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Scarboroughfair

@Scarboroughfair

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

This update casts a spell of romance in its true essence. B.E.A.U.T.I.F.U.L

Arnav and Khushi are magical together. <3

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javeria

@Javeria3991

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Beautiful update
They had first official update.
I am loving Arnav hopelessly falling for khushi. He is enjoying being around khushi, counting seconds to be with her again. Love is a lovely feeling.
I like the whole dinner arrangement, for them it was magic which they don't want to end. Khushi has found her rajkumaar n I am sure Arnav will be to be it.
Khushi is sick, I hope Arnav will found her sickness soon n treat it.
Looking forward to read next update.

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

😭 Missed part 2 and now there's part 3 ...

Off to read ...

Part 2 ...

"Mother Mary always told me that we should learn to love and cherish

everything we hold dear in this heartbeat, as it may all slip from our grasp

sooner than we would care to realise..."

It was good to see the positive attitude of Khushi in this update after the negativity earlier ...

Obviously she is suffering from something we don't know about as yet but will eventually ...

Loved their impromptu date and how easily they got along ... so much so that they have

fixed meeting again ... 😆

Thanks Manreet ... love your writing style ...

Edited by Kishmish - 11 years ago

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Sj236

@Sj236

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Could d update be anymore beautiful dan dis!!
D start was really enchanting and d date was just perfect :)
I really loved d way u described d complete date in a really endearing manner!
And d quotes are really amazing :)

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1chilly

@1chilly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Love the way you write from the point of view of both protagonists.

Arnav has fallen and he's fallen hard.

Loved how he has made himself an essential part of Khushi's life.

And his interaction with the children at the orphanage.

Will Arnav notice that something is seriously wrong with Khushi?

Wziting for tomorrow.

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rulama

@rulama

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

Lovely update. So why is Khushi getting headache? What is she ailing from? Nobody keeps the tablets on their bedside table unless you need it daily or need it as medication under extreme duress! So what is really happening?

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Simran

@dmg123

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Chapter 2 and 3 were amazing!!

I really liked the way Arnav and Khushi's relationship is progressing!

Great job!

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ShikhaKhushi

@ShikhaKhushi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#58

I have to be quick but I really lovved this updateee!!! Khushi is hiding something! I'm totally sure of it. Her momentary pain has to be something serious, I had gotten the vides from the first time itself and now... Either she's hiding something or she doesn't even know it... God! I hope I'm wrong... I would hate Arnav and Khushi to be separated just as they were growing close!!!

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Amita2014

@Amita2014

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Posted: 11 years ago

#59

Beautiful SS!!!!!!! Such lovely moments
Oh, Is Kushi sick?
Hope this SS has a happy ending...

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Arshix144

@Arshix144

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#60

Manreet, I must apologize for being a tad late this time I haven't been online for a while! :)

Now that I have got the apology out of the way, all I can say in regards to this chapter is Wow! The exquisite way you expressed Arnav's feelings for Khushi took me to dreamland where ideal characters like Arnav exist. Every emotion was so heartfelt and genuine that I couldn't help but be ecstatic for Khushi. Dr Raizada is not only noticing every single expression on Khushi's face but he is also affected by her and everything she does, every single move she makes and in a way that one can only dream of. Ah the way you made him ask for yet another date was simply adorable, now how can one refuse your Arnav? What with him being 100 % genuine basically the perfect gentleman, minus the arrogance, any girl would fall for him. I know I have fallen for him already! :D

And our Khushi's reaction and eagerness to take Raizada up on his offer was wonderful, more than anything I was happy for her because no matter what she is going through she most certainly deserves a little bit of happiness. And now it makes perfect sense as to why she wouldn't want to make a big deal about whatever she is going through. She wants to live in the moment and enjoy every good thing that happens to her. Her headaches and exhaustion is sure to create some doubts and concerns for our Dr Raizada. I can't wait to see what transpires next, thank you for this beautiful chapter and the notification M!