VIRMAN FF: #2 YOU ARE MY LOVE UPDATED FINAL PART PG 73(14.4.14) - Page 18

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Posted: 11 years ago
PART 23:


hi friends... for your surprise, I am have updated the next part... hope you'll be enjoy reading.


After completing his dinner, Virat went to his room and lied on his bed silently. Manvi got annoyed by his activities and went to their room to check his mood. She saw him looking at the ceiling and merged in deep thoughts. "Manvi... I left you behind without even talking a single word. I know it may hurt you jaan... but gimme some time. First of all, I wanna get free from my worries on ma's treatment. Unless, I can't concentrate in any thing... plzz try to understand" he thought himself...


She could understand his feelings and entered in the room. Seeing her coming towards him, he just closed his eyes and pretending to be slept. "I know you could not sleep Virat... But any ways, take your time. And trust me, nothing would happen to ma... Good night baby" she said caressing his hairs that is waving on his forehead. He felt her touch but didn't opened his eyes... "How pure her love is!!!" he thought closing his eyes and after some time, he slept without knowing himself. She kissed his forehead and went to sleep thinking not to disturb him...

Next day...


Vanshika ma was hospitalized and every one were there till the admission process was done completely. Virat did all the work by himself by roaming here and there for completing all the procedures. Finally doctors asked them to leave and according to the hospital rules only one person could stay with the patient and that too if they wished. Manvi voluntarily said, "I'll stay with ma this night". Virat glared at her and sternly said, "I do..."

"But Virat... you go home and have some rest na?" asked Manvi politely. "Do what I said..." he again said in a strict voice. Virika was about the leave the place and looked at Manvi to join them. Manvi excused saying, "Di... jiju... I didn't talked with Virat this whole day properly. He was worrying more from yesterday... shall I come within two minutes?"

"mmm..." said Viren and nodded his head. Manvi went to the corridor where he was standing on the corner and closed his eyes with his finger rubbing his forehead... he was merged in deep thought and she noted his worried face. He came out of his traunce realizing a touch in his shoulder... "Virat, you haven't talked with me since morning... donno whether you could understand what I feel. It's really tough to undergo this situation. Please talk to me... atleast say some thing" said this tears started rolling down her cheeks...

"I am not in a mood to say any thing... go home and sleep well" he said wiping her tears. "can't understand why you behave this way" said this she turned back and walked towards the exit door... "Even I can't understand why I am behaving this way..." he said himself looking at her till her image got blurred...


Virika along with Manvi reached home... Virika saw her dull face and tried to console her, "Manvi... you know what? Virat is this way from his child hood. If some thing happened to ma, he would be upset and forget every thing around him" said Viren cupping her face.


"But I am his wife na Jiju? Ofcourse I could understand he was worrying more... what is the need to ignore me?" she said worriedly...


"he's not only ignoring you... he was not even talking to ma and me too. Could you see that? It's his nature that he won't share his feeling with any one whether it is good or bad... He lost his dad in very young age and brought up by ma in very tough situations. Some times, she would starve without money... but never failed to fulfill his wishes. All this made his attachments with ma deeper and mentally tied with her strongly... even if it was a small cold for ma, he would be upset. Such a mommy boy" said Viren trying to console her. She just nodded her head and moved to her room barely...


On the other side, Virat sat on the couch just opposite to V..ma's bed where she was in deep slumber becoz' of high her dosage and he was there with a restless mind state... He just closed his eyes and turned suddenly saying "haan Manvi..." thinking as if she was calling him. But turned to see no one was there and worried to see her... he just dialed her number but donno whose bad luck it was... as her mobile was in silent mode that she forgotten to change the mode after returned from hospital. He felt very bad for his behavior to her these two days and how worried she might me... He got up from his couch and walked till the window... his eyes got to see the sight of beautiful moon... "how beautiful it it!!! Just like you Manvi...", he whispered. His thoughts driven back and started flashing the images of their first meet...

****

In house, Manvi can't sleep without seeing his face and just stood near the window seeing the moon thinking their first meet when he said 'I love u'... though it was an accidental one, it mean a lot to her this time... she thought how dreamy it was and a small smile crept in her lips. Then, her entry in Vadhera house... the day when her maang was filled with sindoor from his fingers...


"though it happened unfortunately and unwantedly... it was the most unforgettable moment in my life" she said smilingly seeing the moon thinking she was speaking with him. "then the day you confessed your love... and your assurance... what a blissful moment! How blessed I am!!" she whispered completely drenched in his thoughts... then the morning when he prepared breakfast for her and the way surprises her every time, she said, "How lucky I am!!"


then the day he refused and was adamant like a child to allow her for this german trip... the way he shared his past with her with full of hopes and love... "then, why you are ignoring me? Is every thing happened till now are true, then my love is true... I miss you Virat... missing you badly..." said this tears are running again from her cheeks.

*******

His senses also driving him back to day when his eyes drooled her beauty shamelessly and without his realization he gave the top score to her in Miss Mumbai'... And her challenge that he would fall for some girl one day... "but I never thought I would fall for you my jaan..." he said again seeing the moon.


Then the image when she became his bride... the moment when they walked around the sacred fire holding each others hand... "the day I saw your lifeless face searching for me every where thinking I was missed... no one could give this happiness to me than you..." he said in a low voice thinking the day when he left London just to avoid her... then the moment they danced together in the party... the small misunderstanding they had on that day, their patch up and her promise to fight along with him to save V..ma from the dreadful cancer...


"the day when I came to Germany and shared the truth behind my past and the way you reacted to it... And today... I avoided you the numerous times whenever you ought to talk with me... your tears... I love you Jaan..." he said finally with a deep breath... "Chandha baisa... Please covey my love to my jaan who would be worrying there for me" he said seeing the moon.

Thinking their blissful moments, they passed their nights with a hopeless tomorrow...

*****


that's it my sweet buddies... I didn't checked it again and forgive if there's any mistakes. And I feel like you have lost interest in reading this FF. If so, please inform me, I'll wrap it soon. And by the way, next update is also ready... I'll post it seeing your response.

THANK YOU ALL...

LOVE YOU... TAKE CARE🤗

Edited by madhuharini - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderful update
Poor virman
Virat nt sharing hs worries wth manvi..nd avoiding hr...
Love their thoughts on seeing moon
Do cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago


thank u kichuu... luv u😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow awesome update dear...
Awww poor manvi 😭
bdw loved virman talk with Moon 😊
Plzzz update it soon dear i ll b always waiting 4 ur update dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Akka 1st time virman FF padikiren,ungalukaga!!!!!!!😳
Basic story enna nu therila,but this update was awesome akka!!!!
Virman feelings ah azahaga soninga!!!👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
You didnt pm me 😭 😭 😭
As a result i lost track of it... 🥺 🥺
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: naina927

You didnt pm me 😭 😭 😭
As a result i lost track of it... 🥺 🥺



sorry nainu... I thought you are not interested in this...
sorry again... I'll pm frm this time for sure...

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aparnalokam

Wow awesome update dear...
Awww poor manvi 😭
bdw loved virman talk with Moon 😊
Plzzz update it soon dear i ll b always waiting 4 ur update dear...
Ty 4 PM



thank u aparna...
I'll update within next 2 days
😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesum update I liked it a lot...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AmmuKryan

Akka 1st time virman FF padikiren,ungalukaga!!!!!!!😳

Basic story enna nu therila,but this update was awesome akka!!!!
Virman feelings ah azahaga soninga!!!👍🏼



aww... thank you for reading ammu papa...
luv u😊

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