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Posted: 11 years ago
#71
Awesome
Loved it ,loved it ,loved it
I laughed so much while
Reading it , had to read it twice
More before reading it to my
Hubby who also thought it was
Very well written
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72
It was hilarious an Aww so cute...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73
Congrats! This was very hilarious. It sure did put a smile on my face!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
Wonderful OS! 👏 Poetic, romantic and hilarous 🤣

Arnav's jealousy for Bankelal is infectious
and his furiousness
over his family for turning poets
overnight; priceless. 😉

Even Akash and NK turned out to be rhyming 😆

Hmm, in the end even Arnav turned a poet and his efforts were so romantic (poor Aman though 😛)

Blissfull night indeed and Arnav's right; he needs to stuff a pan in her mouth everytime she ruins a romantic moment 😉

Cheers
K

(ps: I want to meet this Bankelal, Khushi's the Mr. "meant nothing" 😉)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75
Awesome one shot. Loved the way you made Arnav recite poetry to Khushi. Nice story and Arnav is so cute being jealous. It is really hard to write poetry for all the characters and you have done it damn well here. This shows you are really good at writing - Good job. Loved reading your FF A New Khushi. I hope you will continue to write more stories. Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
😆
Oh Sami... this was such a fun read and yet so romantic. I had a great time!!

I was trying to copy paste a few things to quote from the update... but then I had too much to choose from 😆 I just loved this shot, everyone was fully in their characters and it had me in splits when the family started talking in poetry 🤣 NK's and Aakash's were the best. How did you come up with it, Sami?

Last scene was super adorable and romantic!

Oh... I like Paan. And there's this really famous Prince Paan Bhandar near to my place. It's very famous too... 😆 Pakka se... Aman got the paans from there. They have soo many yummy varieties!

Quoting my fav line...

"The nerve of this paanwalla.. If only Arnav had a paan in his pocket he would love to shove it up his..."
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
Firstly congrayulations fr being on top 10 :)
This was wow and real..
Loved it :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: taniks

Awesome

Loved it ,loved it ,loved it
I laughed so much while
Reading it , had to read it twice
More before reading it to my
Hubby who also thought it was
Very well written



Thanks for sharing this with your hubby as well .. I'm elated you both enjoyed it 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: kclovearshi

Wonderful OS! 👏 Poetic, romantic and hilarous 🤣


Arnav's jealousy for Bankelal is infectious
and his furiousness
over his family for turning poets
overnight; priceless. 😉

Even Akash and NK turned out to be rhyming 😆

Hmm, in the end even Arnav turned a poet and his efforts were so romantic (poor Aman though 😛)

Blissfull night indeed and Arnav's right; he needs to stuff a pan in her mouth everytime she ruins a romantic moment 😉

Cheers
K

(ps: I want to meet this Bankelal, Khushi's the Mr. "meant nothing" 😉)


Thanks for such lovely feedback. It makes it all worthwhile when readers enjoy 😊
I wish BankeLal had made a real appearance in the show.. I think another OS where BankeLal goes out with Sheetal on a disastrous date is in order now 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: AquaSandhya

Sami, to me this OS was a culmination of classic IPK humour and chemistry that blends perfectly Sami's humour and chemistry for Arnav and Khushi.


Loved it. Laughed hard. I could actually imagine Arnav and Khushi doing the the things you write coz Arnav coming from the world he does adjusting to Khushi's eccentricities would be nothing short of a daily roller-coaster ride.

Congratulations and thank you👏


Thanks for such a sweet comment Sandy. You are so right, Arnav's life really would have been a daily roller coaster ride 😆

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