~Mitwa~........(rajeev amna)

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mehreen/sadaf

@fakhra

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Posted: 18 years ago

hello frnds me back wid my neww story of Rajeev n Amna....."MITWA"........N I REALLY REALLY HOPE that u all like it................

Intro of characters.....

Rajeev Khandelwal as "Armaan Garewal"

Amna Shariif as "Iman Malhotra"

Chaitaniya Chaudhry as "Akshat Garewal"

Surveen Chwala as"Kasak Sinha"

More chracters introduces as story goes on..............

Promo 1...

A lady is sitting outside the room of hospital .....Nurse comes there..

Nurse:M'am wo aap ko bula rahay hain.....

Lady:ji........

(She goes there...)

A man is laying on bed n breathing his last.....

Lady:Anurag bhai shab........ye sub...

Anurag:Veena bhabhi.....baas aab zindagi nahi bachi.......

Veena:nahi ayse baatien maat karaye.....

Anurag:baas bhabhi......aab waqt ijazat nahi dayta........aab jaane ka waqt a gaya hai per jaatay huey kia aap mera aik wada pora kare ge.......

Veena:kaysa wada bhai shab.......

Anurag:aap meri beti ka dhiyan rakhe ge......ose akyla nahi choray ge......prerna k jaane k baad koi nahi hai us ka aab......plzz........wa..........

Veena:bhai shab......mai wada wada kerte hoon...........k aaj se wo hamare saath rahe ge.....

Anurag:th.............tha.................thanx............. .......(ne he died)...............

Veena:bhai shab........bhai shab..............(she crys.........)

So,frnds that my new story hope u all enjoys it.............next promo will post soon............

plz do comments

me waiting......

with luv

tc all

Mehreen........😳

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group_1223

@group_1223

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Posted: 18 years ago

hey...i m soo glad ur baq.....n dat 2 wid a bang......n i m da 1st one 2 comment on ths story...feelin so psecial...hehehehehehe...newayz...da promo was jus awesome....totally engaging.....so plz continue sooooooooooonnnnnnnn......will b waitin eagerly 4 da nxt part....jaldi se update karna plz..... 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 v

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group_1223

@group_1223

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Posted: 18 years ago

4got 2 say sumthin.....u noe da title....its soo gud....reminds me of kank...n da song....so nice selection 4 dat... 😃

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Khyati

@krazy_khyati

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Posted: 18 years ago

Mehreen di!!!!!
Story sounds great!!! Continue soon.......... 👏 👏 👏

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mehreen/sadaf

@fakhra

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Posted: 18 years ago

thanks my frnds.........

Promo 2
Camera focus on a large Mansion......then we see 4 children who are playing........
Child1:bhaia mai ye khel khel kay bore ho chuka hoon(said in his childish voice)
Child2:nahi per hum yehi khelay gain.....tum roz yunhi kerte ho.....
Child1:nahi ........nahi nahi.....mujhe nahi khelna ye sub................(he crys).....
Child3:(a girl):akshat na ro na plzz.....(wid her childish voice),,,,,plzzz na ro......

Some one comes there.....
Person:kia baat akshat kyun ro rahe ho beta.......

Akshat:(child1) mama mujho khel nahi khelna............

Mama:theek hai beta.....aap meray saath chalo...ok......inhey khelnay do......

Child4(to child 2):armaan tum bohot dirty bachay hoooooooo......tumne akshat ko rolaya.........

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Ye to tha 2nd promo........baas es k baad 1st part aye ga......hope u all like it............
plz do comments..
tc
Mehreen.....

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 18 years ago

mehru yaar fantastic..mujhe yeh story behad pasand aayi... tum mujhe yrh bata tujhe itne zabardast ideas milthe kahaan se hain yaar...me tho liked it very very very very very very very very very much... bohat hi mast , bindaas , jhakkas part tha..... 👏
ab jaldi se part bhi post kar de..me waiting for the next part eagerly... 😃

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KulBin

@KulBin

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Posted: 18 years ago

hila mehreen aapne new FF start kiya aur muje pata bhi nahi tha..... 😕
wow seems to be a good one..... 😉
nice promos..... 👏
do cont soon.... 😊 waiting for the 1st part.... 😃