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Posted: 11 years ago



If you wish to read more of this story, please refer to this NOTE (it's on Thread 30 in case the link does not work).

If you want access to my blog (open for all as of now), please PM or Scrap me. You can also email me at updates.from.anonymous@gmail.com

Cheerz!
Edited by Anony_mous - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

1st time commenting on your work
read the whole thing pre week ,

loved it so much ...i was waiting for this update


khushi loves to be his wife &is playing the role honestly .Arnav has easily became a part of her life but she feels that she can not become his companion...Arnav being Arnav not helping her also but khushi I m sure , u will b his life soon & u will help him come out from his shell ..well khushi u dnt know how much possessive arnav is when it comes to u ..:)

Arnav still get nightmares & khushi is tensed about it & he is also not helping her by refusing all she offers to make him better but khushi is khushi right , I know she will find her route

ha ha so Arnav thought that khushi knows his sleeping secrets but yes now khushi knows how her arnav sleeps & she is trying hard to fight the new sensation ..:) i want to know how long u both will go like this :p

Waiting to read rest of their journey impatiently , I know it will b awesome

Edited by Meghipk - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update A as usual!!! It is nice to see that Khushi is trying to take the role of the wife serious. The whole chapter from Khushi's point of view was nice and totally an Arshi chapter😊 Aww she was cute putting him to sleep and found out how she was sleeping from the past month😉 please update soon!!!!
Edited by anu1017 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome part
LoVed it
But a bit short
Edited by tina_1234 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
,uah for this update..you totally stole my heart away niether i thought to read such a light but heart gripping part..!
it was totally unexpected but the way you show kushi consern was awesome..i was soo happy reading update..you make me smile a dreaming smile :)..totally loved it..it was romantic but held a sidnificance..
Arnav need and partner and i am glad kushi with her inocece provided him with that heart warming comfort buddy..
if i dont like your writting before now i love it and crazy about it:)..


my fav part was this one


'You know...' Khushi propped the other elbow on her knee and cradled her face in the palm, breaking his beloved silence.


I knew it. It was too good to last.


'.... when I have nightmares...' she proceeded unaffected.


'I don't have nightmares' he glared at her and lied through his teeth.


Dream or whatever it was, was bad enough. 'Ofcourse' she back tracked immediately not wanting to upset him. 'When I am stressed out...' she picked up a different tangent.


'I am not stressed out'.


This time she rolled her eyes. 'When I' she looked at him sharply 'flap my whole body like a fish out of water and sweat like a pig in the middle of the night without any apparent reason' she paused and looked at Arnav, who swallowed a grin that was threatening to bubble out 'that time buaji makes me sleep like this. And the massage works every single time. It'll work for you too'.




muah for this..you sone a great job and ahh so every night is torture for arnav but finally you saw kushi's torture

these were happy points now i'll come towards the scene which grip my heart./.the scene during sameer's operation and kushi try to hold his hand but he didnt allow.my heart went out for arnav..how much damaged he is:(


fabolus update loved it:)..love you for this:)

Edited by MrMrsChiping. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
That was one super update
Really loved it
Khushi is sooo cute and innocent but wants to be a caring wife too
Loved their late nite convo and then the sleeping conditions 😳
Pls do continue soon
Thanx
Edited by KtotheM - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
That was a nice and sweet part. Left me smiling at the end of it.

Loved it, how you, in plain and simple words, put out the difference in being a companion and a habit. That was great.

I really liked your approach of taking this story forward with one step at a time.

Khushi, it seems, has understood that for their relation to work she has to make Arnav open up to her first. For that to happen she has to give him time but also make him realize that she will be there for him always. She also needs to understand that its not just the matter of trust for Arnav but also his fear of his vulnerability to be used against him and his insecurity that maybe she doesn't like being married to him.

As for Arnav if he really wants this marriage to last forever then he has to let her in his life and share his life with her in true sense. That doesn't mean just sharing his room but his insecurities and turmoils. He has to let himself depend on her and make her believe that she can depend on him.

Nice one. Loved Khushi insistence on staying up for him and making him sleep first. Her helping him sleep threading her hands through his hairs was so simple yet beautiful. And then Arnav encasing her in his arms while asleep was great. Its high time she realizes what, or precisely who the weight is.

Waiting for the next one.
Edited by nerdy_Nisha93 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice chapter...

liked the way u take this story after one month of their marriage how arnav and kushi feel towards each other and their pov...

liked the way kushi trying to understand arnav and also trying to be friendly,and telling him that she will be there for him...hoping soon she will find aranv trust issues and his insecurities...and than it will be easy for her...i loved it thew ay she stubbornness told rnav that she will wait for him no matter what they will sleep together...

and for arnav he has to let kushi in first other wise unknowingly he is hurting kushi...now kushi knows every day arnav is hugging her while sleeping...

thank u for the lovely chapter and pm...can not wait to read for their morning...

cheers...




Edited by kushiarnav1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Finally a chapter on their married life!

I guess we all in our enthusiasm over their marriage had thought that now everything would happen fast and soon they would fall in love. But this chapter made me realise that getting married didn't mean that everything would happen smoothly and life would be full of romance! N in reality this does not happen! So thank you for keeping the consistency of the characters intact!

Its already been one month and arnav had not opened up! This definitely shows how badly he is messed up and how deeply rooted his trust issues are! I mean i never imagined that khushi would have to deal with so much! Yes arnav has never been an easy person to live with but y do i feel he has become even more difficult to live with after marriage!

Secondly my love n respect for khushi is rising with every update! She might be naive but her biggest plus point is her pure, selfless nature and her fighting spirit! She knows she has an uphill task in front of her but she is not deterred by it! Innocence along with courage is a very powerful combination, n this combination along with her persistence will help her in winning arnav's trust!
I loved how khushi didnt give up at all and finally arnav had to concede!

And i loved how slowly romantic feelings are beginning to make their place in their lives! Khushi is finally feeling those tingling sensations and its definitely a start!
The onus is largely on khushi and she is doing her bit but i want to see arnav doing his bit too! Even its 99percent khushi, one percent still has to come from arnav! So m waiting to see some change in him too!! Yes i know it will take time but a beginning can be made!

N i loved the massage! And the whole sleeping arrangement! N again loved khushi as she gave preference to arnav's sleep over her discomfort!!

Waiting for the next part!
Edited by Nandz - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aaja Piya Tohe Pyaar Doon, Gori Baiyyaan Tope Vaar Doon
Kis Liye Tu, Itna Udaas
Sukhe Sukhe Honth, Ankhiyon Me Pyaas
Kis Liye Kis Liye Ho,
Aaja Piyaa ..

Jal Chuke, Hain Badan Kayi
Piya Isii Aag Mein
Thake Hue In Haathon Ko
Dede Mere Haath Mein
Ho, (Sukh Mera Lele, Main Dukh Tere Leloon)
Main Bhi Jiyoon Tu Bhi Jiye Ho,
Aaja Piya Tohe Pyaar Doon, Gori Baiyyaan Tope Vaar Doon


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AWESOME CHAPTER

So arnav singh araizada married a lively chirpy girl but unable to share his real self with her, though marriage is not just about sharing house, bedroom or providing essential basic things to your spouse marriage also includes other things too like sharing your fears, vulnerabilities, liking, disliking and so on.

And after reading this chapter I think arnav hardly pay attention to this side of the marriage that by allowing a girl in your personal space you are unable to hide anything from her she will know every in and out of your life whether you like it or not and here we are talking about khushi who is highly sensitive when its comes to her loved ones and after2 month she is on right track she is paying attention more on these lines why arnav is like this why he is an introvert, why he kept hidden his emotions and feelings in side his heart in this chapter she is thinking like a wife not like his friend.

And this is the major step for khushi, she declare it openly that she is his wife she has every right to comfort her husband. And man like arnav singh raizada really want a verbal declare every time and her unexpected declaration actually sooths his aching heart a lot and finally he have a clue that she doesn't dislike it, so he talks to her softly and not venting his frustration on her I must say nice progression on arnav's part.

Sometimes her naivety and sometime her maturity did the trick and after that arnav hardly have any choice so he let it go his stubborn ways and always mellowed down a bit.

Just love the protectiveness part she is protective towards him for so long I mean before marriage, nobody badmouth him or misunderstand him it's a really nice touch it shows she was so much into this friendship, arnav provoke different sentiments in her and it was surprising for her as well.

Just love the way she sooth him and she is ready to do anything just to make him content and peaceful, though sadu singh raizada is highly reluctant but he has hardly any choice because now he have a persistent wife who hardly give up, finally he felt good and relaxed, her massage or her touch sooth his anxiety and calm his nerves. The warmth he missed in his childhood he gets it after his marriage his wife actually babying him and he like it very much.

First time khushi anrav singh riazada declare it to herself she like being his wife another huge step in their story, she is coming out of the friendship zone she is questioning him as his wife, want to sooth his pain as a wife, she is worried for him like a wife, admiring her husband and even want to know what arnav exactly think about her simply love it.

Finally arnav singh raizada awaken some feminine instincts in her though he was sleeping peacefully but still he provoke some sexual tension in her body poor khushi, her mind and heart was completely out of control unable to fathom what going on .but the part I like the most was his possessive hold and that hold seems so familiar to khushi. It seems very familiar and extra ordinary and arnav is her husband so he has full right over her she is willing to give him every right on her.

This chapter covers khushi transition she accepted arnav as her husband now she is coming out of friend zone and want to be his wife in true sense.


Edited by faree - 11 years ago

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