ArHi SS-A Trespassing Memory*Completed*TY NOTE.pg16

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SIMI

@dieforasr

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Posted: 11 years ago

#121

its a beautiful love story...perfect blend of happiness, sorrow, separation...Loved it...

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-PayaashPM

@-PayaashPM

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Posted: 11 years ago

#122

Lovely love story !!! It's so touching !!!!

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Anupama

@Anupama.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#123

Wow such a nice story. Everyone, read this. :p hehehehe

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Ananya

@Anarocksick

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Posted: 11 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: Anupama.

Wow such a nice story. Everyone, read this. :p hehehehe

🤣

Funny how you caught on it so late 😆

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AquaSandhya

@AquaSandhya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: Anupama.
Wow such a nice story. Everyone, read this. :p hehehehe

Anu...you are absolutely hilarious 🤣

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addictedx53

@addictedx53

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Posted: 11 years ago

#126

It was beautiful, this story of two souls bound by the memories of their 8 days together in extreme strife. So short yet so complete in its portrayal..full of possibilities in the future. Poignant.

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

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Posted: 11 years ago

#127

that was a nice one Anupama

loved it

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

@Eccentrica

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Posted: 11 years ago

#128

This one was recommended to me by Charu when it was still an OS. Guess ti took me a very long time to come here.

The setting was quite unique, and so was the way you paced it- fiRst with the meeting of the duo and then the leap of nine years. I also liked that a chapter had been dedicated to Khushi's brother. which also makes em say that I'm glad that this was turned into an SS; otherwise there would have been many questions left unanswered.

Not many might be appreciative of the idea of an ending like this one and the one in 'Brewing up', but I for one like it that you end things in that manner. The end in the form of 'The beginning' provides yet another story of hope, happiness while providing an open culmination.