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Posted: 18 years ago
#21
chalo here da next part of Story......

Armaan leaves 4 office.....while Imaan goes in her room......


Imaan book parhne lagte hai tabhe os ka mob ring kerta hai...

Imaan:aab kia hai Armaan...

Armaan:kia Imaan.....ayse he yaar.....

Imaan:bolo kia baat hai...

Armaan:Imaan mai soch raha tha k mai aaj office na jao/......wase bhi office mai loog to haina sambhal lay ge.....

Imaan:koi zarorat nahi......smjhay....baas jaldi a jaana.........(she pauses n then spak).....Armaan tum phir se drive kertre hue baat ker rahe ho......

Armaan:haan to.....

Imaan:abhi aur ese waqt rakho...chalo ....

Armaan:kia Imaan......tum roz yunhi kerte hoo

Imaan:aur tum roz maan layte ho naaaaa.........to plzzzzzzzzz........

Armaan:acha theek hai theek hai....rakhta hoon......tum khiyal rakhna...

Imaan:uff........kitne boring baate karte ho tum Armaannnn.....bye

Armaan:bye.....

They disconnects......
Imaan fone rakh k nichay jaate hai......Veena nichay hote hai.....
Imaan:aunty aki nahi utha abhi tuk........

Veena:nahi beta tum to jaante ho...kitne dayr mai uthta hai.....

A girl comes there......
Girl:ye larka to kabhi nahi badlay ga....

Imaan:kasak tum.....

They hug.....

Imaan:haan sahi kaha.....dekho abhi tuk so raha hai........

Kasak:mai dekhte hoon ose.....

Imaan:theek hai...

Kasak Akshat k room mai jaate hai.....



Kasak:oh to Mr.abhi tuk soo rahe hain......ay aki......aki.....uthooo......

Akshat:kasak na karo na plzzzzz...

Kasak:uth jaoo chup ker k werna Imaan ko bata doon gi k......

Akshat:k.....kia........

Kasak:k kaal college mai......

Before completing kasak word akshat wake up.....

Akshat:shut up yaar.......itna chilq rahe ho.....

Kasak:chila nahi rahe tumhey utha rahe hoon.....smjhay.....chalo jaldi college k liye late ho gaye hain already......

Akshat:theek hai theek hai......jao mai aata hoon.....

Kasak:ok.....

Akshat:aur haan aapna moo kholne ki zarorat nahi smjhe........

Kasak:hmmm.....bye.....

....................
In evening.....

Armaan ghar aata hai...

Armaan:mama......mama/////

Veeena:a gaye beta...

Armaan:ji .....mama Imaan kaha hai.....

Veena :apnay room mai hai.....

Armaan:ji.....
.......... Armaan Imaan k room mai jaata hai ......Imaan tiyar ho rahe hote hai......

Imaan:Armaan ye kia bina knock kiye......aik larke k room mai.....

Armaan:larki kaha hai larki...... 😆 ........mujhe to koi larki kamre mai dikhaye nahi day rahe......

Imaan:shut up Armaan.....

Armaan:(smiles)acha chalo jaldi mai car mai intezar ker raha hoon.....

Imaan:hmmm tum chalo mai aye......

Armaan:jaldi yaar...

Imaan:jaooo gay to aooo gi na.....idiot...

Armaan:hmmmmm......

Imaan nichay car mai aate hai......luking beautiful........Armaan ose dekhta rehta hai......(hmmm kuck kuch hota hai......)

Imaan:ayse kia dekh rahe ho...

Armaan:hmmm...wo.....w..wo kuch nahi.....chalay...

Imaan:chalo......

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At mall.....
Armaan:chaliye chalte hain apnay apnay raste.....

Imaan:hmmm.....wohi ose tarha.....tum us taraf jaooooo(pointing toward galz section..........)aur mai os staraf......(toward boyzzzzz......)

Armaan:hmmm......chalo.....

Armaan aur Imaan ne aaj tuk jitnay shopping ki hai aik dosre k liye ki.....Armaan hamseha Imaan ki aur Imaan hamesha Armaan ki kerte hai......

......
Armaan:hmm......kia loon os k liye.....(selecting dresses.....).....
Man comes there.....
Man:sir may i help u.....

Armaan:ha...hmmm.....no thanx.....

Man:ok sir.....

(He goes)
Armaan:hmm ye theek hai......


(dress 4 Imaan......)
Here Imaan also select dress 4 Armaan.....


......
Armaan:hmmm to shopping ho gaye......

Imaan:hmmmmm........chalay.....

Armaan:haa chalo...

Imaan:Armaan ice-cream khate hue chalte hain.....

Armaan:Imaan.....

Imaan:plzzzzzzzz

Armaaan:acha baba chalo.....

......
Wo loog ice-cream layte hain aur car mai bethte hain......Imaan ice-cream kha rahe hote hai while Armaan ose dekh raha hota hai....


Song in background......

Janaye Heriye
Janaye Hereriye
mere maan ye bata day to
kis mor chala hai to
kia paya nahi tone
kia dhund raha hai to
jo hai ankhae
jo hai ansune
wo baat kia hai bata
Mitwaaa kahe dharkane tujse kia
Mitwa ye khud se to na to chupaaa..............


Meray maan ye bata day tooo
kis mor chala hai to
kia paya nahi tune
kia dhund raha hai tooo
jo hai ankahe
jo hai ansune
wo baat kia hai baata
Mitwa......kahe dharkane hhai tujhse pyar
Mitwa ye khud se to na to chupa..........


Jeevan dagar mai prem nagar mai
aya nazar mai jubse koi hai
tu sochta hai
to pochta hai
jiski kami thi
kia ye wohi haiii
hana ye wohi haii
haan ye wohi haiiiiiiiiiiiii
tu ek pyasa aur ye nadi haiii
kahe nahi es ko to khul k bataye
jo hai ankahe
jo hai ansune
wo baat kia hai bataaaa.....
Mitwaaaa......kahe dharkane hai tujhse pyar
Mitwa.....ye khud se to na tooo chupaaa.......

Teri nigahien........pagal banaye
per to ye sochay jaooo na jaooooo
ye zindagi jo hai nachte to
kyun beriyon mai hain teray paonnn
preet ki dhun per nach lay pagall.........
urta aagar hai urne day anchall.....
kahe koi apney ko ayse tarsaye......
Jo hai ankahe
jo hai ansune
wo baat kia hai bataaa
Mitwa ye kahe dharkane tujhse pyar
Mitwa ye khud se to na to chupaaaaa.........

Janiye heriyeeeeee......
Janiye heroyee
Meray maan ye bata day tooo
Kis moor chala hai to
kia paya nahi tune
kia dhund raha hai to.....

..................
Armaan come out from his sense.....
Armaan:nahi......ye mujhe kia ho raha hai........aysa nahi ho sakta.....nahi.....

Imaan(fnishing her ice-cream):Armaan chalay late ho raha..........

Armaan:ummm...hmmmmm......haan chalo.........

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here the 2 part ends........hope u all like it...
Sorry agar lyrix mai misrake hue to.....
do comments
tc
Mehreen.....
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Edited by fakhra - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#22
seems like sum 1 z fallin in luv...lolz.....gud part...keep it up...n plz continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#23
HEY mehreen.... wow very sweet & cute part.... 👏
kya baat hai Armaan ka mann kahin aur jaa raha hai... 😉 hehehe lol.... 😆
gr8 gng.... 👏
plz cont soon.... 😊 dear
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Posted: 18 years ago
#24
mehru yaar the second part was totally fabulous... superb yaar.. 👏
tho ab armaan ke dil mein bhi armaan jagne lage.. uske dil mein bhi kuch kuch hone laga hain imaan ke liye....shooooooooooo sweettttttttttttttt.. shooooooooooooooo cuteeeeeeeeeeeeeee.. 😳
ab please jaldi se continue karna..me waiting for the next part... 😃
Edited by sun_423 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#25
ok frnds here the next part.....

Armaan aur Imaan party pe jaaate hain......aik larki un k pass aate hai
Girl:Armaan.....Imaan......

Armaan:kripa kayse ho.......happy b'day.....

Kripa:thanx.....

Imaan:Happy b'day kripa

Kripa:thanx.....
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Armaan apne frnds k saath party enjoy ker raha hota while Imaan thora uncomfrotable hote hai......

Armaan us k pass ata hai....

Armaan:kia baat hai Imaan...

Imaan:Armaan mujhe yaha kuch acha nahi lug raha...

Armaan:ufffff maan ki jaan thori dair uk jao phir chalte hain.....

Imaan:per...

Armaan:c'mon.....plzz

Imaan:ok.....

Kripa waha aate hai
wid someone...

Kripa:armaan imaan es se milo..........ye hai angad.....aur angad ye Armaan aur ye Imaan...

wo loog haath milate hain.....per Angad aur Imaan aik dosre ko dekhte rehte hain.....Armaan ye sub dekhta hai.....n he says.....

Armaan:aaaaa.....chalay Imaan...

Angad:kaha..

Armaan:wo hame kuch kaam hai......hum chalte hain.....

Imaan ose confused ho k dekhte hain...

Kripa:per...

Armaan:phir mile ge...bye chalo Imaan.....

wo os ka haath pakarta hai lay jaata hai.....
......
in car
Imaan:kia Armaan ......tum lay kyun aye...

Armaan:tumhe ne to kaha tha...

Imaan:watt maine kub kaha.........

Armaan;chup......baas......aram se betho...

Imaan:per.....

Armaan:chup...

Imaan:hmmmmmmmm..........
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frnds i know its boring part hope u all like it...
baki part kaal..
tc
Mehreen......
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Posted: 18 years ago
#26
very goood so armaan likin imaan nw 👏 continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#27
mehru yaar...part bohat achcha tha..mujhe khushi hain ki armaan ke dil mein imaan ke liye feelings badthe jaa rahe hain....the part totally rocked yaar.... 👏
armaan was so cute & sweet when he was insecure that imaan likes angad... 😳 par dear tum armaan se kehna ki woh tension na le...kyunke angad uske aur imaan ke raasthe mein nahi aayega..kyunke angad ka raastha already kripa taraf hain..na... 😉
ab please jaldi continue karna....me will be waiting for the next part eagerly... 😃
Edited by sun_423 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#28
ok here da next part........

wo loog ghar pohochte hain.....Armaan thora ghusay mai hota hai wohi baat yaad ker k.....wo apnay room mai chala jaata hai.....aur Imaan apnay mia.....

.....
In Armaan's room...

Armaan:ye mujhe kia ho raha hai.....mai q Imaan ki taraf khichay ja raha hoon........q aysa q ho raha hai mere saaaaaath......kuch smjh nahi a raha.........kia ye pyar hai........nahi nahi ye pyar nahi ho sakta.....Imaaaaan to mere sirf bezt frnd hai aur kuch nahi.....per........

Juzt then Veena enters...
Veena:Armaan kia baat hai tum loog itne jaldi wapis a gaye...

Armaan:mama baas ayse he.....

Veena os k cherey pe thori pareshani dekhte hai.....

Veena:kia baat hai beta.......apni ma ko nahi batao gay.....

Armaan:nahi mama ayse koi baat nahi aap k aur Imaan k ilawa mai kis se aur se apnay dil ki baaat nahi keh sakta.....

Veena:to phir baata kia baat hai.....tu itna confused q lug raha.....

Armaan:mama wo.....actually........(kuch sharmate huey)......

Veena:aik min aik min......kahe tujhe pyar to nahi ho gaya.....

Armaan get shocked(happilyy)

Armaan:mama.....na .....na .....nahi......wo.....

Veena:tere ankhien bata rahe hain...

Armaan:paata nahi mama.....per jub bhi ose dekhta hoon........dil kerta hai use he dekhta rahoon.....aur kahe maan nahi lagta.....baas ose ko sunay ose ko dekhne ka dil kerta hai.....

Veena:hmmmmmmmm.........acha janab........to kon hai wo larki jisne mere betay ki raaton ki neend churaye hai......

Armaan:mama wo.....

Veena:haan bool bool..........bata na.....

Armaan:mama Imaan......meri jaan......

Veena(happily):sach......tu sach keh raha hai.....

Armaan:ji mama...

Veena:mai bohot khush hoon mai kaal he Imaan se baat karo gi.....

Armaan:thanx mama......thank you soooooo mcuh......

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Veena nichay jaate hai tabhi fone aata hai..........

Veena:ji kahiye......ji........magar........ji acha............
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Next Morning.....
sub nashta ker rahe hote hain......Armaan aur Imaan bhi hote hain aur Kasak aur Akshat bhi.....tabhi Veena kehte hai.....

Veena:Imaan .....

Imaan:ji aunty.....

Veena:beta tumhare liye rishta aya hai......
........All r shocked..........
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here da part end hope u all like it.....
..tc luv u all
Mehreen...........

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Coming up:Wo call kis ki thi...os ne veena se kia kaha......akhir rishta kis ka aya hai......Armaan ya............
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Posted: 18 years ago
#29
hey mehreen.... of course pasand aaya hai.... 😉
sorry for commenting late.... 😃
vaise gud gng.... 👏 I think Woh call Angad ne rishta bheja hoga Imaan k liye..... 😳
plz post the next part soon.... 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#30
i noe yaar..i agree wid kulbin too...i think stupid angad ne rishta bheja hai.....btw.....nice part....i hope imaan rejects it....lol.....n plz continue sooooonnnnnnn..... dyin 2 read wut happenz nxt...

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