi kar sakta... kyuki wo hume bhi chod ke chala gaya hai..

Rey: mai usse kahi se bhi dhund ke laoga... usse ye batane ki usne apni zindagi ki sabse badi galti ki hai taani ko taklif de kar raha..

Swayam stand up and turned rey toward himself hodling his arm..

Swayam; tu samaj kyu nahi raha..

Rey: mai kya samjhu.. (holding swayam arm)

Sharon came behind swayam and replied...

Sharon: yahi ki vishesh is no more...

Listening this rey left swayam shoulder... every thing in front of him disappeared and his mind went blanked.. the only word which was ringing in his ear the words spoken by Sharon.. which shacked him.. he is not able to register her words.. everybody present there were shocked and tears didn't stop to come out from there eyes.. image of taani running in everybody mind except kria.. tears were there in her eyes also but not for taani as she don't knw her much but for her best friend who is standing like a lifeless body... she went near him and placed her hand on his shoulder but he didn't move or his body react.. gathering courage she called him.. listening kria voice all of them came out of shock.. swaron who were crying holding each other turned toward voice... but kria voice didn't affect him or didn't reach in his ear.. everyone present there can see the broken rey but the only person who can feel his pain was kria.. becoz she also knw that we can ignore our hurt but cant able to see our loved one in pain which she was seeing from past few years and now also..

Sharon came forward and once again called him...rey came in his sense but he is not able to register what going in front of him... everything in front of him is appearing as blur image sine tears are not giving him clear view which was formed in his eyes and are coming out also to clear everything..

He just went from there... swayam want to go behind him but kria stopped him...

Kria: swayam kuch taklif akele hi sehni padti hai..

FLASHBACK END

Rey was sitting engrossed in his thought... when someone came and sit beside him... rey didn't turn to see that person becoz he knw who that person is.. there I s sileince forsome time which was broken by kria..

Kria: aap thik ho..

Rey: aapne pain ko to maine ignore kar diya par taani ka pain nahi dekh paunga..

Kria: rey pls aap ko strong ban na hoga..

Rey: aaj tak strong banker tha kyuki kahi na kahi pata tha meri taani khush hai..

Kria: aapki taani ke liye aab aapko strong hona hoga.. usse abhi apno ki jarurat hai..

Rey: mai usse pain mai nahi dekh sakta..

Kria: to kya aapne aap ko taklif nahi den eke liye uski taklif ko nahi dur karege..

Rey: matlab..

Kria: abhi aap ke love ka test hai.. aap taani ko usske pain se nikalo...

Rey: ha kria tum sahi keh rahi ho.. mujhe nahi pata kaise par mai taani ko phir se akele nahi choduga..

Kria: to yaha kya kar rahe hai.. chal liye taani ke pas.. wo swayam ke ghar mai hai..

Rey: thnx kria..

Kria: rey dosti mai no thnx no sorry..

Rey: sorry..

Kria gave angry glare to rey.. after some time both broke in laughter with tears in there eyes.. and went to rehearsal hall..

REHEARSAL HALL

All gang member sitting in rh with tensed face.. swaron were sitting beside each other.. just then kriayansh enter... all of them turn there eyes toward rey.. rey came toward swayam and sat in front of him..

rey; tu isliye itne tension mai tha itne dino se..

swayam: mai the hurt nahi karna chahata tha.. mujhe pata hai tu ab bhi taani se pyaar karta hai.. aur taani dard bardast nahi kar pata..

rey: tujhe kya lagta hai tera dost itna weak hai..

swayam: sorry yaar...

rey: its ok ab bata taani kaise..

swayam: wo bikul badal gaye hai chup ho gayi hai... isliye mai usse jodhpur se yaha lekar aaya hu.. vishesh ki death ne ussse to diya.. vishesh ki death ka reason..(cut by rey)

rey: nahi swayam.. mujhe vishash ki death ka reason taani hi batayegi..

swayam: par wo vishesh ki death ke bad uske bare mai baat nahi karti.. wo uske topic ko change kar deti.. wo bhag rahi hai reality se.. wo kissi se aapna dard share nahi kar rahi..

rey: mujhse karegi.. bas tu bharosa rakh..

swayam: thanx rey..

kria: swayam dosti mai no thanx and sorry.. rey aapne dost ke liye hi to kar raha hai...(in low voice so that rey can hear) aur aapne pyaar ke liye..

rey turn to see kria who smile and rey also pass smile to her... Gang also came forward for taani..

vicky: hum bhi tum log ke sath hai..

simmi: yup we will also bring our taani back..

gang: ha hum bhi tumhare sath hai..

Sharon: to wait kis bat ki chalo swayam ke ghar taani se mile..

Swayam: ok.. par koi usse vishesh ke bare mai nahi puchega..

Gang: ok boss...

And they went to meet taani..

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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
soo nice strt dr
thnks 4 pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
Awesome update
vishesh ki death ho gayi
feeling bad for taarey
kriya is sweet frnd
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
omg...vishesh is mo more...i thought usne dhoka diya hoga but...

ab rey taani ko kese sambhalega...

waiting for next update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89
Wow super update
Rey anger I love it
Vishesh is no more... Sad News
Rey try bring old Taani back yupee ab maja ayega
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90
nice update
so as i thought vishesh was dead
challo koi ni
the way kria helps rey as a good
friend that was really appreciable
becoz it was difficult to help whom
we love
eagerly waiting 4 nxt update
i want that taani still loves rey
i mean vishesh k saath just only
friends 😊😊
update soon dear

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