ArShi FF (Complete): The Ray Of The Dawn (Thread 1)

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Parvathi Devi

@honey-sweety

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#141

Awesome back to back updates Sister...

How was your exams going on dear... You should allot some time for your didi also u know that right 😕

Arnav is such a understanding perons, he dont want to scare kushi so he wanted to take the things slowly...

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JCJS

@JCJS

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#142

Nice update loved it. The part where khushi is called princess was beautiful. Poor soul is in lot of turmoil. Thks for the pm dear.

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bhagyathara

@bhagyathara

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#143

good update .its good that khushi started to feel for him .she wont open up soon but she cant resist him for long .arnav could understand her inside out .his attempts to make her feel good are tremendous .such a gentleman arnav

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Geeta singh

@sweetdesire

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#144

Hey dear

Love both the parts

Really written beautifully

Khushi is somehow start relating Aranv to her dream boy

Hope she soon realize that he the same person

Love Arnav's determination and love for Khushi

Payal is well as always best friends anyone can wish for

Her Convo with Arnav is too emotional

Love the way Arnav Called Khushi Princess

After all he is her Prince charming

I am just falling in love with Arnav more and more

He is so humble and down to earth

Waana read more

So do try to continue soon

Thanks for the PM
Take care

Lots of Love

Geet

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beenish

@beenish248

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#145

outstanding update candy .., your update alwayz warm my heart the way you potrayed Emotions i can't describe how i felt , it's not new if I say i Fell in Love with Your arnav All over Again , it was heart warming update i love arnav spirit to make her his , and i simply loved payal here shre is a true sister yarr .., my heart wentout for khushi , that gupta's are too much i simply wnt to kick them Arrgh .., loved it candy .. Bueatiful update 👏

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henamani

@henamani

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#146

this is the first FF that has arnav wooing khushi. him acknowledging his love and trying to make khushi fall in love with him; its too good :)

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sruthick

@sruthick

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#147

Amazing update...
Lovd it...
Beautifully writtn...
Arnav s so loving nd caring...
Eagrly waitng 4 d nxt part..
Cntinue soon

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kaira101

@kaira101

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#148

Loved both the updates
Again my like button on my phone isn't working
Eagerly waiting for the next part
Thanx for the pm
Continue soon

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chaitali

@chaitali12

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#149

hey ..
superb concept. .bt I loved "Its all about us" more..
koi ni dono tere hi stories hai.. 😉
Bt you knw reason kya hai??
In dat story. .even in their difficult times arshi are together. .
though even here they will be together. .
the princess is ready to be taken by her prince charming ❤️

good going 👍🏼