Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 18)

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rupamudra

@arshirupa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#921

3 to 5 days
ok we will wait

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daffodils06

@daffodils06

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Posted: 11 years ago

#922

3-4 days is long..lik really long...looong...

but jab baath addiction ki he tho...we hav no choice but to wait...

on a serious note, u tak as much as time u want...we will b waiting...eagerly...

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lujainshaikh

@lujainshaikh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#923

the only thing is keep bugging me is y they r nt behaving like a real couple.😳...atleast he should make one move to show her that he has feeling for her and they can be a better couple 😊...i want arnav to make a move as early as possible...he cant just ignore her nd think as if shez sum kind of unwanted responsibility on him 😳...plz make khushi's efforts worth it 😊...nd ofcourse improve her cooking skills too 😆...update soon ...atleast in 3 days..CAN'T survive 5 days widout ur awesome update!! 😉

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login2if4ipkknd

@login2if4ipkknd

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Posted: 11 years ago

#924

Another fantabulous chapter. Anyone can write a love story and pepper it with sex but you are able to infuse tenderness into the relationship you write about, that is very endearing. I loved the part where he thinks he might need silence too that was funny. Humour and tenderness , its a fantastic combo. Keep writing 😃

This time she rolled her eyes. 'When I'she looked at him sharply 'flap my whole body like a fish out of water and sweat like a pig in the middle of the night without any apparent reason' she paused and looked at Arnav, who swallowed a grin that was threatening to bubble out 'that time buaji makes me sleep like this. And the massage works every single time. It'll work for you too'.I might need silence as well

Love the passage pasted above!