Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 18)

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rkapoor1382

@rkapoor1382

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#91

Tht was fabulous update
Arnav snuggling khushi n sleeping was awe
Khushi knowing a bit abt Arnav n his past
It wud be gr8 to see hw things change bween thm nw

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JCJS

@JCJS

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#92

Such a cute awesome update just loved it. Ha arnav was sleeping on her it would b a beautiful scene to watch khushi and her morning actist they were cute. Hmm so khushi had a light glimps of her arnavji past and now the love criteria has hit the line. Hope she understands his unsaid words or she let out her love for him as far he is not gone open up any sooner. Just too excited for the next update. Thks for the mail dear.

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rskumar

@rskumar

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#93

Please please dont kill sumer..lovely update..so he actually hugging khushi... 😉 wow..now he knows how they slept 😆 what will happen when khushi comes to know this fact 😆
so sumer finally give some hints to khushi about arnavs past...lets see how see handles this love factor 😆

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deeptha93

@deeptha93

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#94

Awesome chapter! :) i loved the morning bed scene!

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nihasan

@nihasan

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#95

Aaah 5nlly 5nlly an update
was damn waitng 4 diz
n hpe ur feeling bettr nw
loved the part sweez
n i jst hpe khushi takes a first step in their love
wntd mre of diz
cnt soon

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ILoveFF

@ILoveFF

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#96

lovely update... first day after the first night together... superb

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hbkumar

@hbkumar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#97

I am in love with this girl! Bas 😃

One thing always strikes me in your writing..each n every character's thought process, behaviour, reactions n motivations are so consistent with their characterization. And the interplay is so real..the story is as vivid as a screenplay..hats off to you hon..for the lovely story and superlative writing👏

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Usha30

@Usha30

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#98

Thank u so much ... Such an amazing update .
Would love to see how Khushi brings her
Marriage life forward .

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daljeet

@daljeet

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#99

Hey, I absolutely loved it. Worth the wait.

My internals are 2mo, so forgive me for not giving al ong update.

But let me tell you that I loved the beginning and end of the update a lot.

Sumer-Kushi's convo part was done well. And the 'waking up' of the couple was really good too. Kushi's shyness because of the intimacy, naive intimacy in their room was so cute. I loved that you concentrated on that scene. It was so new and beautiful.

When will Kushi realize Arnav looks at her differently and she feel the same .The wait seems so sweet.

Hope u r well now. I had been searching your page each day for update. Hope next update will be sooner!!!!