manvir ek pyaar ka ehsaas jo bandhe in do dill ko ek saath

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey guys i've read some ff's on manvi viren so it kinda gave me an idead to come up wid something on manvir do please like it and give ur feedback please i would not want any bashing but dont throw the tomatoes and chappalas😉
im writting for the first time i dont how to write i dont know how it will turn out to be but please do bear with it and give ur suggestions so i can improve it thanks



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Manvi a young chirpy girl who enjoys each and every moment of life despite being an orphan she wants to work and take up her responibilites so that can live an easy life she believes in love fairy tales and thinks that her love life will be just like she thinks a life of romance passion begins when she meets viren singhanania.


viren singhania known as vs a billionare rich tycoon got the fame name and wealth including the looks that each girl wants he rules everywhere being each young girls dream who would not want him man seriously hez dashing charming a perfect charmer a cute smile chocolate brown eyes sexy a hot body he has got everything also believes in love this comes true when he meets manvi



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Posted: 11 years ago
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yaar got no feedback no comments😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
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prologue look interesting and don't feel sad send pm
u r story intro u get response and never feel sad u start
u r story slowly every one get know update soon and don't
feel sad
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Posted: 11 years ago
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prologue look interesting and don't feel sad send pm
u r story intro u get response and never feel sad u start
u r story slowly every one get know update soon and don't
feel sad
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Manvi was a chirpy bubbly girl she was like a fresh breeze that she spreads everywhere where ever she goes full of life wants someone to love her completely never letting her go she believed in fairy tales love stories despite being a young modern girl from the 21st century she just believed that their some one out who is just made for her

2 weeks later manvi had recieved a call from the singhania company telling her that she got the job it was quite unexpected for manvi but still it was a great opportunity for her to earn and do do something for herself she had to be there the next at 10 am manvi had no idea what would fate decide in her life but with this offer she did have a sense that her life is taking a new turn but what it would be mqnvi herself has no idea

The next day manvi is rushing herself whizzing around to make sure that is looking perfect to make a nice impression onher first day she left the house and in the 35min she had reached outside the one n only singhanias company it was soo big that left her mind in a complete dazzle it was a stunning she maked her way into this stunning company at the reception she was told to have a seat an viren sir will be any moment n we will send u in she wishes manvi best of luck for the interview she was quiet nice manvi thought to herself

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Guys dis just a little update of the beging gonna be working on manvir love story jus wait n watch it will be interesting do comment thou
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update but short she got
call for interview for his office
waiting there first meeting
update soon and send pm
whenever u update because its
very difficult to search story
from fan fiction
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Posted: 11 years ago
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manvi had waited patiently for her interview she was thristy after waiting for a while n decided tht she might just get herself a drink to get rid of the thirst so went up to the tap to get a drink just then their was a rush saying that viren sir has arrived everyone got up to welcome viren manvi who was standing far back having a drink trying to get a glimpse but failed maybe that was not the meeting viren went into his cabin and manvi went back and sat down she was waiting for the interview just then her name was called and was told to go for her interview at top floor in viren singhania despite that top floor was virens no else had a cabin just viren sir she was like kyaa baat hai baari adaami ke toh yahi kasiyat she had arrived she was nervous before opening the door she prayed to god for the interview on the other end viren who was waiting for miss manvi had recieved a phone call he got up out his chair and walked upto his window just then manvi knocked the door she had opened it and saw viren who had is back facing towards her signiling with his hand to sit pointing in the direction she sat down and just 2 min later viren just turned around saying sorry for n forgot wht he was saying he was totally lost in the beauty of manvi it seemed like tht these two were destined to meet they shared a cute eyelock not long but a little which made these 2 hearts feel something for each it was just a hint of next manvi broke the silence by saying viren sir im manvi her for an interview of your personal secretary he came back to his senses n said yeah nice to meet u... oh im manvi he forwarded his hand for a handshake saying well nice to meet u manvi well manvi manvi also responded to the handshake by forwarding her hand they both smiled to each other feeling the touch the sensation of each other tht drawn them to each other viren had no idea wht to ask manvi n said tht ur on for the job and welcomes her by saying welcome to the singhania company hope u do ur best and thts it well i guess i should show u around manvi he asks he was blushing manvi asked viren sir do u always blush like tht with the duo just burst out laughing looking at each other viren had stopped laughing and was looking at manvi he was like there is something in her which makes me attracted drawn to her even i no nothing abt her manvi suddenly turns and stops laughing when she realises tht viren is silently watching her will update the rest later
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it was awesome
loved the updates
plz cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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manvi shyes when she realises that viren is looking at her her checks turned red viren upon seeing viren she tells him to make a move as you might have work pending so shall we
viren n manvi's tour around the singhania office begins viren shows her everywhere from the canteen to the meeting halls she was so amazed with its interior design the colours were just splendid and praised it she was non stop talking to viren on how much she likes the interior after having a 1hr walk viren tells manvi to cum in his cabin as he will hand her some files which need to be sorted they head towards the cabin of viren they enter the lift the doors are closed but it stops the lights go and manvi hugs viren tightly she pressed herself hard on to him as she was scared from the dark viren too had responded of manvi's hug by hugging her back giving her hopes not to be scared as he is with her they then realised how close they were too each other and had separated from the hug manvi was still scared and was holding viren's hand tightly viren had got his cell out but no signal he asked mavi but she also had no signal they pressed the alarm button which indicates tht the lift has stopped but ufortuntley tht button had not worked manvi n viren just sat down after giving up they began to talk each other where they got to know more of each other viren had asked manvi abt her family where she lives but manvi told at least everything abt herself to viren despite not knowing viren she had the trust in him and shared the joys and sorrows of her life it was the same wid viren they were letting their trust in as they knew tht they could trust each other this lift event brought them closer n became friends in those 2 hours they were like best budies they were getting attracted to each other tht their relationship wid each other had progressed so quickly from 2 hrs from strangers they had the relationship of boss secretary and now best buddies

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