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BitterBerry

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Posted: 11 years ago

#71

Read part 4 n 5a
so the new murder case is very well blended with the current situation.
And what actually Rathod hiding about Sushma? Made me curious.
Really liked the talk of Aisha and shree at the starting, as how there teens spoiling their live for just so called attention.
And then next, Someone is really barging Sameer and Arjun. And arjun have guessed this must be related with sushma case.
Cool!
Waiting for the Neeta verma case to be solved.

Hey very sorry for the Late reply. Was busy!
And yea, thanks for reminding.

Edited by Vampire-queen - 11 years ago

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Payal Goel

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Posted: 11 years ago

#72

first thanks for d pm dear..
awesome updates..
sam bro past defo gonna be painful...
very well written
lovely

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rimi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: jia03
awesome :-)

thanks jia...😊

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rimi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: Payal_156
first thanks for d pm dear..
awesome updates..
sam bro past defo gonna be painful...
very well written
lovely

U are always welcome dear...

thank you for following my story and a lovely comment...😊

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Atisha Khan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#75

Hairrising !!!
that threatening part was so well written...you sketched it beautifully.
Well done..girl.
Love the turn in this case.

I've no problem if you drop this story after you finish it... but if you left it incomplete... then...SYS.
Don't lose heart girl, my HM is also going through this. i know how it feels.

Do continue...
Thanks for PM.

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rimi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: Shamsad1607
Hairrising !!!
that threatening part was so well written...you sketched it beautifully.
Well done..girl.
Love the turn in this case.

I've no problem if you drop this story after you finish it... but if you left it incomplete... then...SYS.
Don't lose heart girl, my HM is also going through this. i know how it feels.

Do continue...
Thanks for PM.

thank you so much shamsad..your comments are always encouraging...dont worry I wont drop the story...even if i do ill pm updates to reader like you who have always encouraged me to continue the story...😃😃😃

but what the hell ya??HM getting less admirers??Its one of my favourite story in this forum.Such a fine writer you are.Poor HM.

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rimi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#77

thank you to all these people who had liked the update...
Luci333, skrafty, Shamsad1607, jia03, arzie, GOLD.A, Payal_156, freya123

a big hug to those who have sommented and encouraged me to write the next part🤗🤗

so without more bakwas next comes the next chapter...hope ull enjoy it tooo...

Likes and comments are mandatory...silent readers take care...😉

thanks rimi

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rimi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#78

Here comes the next part...it would be starting of the revealation.I have planned a third part as the continuation will be the rest of the revealation..and it would be only for those who comment..😃

Chapter 5B:

It said,
'careful sammy
SA'

'Whats that rawte??',rathore asked arjun who got thoughtful by reading the contents of the paper.

'dhamki rathore, per ye itna ajeeb sa dhamki?', replied arjun looking confused

'ajeeb??Kiya kehe rahe ho rawte??dikhao mujhe',asked a visibly irritated rathore after parking the car in front of his house.

He took the paper in his hand,looked at the contents totally astonished.Arjun kept looking at his face changing colours of different shades.First it was complete shock,then a sudden pain and then despair.His face pale and hands shaking,he kept looking at the paper.A long lost handwritting was again in front of him.

All these years he had lost all hopes of finding what his heart always desired but always trusted beyond his trust that once he would find her,his 'SA' and 'SHE' was the one who had always called him sammy,when ever she had showed concern for him.

Destiny has always been cruel to him.An almost wrecked childhood owning to his parents living in the same house,but living an unknown life of their own.He has always been the mess when it came to deciding to whose 'side' he was suppose to be.Sometimes his father nudged him towards his mother to take care while he is busy or vice versa which normally led to the couple fighting for dominance and he being left alone in the garden angry and hitting at the plants with a long stick.

Later he grew up to decide his own fate,being fed with huge amounts of money at the beginning of each month which he used to spend quite lavishly.But being an introvert, he never had a long list of friends.But who ever he came close to,he always kept them closely.Cars and Racing was something that have always faschinated him and he started spending all his money for racing cars,sometimes risking his life too.But then there wasnt anyone such who would bother about him still living.

He had finished high school and went to college,this time fate took a pleasant way of giving the blow at him.He met with Roshni.She was the one who was never intersted in his money but the man he was.Knowing his introvert and neglecting self she always stood by him when he needed.Thus they became best of friends.Sameer spent some beautiful and joyful time of his life with her.Learnt a lot from her and she was the one who had made him realise the patriotism he harboured in his heart,that should be put into the use of nation.Then had he planned to join the IPS.

Years passed so did his college days came to an end.Roshni went to her homeplace where she had fetched for furthur studies.He was again left alone.Though they used to talk,everyday but her absence was affecting him.The IPS training had been scheduled in the next two months.That was the time when he had gone for the racing competion at Goa and met 'her'.Destiny's next cruel blow.

Arjun had been observing Rathore for some time now.The ever so calm and composed chief has suddenly turned into a lost puppy.His face showing he didnt know what is going on and what he intends to do.

Arjun has seen this pain and look of despair earlier when he had come after roshni's death and his fierce side after the funeral when he had in an impulse blamed arjun for roshni's death.

Arjun had known him from the academy days and he was also very well accustomed to his family's negligence when his parents had sent money for his birthdays for anything he wanted,never asked him to come home cause they were busy and out of there themselves.So it was always both of them,two lost souls who would celebrate every success and failure their way.Arjun unknowingly left out a chukle when the thoughts roamed about the times when they hardly left one another.

But then again he realised Sam had never informed him about any girl in his life except roshni,or anyone who could get this man on his knees.Then what was so astonishing that had taken sam into such a dejected state?

He called him and recieving no response from him,he shook him that was when rathore came back to reality and he cluched the chit in his hand,unfastened the seat belt and came out of the car,and started walking towards his house.

Arjun followed him to the house.Once inside and one look at rathore's disturbed presence in front of him he decided to talk to him.He cant escape this time.He would never have asked him about his so personal event in his life which he himself never disclosed,owing to the relation the share now,but then that is something relating to the case they are handling right now,and nothing can come their way.Rathore was sitting on the sofa head buried in his palms.Arjun sat beside him and handing a glass of water to him.He silently took the glass and sipped in some water.Keeping the glass on the glass table he looked at Arjun,who was continuously looking at him,and mouthed,

'I am sorry,it was for me'.
'matlab?'SA' kaun hai?',Arjun asked perplexed,

'Sapna Arora,love of my life'

thats all for this update...please read and give your reviews...next update for only those who comments...

Edited by rimi_invisible - 11 years ago

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638783

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Posted: 11 years ago

#79

awesome update :-)

poor Sam... had a troubled childhood... and always remain alone...

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Atisha Khan

@Shamsad1607

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Posted: 11 years ago

#80

Beautifully sketched a loner Rathod.
The background story of Sam is touching...
and his turmoils...oh girl...you deserve some bisses plz bring forth your cheeks..
And finally... bimar Arjun pe itna bara bomb...isn't it too much?!

Anyways, lovely update...kind of I love to read.
Do continue.
Thanks for PM.

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