INTOXICATION THREAD #2 / LAST PART UP ON PG 54 :)

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crazy-ash

@crazy-ash

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#441

chap 7-

i want to hug khushi and kiss her!

i wanna murder shyam with my bare hands..

i wanto push arnav off a cliff...

what mistake is arnavs nani talking abt??

why is he punishing himself??

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kondhili

@kondhili

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#442

Once again Jen spins her magical wand and gives us another perfect ending. Another Hamesha...Forever love story that we will always carry in our hearts with a smile on our face.

Loved the entire story to bits jenny and i loved the way you finished it in the end...two souls who are meant to be together find each other and complete one another.

God you are an amazing talented writer who can spin tales of different genres so effortlessly. 👏⭐️

But that bye bye note in the end...😭 Ab mai kya bolon! God i am going to miss you like crazy. All the best and i just don't know what else to say other than i hope i get to see you soon.

PS: For what its worth i unres my res for the previous chapter here.

Please come back fast Jen...Love you!

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ipktouch

@ipktouch

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#443

superb n amazing update..feeling sad that we gonna miss this story...cud u able to give u epilogue?:|i knw its too much to ask for...okay..here arnav was so struggling to ask for forgiveness n he was completely a changed man for kushi..no attitude,no ego..only his ultimate goal was asking forgiveness from n planned to keep her with him ever..kushi has opened his door for light..his darkness gone n he became gentle and kind..nice redemption..kushi wud be so happy that she got love which was unsaid..their heart spoke enough instead in words..arnav gave him a chance n kushi gave her the chance for loving..him..her soul full of him...lovely ending...

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crazy-ash

@crazy-ash

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#444

awesome!

it hurt to see how helpless khushi was...how life succumbed her to surrender to the words cruelty...

i m glad arnav came at the right moment...

thanx for this story/...

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Tithi

@Tirtharupa

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#445

Wonderful Update.
feel pain to see Khushi's condition but our hero came on time,to save her.
An excellent emotional and suspension story.
Waiting for more more ffs.. Thanks :)

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#446

She gave it back to him. Good for her. Heart wrenching to read about the desperate length she was willing to go to to make money for food. The sad part is that there are women like her out there who are in similar situations. Glad he did not give up and these 2 emotionally scarred individuals can now begin the process of healing . . .

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S.B.

@-Xpress-

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#447

Brilliant...Splendid...👏

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nimmi

@aksuji

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#448

jenny ...I still dont want you to take a break,not at all after this story...I so loved this story,

but we all have a life outside this virtual world and writing is much a responsible task which needs lots of efforts from one side...I just hope u would come back soon with more of arshi...

all the best for your real life...

take care🤗

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Deepthi

@Beauceant

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#449

Oh what an ending.. I had thought of a lot of things to happen to Khushi but dint think she'd actually contemplate the path that she always detested.. I liked the way you showed her thought process in that decision.. Everyone is quick to judge and condemn someone who takes up prostitution,especially in the Indian society, but its a lot of torture, helplessness and misery that makes a woman resort to that.. Brilliant..

Dint expect Khushi to relent so easily, should have made Arnav grovel a bit more.. But then when he suffers she too feels the pain so i guess its understandable..

Loved this line

"Love was like a distant impossible dream they were too scared to even think of, let alone hope. "

Yes, love needs time.. Love needs the wounded hearts to heal.. For now what they have is still a beautiful relation..

Jenny, being a new reader i'd really started enjoying your stories.. Will miss you really.. But of course real life beckons.. Wishing you all the best in everything you do.. I still have some of your earlier works to read.. When you do write something new please please let me know..

Best wishes

Deepthi

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sunitikapoor

@sunitikapoor

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#450

Wonderful update Jenny...really feeling sad for Khushi...as always very well written...Arnav killed her innocence...this story was totally different than other stories...and finally they are together...we will miss you dear...a perfect ending to their painful journey.

Hoping that your AD will settle soon and we can see you back in IF with more and more FF...from the bottom of my heart, I just want to say thank you so much for completing your stories...You are among one of the best and versatile writer I came across...hats off to you...enjoy your break and take care..😛