Love 2 hate you ashlokff- updated chapter-7 20/12/2013 - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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1st 2 parts are awesome
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Suchh a short update yaar...plz give longones from next time...waiting for ashlokmeeting
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nice update
waiting for shlok and astha to meet
continue soon

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Chapter- 4

So guys here is my next updates and on public demand its going to be big one so before reading make sure you have sufficient time!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

At Agnihotri House (lawn) -

After having lunch Aatha was bored she looked here and there and then she found one lady from her looks she was looking very composed and poised and Aatha suddenly turned her way towards the lady. That lady was scattering insecticides on plants on seeing a girl approaching her she stared at her(aatha ) .

Aatha - hello mam I am here to meet Niranjan sir .I have a serious problem regarding my studies that's what I want to discuss with him.

Lady - offcourse beta but to your dismay he may not be able to make it today just now he called informed me that he will be leaving for Delhi for some urgent work with in an hour .

On hearing this Aatha's face went pale , sadness was clearly visible on her face.

Lady- no issue beta I am Mrs Anjali Agnihotri you can discuss your problem with me I will see if by any mean I can sort your problem and if won't then I will surely discuss it with Niranjan Sahib.

Aatha - thank u mam ! and she started disclosing her problem to Anjali " mam I have just taken admission in your college AIT&M' under scholarship seat basis . I live in an orphanage and to meet my expenses other than studies and need to do some job in fact mam I got one too. But the problem is when I went to AIT&M and asked them to enroll me for evening batches they clearly said no to me. They said student on scholarship seats are not allowed for evening batches

( tears started flowing from her eyes ) . Mam I have got a job in School as guest lecturer and from tomorrow onwards I will be joining it as well but if my college timings are not shifted I won't be able to do my job this job is very necessary for me as I will be working as guest lecturer so I need not to spend all my time in school once I am done with the lecturer I will be having enough time for my studies. Mam please help me I know u can.

Anjali- don't worry beta wait for few minutes till then do me a favour and scatter this insecticide on my plants.

After 15 minutes she came with a letter in her hand. She told Aatha give this letter to Mr. Prabhakar and your problem will be sorted and ha hmmm...

Aatha but before that u need to show them your all your documents regarding your joining of jobs .

Aatha with a smile "thank u mam thanks a lot ! now I gotta go .

Anjali- no wait first wash your hand and she directed her to the tap fixed at the side of a wall.

Note- guys I am explaining two parallel situation in two different chapters so don't get confused as one update is from aatha's side while other one is from shlok's side .

Same day At 11:30 am (Agnihotri House)

Anjali - Is shlok still sleeping?

Joti- ho aai I guess last night party got some what hectic he might be taking rest .

Anjali- I don't know when he will grow up he is 27 now but he still behaves like some 18 yr old boy. I don't know when he will get settled though he is helping hand in our family business our Academic institution number grew from 14 to 25 but still his immoral deeds are no less . Yesterday only I saw him with some random girl at kachna palace. Uptill when it will go like this he need to learn his responsibility towards his family and its reputation too and I found him driking last night that is why he is still sleeping his hangover is not over yet. This all is just because of your dad he made him pampered child and now at this age instead of playing with my grandchildren I have to hear about his love affairs from different people .

Joti- oh leave it Aai I will talk to Shlok but right now don't shout otherwise he will get up.

Anjali- look to whom I am telling all this it's not only because of your dad but its also because of you that he became such a spoilt brat now leave it I wake him up its getting late I am goinf to see my plants .

Shlok Room-

Joti- shlok get up .get up shlok its getting late and aai is extremely angry on you if you will not get up then she will not spare you at any cost.

Shlok - joti taiee let me sleep . I am suffering from severe headache and you want me to get up ?

Joti- no shlok you have to get up aai is extremely angry on you and she is in garden rite now on her return if she won't find you awaken she won't spare any 1 . now just get up otherwise I will pour the water of this jug on u.

Shlok- ok-ok I am getting up with this he woke up went to wash room

when he came back he went near window pane to remove the curtain to get fresh air inside , as he opened he saw a girl in white anaakali suit sprinkling something on plant he turned back but to his his utter surprise he thought that he has seen the same girl he suddenly turned back again to seethe girl and was again awestruck on seeing Aatha again in his house in his lawn and to utmost surprise sprinkling something on plants ( god ! am I day dreaming how can this be possible that girl in my home in my lawn and doing work of a Gardner) in oder to make sure that he he not day dreaming he pinched himself and

aaahhh... It hurts shlok he said to himself I am not dreaming she is actually present here and this time I need to rush to her I need to see her and saying this he rushed towards lawn( to Aatha )

guys i have just now written this and have not even checked it once so sorry for that hope you won't find too serious mistakes in this update

chapter-5 page 4

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3816887/love-2-hate-you-ashlokff-updated-chapter-7-20-12-2013?pn=4

Edited by pt311288 - 11 years ago
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oh so is there any chances of astha meeting shlok
do update soon
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Awesome.. Update as soon as possible
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chapter -5

As he stepped out of his room he saw his aai standing there .

Shlok - Aai do you have something to do with me but right now I am going I will be back in 5 minutes.

Anjali- shlok wait ( he turned back ) now take this pen and paper and write one letter to Mr. Prabhakar to allot evening batch to Ms. Aastha .

(Shlok in mind oh she is aastha hmmm nice name like her beautiful full of solace)

Shlok did his work and handed letter to his aai he wanted to go and meet Aastha but to his dismay his mother handed him his tablet .

Niranjan- shlok I need to talk to you its urgent...(on video call)

Shlok took the tablet moved to his room discussed the problem with his father after half an hour he was done with it as he finished his talk he rushed to lawn but to his utter despair found no one there . he returned back and suddenly a thought came in his mind he went near to anjali and asked her- Aai wo letter what was the purpose of that letter? From whom?

Anjali- oh that letter it was for her, poor girl she lives in some orphanage and wanted evening batch for her classes because she want to earn for her expenses ... Nice girl .

On hearing this shlok immediately made his mind to meet Mr. Prabhakar

At 5:00 pm AIT&M

Aastha went to Mr. prabhakar when she was done with her official formalities then she went to attend her classes . Shlok came to meet Mr. Prabhakar took all the details of her from him and an evil smirk appeared on his face .

Next day morning-

Shlok at ANJALI GIRLS HR. SEC.SCHOOL'

Mrs Pillai- hello shlok sir how come you here in anything serious?

Shlok- no Mrs. Pillai nothing I am here to check profile of faculty member bring that for me please.

Shlok checked all profiles finally found profile of aastha he smirked and enquired about her and told mrs. Pillai that this girl is just a graduate she can not work here as I will spoil our reputation . Mrs. Pillai tried her level to convince him but he was rigid at his point so finally she decided to terminate aastha from the job which she joined yesterday only. Then shlok came out of principal room and went near to peon he handed him some money and asked him to say something to aastha when she will come back from principal office saying then he left . Latter on aastha was called she was given termination letter she was crying hard but no had courage to convince shlok for that. She came out of office wiping her tears and suddenly peon rushed towards her asking her not to worry she will be getting a better job than this and then finally said that there in an opening for PA in Agnihotri head office she can try her luck there . aastha felt little relieved and moved to Agnihotri head office . she reached their waited for 2 hour till her turn came finally it was her name that was called and she got up to go inside the cabin .

While shlok heart was racing fast as he wanted to see aastha for so long he had a intense firing desire of having her near to him she knocked the door he said come in pretending to be engrossed in the file work.


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Edited by pt311288 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow grt nice update continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Cunning fox Shlok...


nice story, please update soon
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nice updates, i didnt realise you had updated past chapter 3, you might need to update the title so we know when there is an update.
story is nice, shlock is smart and eager to meet her, dont think his intentions are good?? looking forward to more updates.

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