Arhi OS: The Language of Love

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kclovearshi

@kclovearshi

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: ssyahoo

Thanks for such lovely feedback. It makes it all worthwhile when readers enjoy 😊
I wish BankeLal had made a real appearance in the show.. I think another OS where BankeLal goes out with Sheetal on a disastrous date is in order now 😆

Haha that would be awesome, Bankelal with Sheetal 🤣

I will look forward to it, will you please pm me?

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ssyahoo

@ssyahoo

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: Anarocksick
😆

Oh Sami... this was such a fun read and yet so romantic. I had a great time!!

I was trying to copy paste a few things to quote from the update... but then I had too much to choose from😆I just loved this shot, everyone was fully in their characters and it had me in splits when the family started talking in poetry🤣NK's and Aakash's were the best. How did you come up with it, Sami?

Last scene was super adorable and romantic!

Oh... I like Paan. And there's this really famous Prince Paan Bhandar near to my place. It's very famous too...😆Pakka se... Aman got the paans from there. They have soo many yummy varieties!

Quoting my fav line...

"The nerve of this paanwalla.. If only Arnav had a paan in his pocket he would love to shove it up his..."

Thank you Ana 😊 If I had known about this paan place I surely would have mentioned it in the OS..
I'm not a natural in poetry at all, but somehow managed with the theme . Glad you had a good laugh 😊

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munchkinland

@munchkinland

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#83

I LUVED THIS OS...
IT WAS WOOWWW...
ARNAV RECITING POETRY WAS SO
GREAT TO SEE...

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Arshix144

@Arshix144

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#84

Ah now I know who wrote the one OS that made me smile from ear to ear, thank you S for this fun filled and cleverly crafted OS.

Oh this whole scene where Banke Laal ji throws a party making Arnav turn all shades of green with envy entertained me immensely. I am still having a hard time imagining a rather good looking and well dressed Banke Lal ji singing Mein Shayaar to nahi for Khushi ji.😆 Then came the mention of poetry making me laugh at Arnav's expense, oh the way he wanted to shove some Paan up somewhere made me clutch my stomach from laughing uncontrollably! A little jealousy never killed anyone eh!

Heck the whole family's poetry has me in splits of laughter and Arnav's attempt at poetry the roses are red reference and Khushi asking him not to talk sweetly because of his condition sent me to another crack up session. I love it when Khushi has the upper hand for a change even if she is crazy. In the end you gave us all the warm and fuzzies with Arnav's poem for Khushhi, I couldn't resist but laugh again @ Arnav ji thinking of stuffing Khushi's mouth with some Paan, should she dare ruin a romantic moment again!😆😆

What can I say I just loved this whole journey, appreciate the pm! :-)

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@whiterose29

Trailblazer

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#85

Once again I'll say- Amazing OS! ⭐️ <33

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Shamz

@Shamz94

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#86

This OS just put a big smile on my face :D

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melonie

@melonie

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#87

Hi...That was beautiful. Banke Lal on our show was not something classified as handsome ;) You made good use of him here. Pan and poetry competition 😆 I loved how the whole family was talking. That was indeed cool. But the best one was by Arnav ❤️ Such a sweet husband.

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Anupama

@Anupama.

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#88

I had voted for yours and you had for me 😆
RES.

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Afya

@Afya

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#89

Thanks for the PM, Sami.

Congrats on getting to the top 10.

This was one unique OS.

Absolutely loved the use of poetry here.

You haven't changed Arnav and Khushi's personality one bit which made it even more enjoyable.

Excellent job. A very well written OS👏

Banke Lal...Who would have thought he would walk out of Khushi's imagination and actually make an appearance in their lives?😆 Loved how Arnav felt jealous. I can very much imagine it happening.😛

The whole family conversing in poetry the next day reminded me of the musings thread.

Poor Arnav! The Raizadas had no clue what they were doing to him.😆

But the final poetry he recited to her was just awesome.

And the way he had created the right moment, recited the perfect poem...spoke of class ...spoke of Mr Raizada.

But seriously, Arnav? 100 paans?😆 What were you thinking?

A really humorous and lighthearted OS, Sami.

Enjoyed reading it.

Edited by Afya - 11 years ago