manvir ek pyaar ka ehsaas jo bandhe in do dill ko ek saath - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
nice update within one day
they both are came so close
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
Hello dear!😃

First of all, sorry for late reply...😳

And yeah, don't feel bad for less response... Its is actually good. Just give sometime and every thing will be fine and also pm people... because its difficult to access in fan fiction forum, many will not be aware of the story!😃


Coming to the story, The updates are just awesome...👏👏👏👏👏

I'm also a Manvir fan... so loving it a lot!😳


Manvi's and Viren's character is nice... They are gonna share a special bond, I know😆


One year later... hmmm, that means its taking a leap...😉

Interesting!😉 waiting for the update!😛

Take care!😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
haw thanks alot for the update dear its cute
thanks alot for the pm
awesome update dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
Awsm update. ...
Luved it...
Lift scene...huge scene...their like and dislike wndrful...
Totly mindblowing...
1 yrs later...means...
There is leap in the story...
Egrly waiting for nxt update...
Update sooon...
Thanx alot for pm dea...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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1 yr later in the lives of manvi vireen they had completley fallen in love wid each but had not confessed abt their feelings to eachother this 1 year had changed a lot in there lifes turning their world tht they lived in upside down in this 1 year they were really close the staff assumed they were in a relationship but the gossip of the singhania office was just their closeness the girls were just jealous and enveyd manvi for her relationship wid viren but they weren't bothered what others thought abt them they played pranks, pulling each others legs,sharing the sorrows and joys they had hanging around going home together as when manvi had no where to go since the tennant's house she stayed at told her to leave had moved into the house of viren on his saying the girs of the office just thought abt it n hated manvi as they had dreams for this smart sexy dashing charmer but manvi took our dreams away no one could do anything manvi viren spent most of their time watching movies or shopping eating dinner together whether at a restaurant or home it was tht they couldn't live sleep or eat or do anything without not seeing each they were in love but the words which were in their hearts just needed to come out letting each other know wht they felt for taking the next step of their relationship
present day after 1 year
viren was coming back from mumbai has he had a big business deal he did insist manvi to come but she had refused she wanted to give viren a surprise when he come back the surprise was the feelings tht she wanted they loved each other immensely n the time was for manvi to confess she decorated the house with candles red roses she dressed up in a beautiful short red dress,curled hair was her hairstyle and wore heels to impress her prince charming she waited eargely for her charmer to walk in tht day for manvi was the slowest each second for her was like waiting for thousands of years viren's flight had landed he though manvi im coming he quickly got into the car and could wait for the second tht he could see manvi and embrace her in his arms this separation had an effect on both they were missing each other tht they would sleep eat or drink properly but just thought abt each other viren saw a flower shop and told the driver to stop he rushed and went to get some red roses for manvi he knew tht she loves them he buyed them n got back and told the driver to go after 45 min manvi had everything ready candle light and was perfectly dressed and was excited she just heard virens car and hid behind the door viren came and saw tht the lights were turned off he was quite surprised and thought were has manvi gone she did knew tht i was coming anyway he thought i go in n when she comes i will give her a surprise not knowing tht their is a surprise for him

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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
Awesome dear.
Thanx for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
nice update u take one year leap
and now she going to confess her
feeling toward him update soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
viren entered the house but is amazed when he sees the decorations and just then 2 hands from the back crawl up his chest hugging him tightly saying i love you viren viren turns and sees tht its manvi n tells her i love u 2 he pulls her closer to his body feeling the fragrance of each other the sensation he takes her lips between his and starts kissing they kiss each other wanting more of each other it turns into a hot steamy passionate d French kiss with manvi pulling his hair while he kisses her both were turned on wet and were ready for the bedroom manvi breaks the kiss and tells him how much she loves him viren also tells her the feelings viren teases manvi aj toh mein tujhe nahi choodoga ek hafta tumse dhoor raha uh ab iss ko pura kar do mujhe paas ane do apne manvi runs viren chases manvi they make a mess in the hall they throwed cushions at each other running up and down manvi then realised tht viren was abt to catch her but she didnt accept defeat and started to run up the stairs not knowing where she was heading she ended up in virens bedroom viren enters and locks the bedroom door and teases manvi ab kaha bach ke jayege manvi shook her head in no viren said yes and manvi started to run again viren said to manvi stop darling u will get hurt just listen to me come w ur baby be a good baby come on maan listen 2 me he was taking slow steps to her while distracting her in his talks and then finally grabs her n says so manvi sweetheart ab kaha bhag kar jao ge manvi is abt to push viren away but ends up falling on the bed with viren falling on top of her they look into each others eyes then viren starts to kiss manvi around her face and the neck manvi blushes and turns her face around she feels viren hand on her spine which gives her a sensationally feeling with tht hand coming up she realises tht viren opens the zip of her dress and takes it off leaving her only in her bikini manvi thought shez not gonna let viren win and decided to turn the tables by turning over and started to crawl over on viren he was in fact enjoying this wild bold manvi tht was hidden behind this bubbly manvi she struggled to get his top off but managed she felt the tickle of viren's hand going towards her stomach and was tickled by viren she could not then control her laugh viren knew this and to tease manvi he kept on tickling her until she was tired and gave up viren then took the advantage and took of her b** and n***** and start to kiss and chew all her body he didnt leave any moment to stop manvi was in a pleasure of deathly pain when viren inserted his into hers she had tears and told him to stop but nothing could have stoped this wild tiger who was haunting today and there had to be someone who had to fall for him manvi moaned and screamed in pain viren told shhh im here nothing is gonna happen u will be fine manvi she screamed but viren inserted his mouth into hers and started to deep kiss manvi had both her hands in virens hair pulling them as she was in pain they enjoyed it like this till morning.
next morning manvi was cuddled in virens arms she got up and kissed viren on his forehead just then she turned to leave she had virens hand holding her so tht she cant go she turned and heard good morning jaan she replied morning sweetheart with both of them smilling at each other she then tells viren
leave her as she needs to go and get ready and tells him tht u should also get ready as we need to go to office viren was like maani stop this let me have a day of and let me just stay in bed wid u i cant afford to miss a chance like dis manvi smiled but slapped the cheeky hand which was touching her t** maan yeh kya he pulled her back into bed and lied over her body and started to smooch those lips which tasted exotic like the tropics for him he then broke the kiss after realising it was 7;30 and gave her a small kiss on the check and left with messing with her open her he loved doing tht to manvi as she would get irritated and then spend hours sorting her messed hair he went for a shower but had left his clothes including his towel out their tht was just a trick to get manvi inside into the shower wid him he had thought abt it when he saw tht it was half 7 and decided to get manvi into the shower babes could u get me my clothes and my towel its out their i forgot but got trapped in viren's morning shower idea...
will be continued from here but will be updated later on

Edited by dreamyrose - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
Thnx dear for back to back updates. ...
Abt update its awsm..
Too hot hottt...
So finly they cnfsd...intrsting...
Egrly waiting for next update...
Kya karen ye dilll mange more...
Update soon..
Thnx alot for pm dea...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
wowww
manvi & viren story ,this is a dream...
like this
thank youuu soo much
please continue soon and pm me

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