ArShi FF (Complete): The Ray Of The Dawn (Thread 1) - Page 16

Originally posted by: indhuza

awesome start for my saturday with ur update...

Originally posted by: -Keerthi-

I really liked it..

It was lovely update..

Originally posted by: Chandni..

It's awesome

u very well portrayed arnav emotions..

wonderfully written..

loved it!

Originally posted by: crazyqueen

suuuper.

the way khushi confessed and payals words,arnav thoughs everything was awesome and i just loved it very very much.

Originally posted by: Happytwinkle

beautiful updates

loved them

thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: Apoorvarani

Awesome Update Dear!!!

Originally posted by: sonakshimehta29

M so happy d way d story is progressin..arnavs love fr khushi is unimaginable..he is madly in love wid his princess
N khushi is also fallin fr her choclate brown prince..
Arnav is damm adorable..kash meko b aisa prince charming mill jae..
Khushi is a strong woman..n arna
v ill defo realise her dis!!
😊 😃

Originally posted by: AR_EternalLove

omg omg...👏👏

awesome ud dear👏👏

me faintwa😆...what a perfect surprise yaar.😃..u made my weekend 😳...two parts wowweee😳😳

part A

even being tensed soo much mere presence of khusi had a strong effect on arnav..😊.he even forgot that he didnt knew direction of museum😆..hehe good he wasnt caught😉..he felt at peace when he reached museum..he was soo happy to see it..😃.and when he pull door for khusi she felt his gentleman side adding to her long list for arnav...cute she is falling for him...😉

khusi told him about garden and when arnav went to valley view he was at peace and so was khusi.😊.she was happy to see him like this.😊.and was amazed as her heart is being mended just by his presence.😳..she was falling for him..😉.and when she speak his name arnav too felt different for first time...he want to comfort her in every way..😳.but he has to be slow...but he has started his work by just telling her indirectly the way life is dealt...😊.he assured her indirectly that after bad phase there is good one awaiting...😃

khusi was stunned as she didnt imagined that arnav will be able to know about her soo well 😆...she was confused as does he know about her and what she is suffereing from??😕 well she didnt know that arnav has come for her and knows everything about her..😊.but sadest part was that khusi kas been broken sooo much that she didnt have strength to lose anything now.😭..and she want to maintain these moments as it is...as she wont be able to lose him if she went further..😭..gosh i feel soo bad for khusi ...i just wish arnav make her trust him forver😊

arnav knew what khusi was feeling after his conversation.😊..but he has to be slow.😊..all through the way to his rest room he was controling himself ..hehe😆..soo much lover boy..😉.well after his praising of room or to say he particularly used word love hit khusi well..😳.she was in daze...her heart was telling her that arnav is that person😳 ...but mind was confused..😕.arnav was shocked when she asked his identity..if she remembred him.😲..but she passed out.😭..which freaked out arnav...but he was sure of his answer to her one query ..he has come for her now..😊..i just loved the way he took care of her...😳

Part B

arnav called payal to be with her...and she managed somehow to send him to rest and told everything to aman too...that was good .👏..she is soo caring yaar..😊.they way she scolded khusi was her way..😆she cant see her like this😭...she cried so much and it not only hurt payal but arnav too .😭..and he cant take this much now..😭.i just loved how arnav was resless and couldnt sleep and came to see khusi when payal msg her...he wants to be with her.😊..he want to take revenge for making khusi this state..😡.but he has to take small steps at time..😊.he was ryt he has to make khusi love him and most importantly trust him..😊

i liked how payal gave her strength and boost her confidence 😊...she has been a fighter..she can fight this.😊.and she indirectly told her that her life will change soon and her prince charming will come and may be he has come..😉.she was ryt khusi is natural princess and her prince has come.😊..all she has to do is follow her heart...😳

finally payal tlaked to arnav and she told him the reason for her fainting😕 ..omg cant believe that .😲.she wasnt allowed to sleep and hasnt ate anything and been forced to work just because she dined with them?? 😡seriously those three should thrown out of this world.😡..creeps...arnav consoled payal while his heart was bleeding for khusi .😭..he assured her that he will do it fast and in his boss way...but he has to make khusi comfortable with him and bring his khusi out of shell first...😊

john and arnav conversation was very good.😊..he made john so comfortable and he too liked him soo much .😊.well arnav is warm hearted and respect such hardworking persons .😊.. and john instanly made him bhai...hehe that great..😊

khusi met him when he asked about her paintings and she didnt remember her convo with him before passing out..😊.well good for arnv..she felt good when john told her about his convo with arnav😊...she felt more for him😳..he was a prince charming for sure...😳 she remember payal words but she is afraid of dreaming anything now...

i just loved how arnav praised her work and how he told her about he feels about her paintings and the emotions she conveyed thru it😳..khusi was soo dazed and especially when arnav called her princess and told her that he was left baffled about her talents😳...awww soo cutee😳...khusi never seen such admiration from anyone.😊..it was all soo genuine from him...😳

the way she blushed and he pointed out this 😉and the way he was holding her hand made her heart and entire being alive😳...well certainly khusi now know she is princess .😳..and she is thinking him as her prince charming..😃..well arnav knows that she is his princess for sure and soon he will take away his princess to love her and cherish her forever...😳

her dhak dhak goes again...i just hope arnav took her misery away soon😳

waiting for next update😊

Originally posted by: Surya.Ravi

good...

Originally posted by: vidya.sanjay

So the prince is ready to sweep his princess off her feet:)

Originally posted by: ranogill

I hope arnav would be successful in his mission...

Originally posted by: suji5

awesome update
loved the bond between Arnav and Payal

Originally posted by: AnjuRish

hope arnav gets strength to go thru this storm

Originally posted by: anabiya1

Superbly awsom update...
Feeling too bad for khush ...:(
Per arnav hai na ;)

Originally posted by: -Xpress-

Hats off to a job well done !!!
awesome updates ...loved them

Originally posted by: niya55

Really very good update.

Poor khushi.

Originally posted by: daisydee425

Amazing

Originally posted by: gail-ipk

omg superb and fantastic update...Slow arnav..one step ahead...in kushi's case was awesome...kushi has so much pain and sufferings...dnt how she was going to openup with her prince charming arnav...how he was going to bring out the secrets from her...such a complicated person kushi was...waiting eagerly for the next...

Originally posted by: sutapasarbabhom

As always asom update kushi sufferd too much nw its time to get hapines so nw we r waiting what wil arnav action thanx for pm

Originally posted by: ARSHIANDI

awesome dear,soo beautiful written

at last dhak dhak dhak dhak haaayee😳

no words to describe it

🤗

Originally posted by: mwep

wow 😃

double dhamaka😛👏

i luved the update a lot it was amazing dear😛

arnav n khushi understands each other so well they can see behind the mask which they both keep before the world

luved payal too

dhak dhak started😳

continue soon

Originally posted by: ragvir.fan

very nice updates

Originally posted by: Megha-Sobti

Awwhhh! <'3
Chaverah, ths wuz one beautiful chappie ..
ILove Lovee Loveeddd It !! *_*

Arnav here, iz soo down-to-earth !!
His calm, composed & Caring self towardz khushi iz defo a treat to watch! :*
Love the way hez determined to brng khushi out of her shell !! <'3

As for Payal ..
Awww. <'3
She One Adorable-Pie !! :*
Shez perfect for Raizada Family in all the ways ..
& Iam very mchh lukin' to c her pampering khushi after their respective marriages! ;) <'3

Will be eagerly waiting for next saturday ..

Originally posted by: canapoem

Khushi's suffering is very sad. though Arnav wants to take things slowly, I hope its not too slow.

Originally posted by: DIYA_21

Finally Khushi's feeling is developing for Arnav and it is shown by her face..
Arnav's patient is showing fruit...
Waiting for next soon..
Hope Khushi now don't go in her shell..

Originally posted by: saj111

Chaverah read all d chapters till 9A&B and dats d reason couldn't comment earlier wen received pms 4 previous chapter . Sorrry Sorrry Lakhoon Sorrry, Extremely Sorrry . Now coming to d updates 😊 .

Chaverah it was so heart felt chapter's till 8th chapter. Really felt sad and even made us cry seeing d pain and deep hurt were its even impossible to get healed . No human would survive dis harsh life which is equal to a death .

Errr made poor girl to do all house chore to d death of her to make Khushi herself to leave d house so dat witch can demolish it into a resort and even used her lust to gain d power to get d property in her name and did very best dat khushi wouldn't dare to claim her rights in court .

ASR has indeed very wrong of not contacting Guptas for 5 long yrs wen ASR himself had all d power to break his enemies , but didnot even once consider to see wat has gone wrong in these yrs.

Loved how ASR was trying his best to bring back d old Khushi from her shell and Payal knows how to trigger d right string to make khushi feel dat its about Arnav she was talking without mentioning his name wen Arnav himself was protraiting a Prince Charmings role fantasticly to get into her heart oblivious to her .

Update soon Chaverah, can't wait to see how Arnav is going to be successful in his mission to bringing back his old khushi and destroying d witch's in Gupta Mansions. Thanks a lot 4d pm buddy .

Originally posted by: rockingsoni

Beautifully written...

Khushi went through a lot..

Its high time she gets love from her prince charming...

Originally posted by: Neha2014

Beautiful story!!!!!!!
Sad for Kushi..hope Arnva gets her out of that hell very soon...

Originally posted by: sincereme

Awesome update...
Just loved it...
Continue soon...

Originally posted by: katj

Lovely story of yours..
Thanks for the PM

Originally posted by: dumas

Another beautiful update well done a lot has been hidden from her hope she won't feel betrayed when she find s out the truth love how she keeps reacting to his words amazing update thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: Arshicraze13

Awsum update absolutely fantastic must see what arnav does to free khushi from distress

Originally posted by: Chocolate_barun

superb update
payal and arnav's talk was so emotional
and arnav calling khushi princess was so cute
thanks for pm
update soon

Originally posted by: honey-sweety

Awesome back to back updates Sister...

How was your exams going on dear... You should allot some time for your didi also u know that right 😕

Arnav is such a understanding perons, he dont want to scare kushi so he wanted to take the things slowly...

Originally posted by: JCJS

Nice update loved it. The part where khushi is called princess was beautiful. Poor soul is in lot of turmoil. Thks for the pm dear.

Originally posted by: bhagyathara

good update .its good that khushi started to feel for him .she wont open up soon but she cant resist him for long .arnav could understand her inside out .his attempts to make her feel good are tremendous .such a gentleman arnav

Originally posted by: sweetdesire

Hey dear

Love both the parts

Really written beautifully

Khushi is somehow start relating Aranv to her dream boy

Hope she soon realize that he the same person

Love Arnav's determination and love for Khushi

Payal is well as always best friends anyone can wish for

Her Convo with Arnav is too emotional

Love the way Arnav Called Khushi Princess

After all he is her Prince charming

I am just falling in love with Arnav more and more

He is so humble and down to earth

Waana read more

So do try to continue soon

Thanks for the PM
Take care

Lots of Love

Geet

Originally posted by: beenish248

outstanding update candy .., your update alwayz warm my heart the way you potrayed Emotions i can't describe how i felt , it's not new if I say i Fell in Love with Your arnav All over Again , it was heart warming update i love arnav spirit to make her his , and i simply loved payal here shre is a true sister yarr .., my heart wentout for khushi , that gupta's are too much i simply wnt to kick them Arrgh .., loved it candy .. Bueatiful update 👏

Originally posted by: henamani

this is the first FF that has arnav wooing khushi. him acknowledging his love and trying to make khushi fall in love with him; its too good :)

Originally posted by: sruthick

Amazing update...
Lovd it...
Beautifully writtn...
Arnav s so loving nd caring...
Eagrly waitng 4 d nxt part..
Cntinue soon

Originally posted by: arhi101

Loved both the updates
Again my like button on my phone isn't working
Eagerly waiting for the next part
Thanx for the pm
Continue soon

Originally posted by: chaitali12

hey ..
superb concept. .bt I loved "Its all about us" more..
koi ni dono tere hi stories hai.. 😉
Bt you knw reason kya hai??
In dat story. .even in their difficult times arshi are together. .
though even here they will be together. .
the princess is ready to be taken by her prince charming ❤️

good going 👍🏼

Originally posted by: sana11

khushi had a flash back...

they both are so much at ease with one another...

loved the museum s description

arnav panicked seeing her faint..

am glad she s fine now..

khushi has suffered a lot...

payal was controlling herself not to break down...

loved john n arnav s bonding...

so much unsaid ..yet he s there for her..

fabulous update 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

update the next soon dear😃

Originally posted by: Arshika_arshi

Wonderful story. It touched my heart...continue soon..
Plz PM me when u update..

Originally posted by: seeta_naips

just read all parts of this story

loved it

I hope Arnav is able to get Khushi out of that miserable place
and destroy Mrs Gupta and Siya and Reah

Originally posted by: anamnoor

Awesome update

Originally posted by: monasha

When are we getting the next update??
please update soon

Originally posted by: meniranjana00

wow.. good one.. like it