Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 18)

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thulasi_arshi

@thulasi_arshi

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#101

hey...i'm commenting on page 16..sweet 16

1st para

"started bitterly ends with warmness"

"he used to resort to hugging soft toys as a replacement of a loving parent cuddling and patting him to sleep"

how pathetic he was

"so he switched to hugging gender neutral pillows. It was a habit now."

"Like a garden full of roses" ..arnav hugging her..his girl,his wife,his life,his soul,his happiness...his khushi

hmmm..pillow to khushi..this replacement must be purely bliss to him na

"He assessed that the only thing that was keeping her from falling off was, well, his tight hold over her midriff which was peeking from the pale blue satin sleeveless PJ top that she was wearing which had ridden up."

OMG...HOT dammit..how we will bear suhagraat upate

(suchi..here activate gutter mind wa😆😆)

ufff..khushi too both acknowledged lately..

that they married..no more single's

"Can you get ready with that on your hands? Is that thing permanent?"

what the..sadu sadu

try to search A dammit before it vanish

"'What? I only married Arnavji so that I can stay in this house. Now you can not take the perks that come with it away from me"

she doesn't aware that she slightly touched wrong button..but its slightly near to the FACT FACT...which do not like to hear even little bit by her husband

" 'Without elder people pinching my cheek as if I me wearing a saree is eighth wonder of the world which needs special reviewing, or buaji putting a kohl dot behind my ear every time I decide to wear one, or without my..."

hmmm...i dono why..all parents fuss about this issue..experienced same..

but unlike khushi i do not like to wear sari frequently

sumer fear was understandable..coming to promise thing,,

" And she planned to take care of him even without any promises." ..

i'm relaxed only after reading this line..do not like to read that khushi start to love only bcos of promise..yeah..no one can love anybody for compensation n promises until they feel them self..atleast a DOT.. they can took care n show affection..but not surely love..hope khushi ll not fall under this category ..

love..it have to come in is own way

enough of my blah blah

lovely update hope your wrist well now..take care..update soon

ps: sruti..if update delayed like this..afraid that u ll win the bet😳☺️😆

tanu di..finally u commented on 1st page

couldn't active in CS for a month..CSG..miss u all🤗

Edited by thulasi_arshi - 11 years ago

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mamidis

@mamidis

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#102

Very nice update. Thanks.

So Khushi started thinking about marriage .. great ... I understand her point .. if she married outsider then things would have been different. Now thats not the case.

Hope she will understand her husband better now.

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premdewaani

@premdewaani

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#103

Superb update dear!!! Loved the bedroom scene in the morning,. Really looking forward to see how their relationship is going to proceed.., nice part:-))

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.ButterCup.

@.ButterCup.

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#104

fantastic update...

beautifully written...

khushi and her bade papa convo was nice..

haha..the way u wrote their waking up scene was hilarious..

plzz..don't kill khushi's bade papa..

especially this line just cracked me up..

God this girl and cluelessness are like best friends forever, he thought with compounded irritation as he left. Can she ever take a hint??

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alex1906

@alex1906

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#105

Awesome chapter. Tge mrng scene was really funny 😆 so khushi is going to take her promise seriously. Cant wait for the nct update. Can u plse pm me ur blog link I wld like to read more of ur work?

cheers

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bellacoolio

@bellacoolio

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#106

Lovely first morning together. The cuddling, the attraction, the blushing, the getting ready was beautifully written! Arnav's childhood was sad...Khushi has a tough job ahead for her...

I am glad your wrist is better now.

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tanvi_arshi

@tanvi_arshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#107

Wonderful update... love the reaction of both arnavji n khushi on the first morning after marriage... love the way khushi didnt change a much after marriage, n arnav is loving it abt it...n loved khushi's answer to bauji @ dining table, samar papa n khushi's talk, arnav's way of tellin khushi while leaving fr office, khushi's confusion, looking fwd for next update...eagerly waiting...update soon..

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rupzloveu

@rupzloveu

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

#108

Loved it
Awesomeee update
Arnav is addicted to khushi ... I loved the Arnav n khushi morning scene ,,,,...
Thanx fr mail.

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kamalinee

@kamalinee

Beginner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#109

Firstly, thank you so much for not letting Sumer tell the whole of Arnav's story to his darling Laado, this is for Arnav to do. When and how that will happen will have to be in your expert hands. It is going to be really interesting to read how an introvert Arnav is going to open up to a chatterbox, guileless, innocent Khushi and more than anything how will Khushi handle Arnav ...will she develop the emotional maturity to handle a complex person like Arnav. The poor girl is clueless as to what is in store for her.Khushi has led a very sheltered and protected life, inspite of her handicap and hence the childishness, which is very cute. The early morning bedroom scene was superbly written and very natural. How are these two ever going to move forward in their relationship ... at this point I can not even imagine it... what with Khushi saying she married so she could wear sarees😆. But she did think about Love so that is a saving grace. Makes me wonder though what her concept of Love is, certainly hope not what she felt for Rishab...her first crush.

Looking forward to what is coming next, and please rest your wrist and rest. Thanks once again.