OS~|Kabhi Jo Badal Barse|~Kriya Version

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello guys, here's a new OS. Its just been a day I started listening to this song and I am in love with it. This song and the thought related to it wouldn't leave my mind and so I had to pen it down. It has two versions. One is the female version and the other one male version.

This OS is based on the female version of the song Kabhi Jo Badal Barse, depicting Kriya's situation. Hope you guys like it.

Kriya OS: Kabhi Jo Badal Barse


Everything in the lives of the D3 gang wasn't going well. First the news of Taani getting engaged left them shocked. Once they surmounted it, the next news which left them stunned was Kriya's return. Yeah she met them during Taani's engagement. She happened to be a cousin of Vishesh. The engagement was scheduled to be held after a week from the day actually decided because of some urgent business matters which required Vishesh's presence. Since Kriya was only youngster present there for the engagement as the rest of the cousins were busy due to their personal matters, Mr.Shekhawat requested Kriya to stay with them. At first she denied but on constant persistence from Mr.Shekhawat, she agreed. Her mother was fine with it but she wasn't.


Three days already passed by. And she tried avoiding the gang particularly Rey as much as possible. She did talk to the rest of the gang but that too minimally. She knew Taani and Rey were in a relationship but this sudden engagement of Taani confused her. She knew he was deeply hurt with this engagement. She couldn't bear to see him sad though it hurt her very much on seeing the yearning for Taani in Rey's eyes.


It pained her. She always wanted to be in his eyes, in his heart. But...sigh! You aren't fortunate always. It hurt her even more on knowing that he moved on so quick, he gave her place to someone else in his heart. But that was what she wanted right. Then why this pain and anguish welled up in her heart? She wondered. One thing she knew for sure was that he deserved to be loved.


She wanted to let out all the turmoil. She wanted to dance. That was the best means to get rid of her emotions for a while. It was past seven in the evening and everyone was busy downstairs. Kriya quietly proceeded towards the terrace. It was calm and peaceful up there. She plugged in her I-pod and let herself flow with the music.


(Tune into Kabhi Jo Badal Barse(female version))


Pehle kabhi, na tune mujhe gum diya
Fir mujhe, kyu tanha kar diya
Gujare the jo lamhe pyar ke
Hamesha tujhe apna maan ke
To fir tune badli kyu adaa
Ye kyu kiya ??


She closed her eyes, and began swaying to the tune. The lyrics aptly described her condition. While she was dancing her mind retrieved all the moments spent with him. They were the best days of her life. A smile automatically curved up her face remembering the way they used to fight and how they turned into good friends and then ache dost se kuch zyada. But the reminscience of the pre-valentines day vanished her smile. She danced her heart out.


Kabhi jo baadal barse
Main dekhu tujhe aankhe bharke
Tu lage mujhe, pehli baarish ki duaa
Tere pehlu me, rehlu
Main khud ko pagal, keh lu
Tu gum de ya khushiyaa, sehlu saathiyaa


All of a sudden it started raining. Rather than discontinuing her dance, she danced in the rain, allowing the water droplets to wash away all her agony and distress. She opened her eyes and faced upwards with her hands spread out as if indicating the sky to take away all her pain. How she wished she could be in his arms. She wanted him to be happy no matter if it cost her tons of sorrow. She was ready to bear everything but not his ignorance.


Saathiyaa
Saathiyaa


She spun around according to the music flawlessly. Anyone watching her dance could get affected by it. He/she can easily make out her pain.


Koi nahi, tere siva mera yahaa
Manzile, hai meri to sab yahaa
Mita de sabhi aaja faansle
Main chahu mujhe mujhse baatley
Zara sa mujh me tu jhaakley
Main hu kya ??


It was true. These seemed to be some lyrics of a song to everyone but for her they were synonymous to her feelings. The day she broke his heart, she felt as if someone stabbed her. Before she met him, her only aim was to become a successful dancer. But his entry reversed everything. Now, even her dance was incomplete without him. She just wished that fate would give her one chance, fate would give them one chance and she would definitely give her best to set things right,


Kabhi jo baadal barse
Main dekhu tujhe aankhe bharke
Tu lage mujhe, pehli baarish ki duaa
Tere pehlu me, rehlu
Main khud ko pagal, keh lu
Tu gum de ya khushiyaa, sehlu saathiyaa


She stretched up her left leg till the level of head and twirled around once. As she put her foot down, she found him gazing at her intently. With a smiling face she approached him. Before she could actually touch him, he vanished. She was hallucinating yet again. She dropped down on the floor with tears brimming out of her eyes and the rain mocking at her state. Only once but she wanted him to be there and comfort her.


I guess you guys must be wondering what's wrong with this girl. This is the time to celebrate and she is writing sad OS.

Do hit the like tab and leave your reviews.

P.S Please check out the second version as well OS~|Kabhi Jo Badal Barse|~KriYansh Version

Edited by lovely7010 - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago
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fabulous write-up again mannuu🤗
and thanx for this song 😉

its awesomeee

and i lovedd this os👏❤️


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Great Write up Mannu..
Loved it how Kriya's pain was told out so well..
And the song sounds so good...
I thoroughly enjoyed it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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14 memebers likes the post and only 6 comments :/
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Posted: 11 years ago
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not fair mannu di maine bhi isi song par likhne wali thi
but the way u wrote it main kabhi nahi likh paati
awesome one
the way u potrayed it was awesome seriously maintoh pehle se ye gaane ki badi fan thi ab aur hogayi
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it was soo beautiful darling...

her emotions..the song.. the dance...

wooowww... simply wowww...

loved ittt
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Posted: 11 years ago
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that was good and nice os... emotional... liked it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i really don't know from where do you get such amazing ideas but this OS was fabulous !
like too good ! 😳
superb song 👍🏼
and you made 2 versions from the same song..
lovely !! just like your ID 😉

thanks for the PM so much
love your writing
do write more and do PM me 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful shot..yup strange on seeing a sad 1 bt u know sun shines brighter after downpour..ur attempt said it all..i heard d song 4 d 1st time but now i love it...truly speaking..i liked dis 1 more den second version..although loved dat 1 also..bt plz dnt feel bad...plz
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yar...manuu...tum aese kese logon ka munh bund kra deti ho...onca again speechlesss...kya kahoon...wow...awesome...wondrful all wrds are so small...i lyk kriya version mre thn kriyansh one...lovely sweety 👏

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