Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 18)

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sphobic

@sphobic

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Posted: 11 years ago

#491

Hi, Writer ji!!

long time, right??😃

read the last chapter, and that was just fabulous...

i loved it!!!!!!!!!!

but now i m being little impatient...means kab? kab? when they will see eachother as husband and wife??...Arnav is happy just by making khushi his permanently and Khushi is happy with all the other things of marriage except her husband...

i agree with your points...but as a said i m little impatient...

and Sumer and Khushi convo was fabulous..i liked that Sumer had not told everything about Arnav's past... its Arnav's work to do...

sooo thats it...

sorry for the late comment and also a short one but i m busy with exams :(

Love!!!

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sochanatha

@sochanatha

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#492

from his shifting and snuggling into his 'pillow' , then his morning run, khushi's waking up... there awkward and lil chat in the bedroom, the scene in the breakfast table.. i loved it all...
ahhh... khushi finally knows abt the boy Arnav.. at least she has the glimpse of it now...and im more eager to know how she handles it from now on...and i can wait to see their journey towards each other, to love which they are yet to discover .. together...
beautiful and soulful chapter once again.. anony..
looking forward to next one..

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ankitamishra201

@ankitamishra201

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#493

waiting ...plzzz update soon ...

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joy_of_life

@joy_of_life

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#494

hey the 3-4 days have passed we all are just glued to our lappys waiting for the next chapter
update soon pleeese

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joy_of_life

@joy_of_life

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#495

hey the 3-4 days have passed we all are just glued to our lappys waiting for the next chapter
update soon pleeese

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gifttag

@gifttag

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#496

I have read last few chapters together and the word that comes to my mind is WOW and I was really missing not being able to read my favourite FF MKM on my holidays.

I missed my cute baby khush's and my handsome and complicated devil Arnav's wedding. I was like Awww with Khushi dressing up and admiring herself in her new finery any girl would do that...that was so naturally written and I absolutely loved to read that.

Sleeping arrangement...in all the hustle bustle they both overlooked that one particular fact but obviously I didn't and I loved the flustered Khushi and didn't know what to do Arnav...for now they have sorted it out but how long it's going to last is anybody's guess.

How dare they made fun of khushi's first 'rasoi' ..she made such an effort to make auger free 'halwa' for her Arnavji...poor Arnav didn't anticipate so many ' rasams' post wedding, well apart from having Khushi permanently in his clutches and away from Rishab's reach he didn't think much, did he?

I absolutely adore this story and the way it's progressing... Love it love it love it.

Sorry for this disjointed review as all my thoughts are jumbled up, will try and do better in the next one. Promise.

Please continue soon.

Thanks for all the notifications for the updates.

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aleezay

@aleezay

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#497

can we expect update tmwrw????? yaar im misiing the update

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Farha Naz

@farha_ipkknd

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#498

can we expect an early morning update.??? please

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Nafeesa

@NafeesaMajeed

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#499

I love your story

I always have been a silent reader but reading your updates i want to say thank you

Please update soon

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Soniya

@TUKI.MICKY

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 11 years ago

#500

I'm really late in commenting this time 😔 But really it was a fabulous update... The morning scene, Khushi's confusion at the dinner table on getting special attention from Arnav... Gosh!! she is really a cutie pie... Loved Sumer and Khushi's conversation, perfect daddy to his laddoo... Wonder what will she do after learning all the truth about Arnav's past life...

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