INTOXICATION THREAD #2 / LAST PART UP ON PG 54 :)

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Barunz4ever

@Barunz4ever

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#421

Already the end 😭. Again an amazing Arnav khushi journey has come to an end. Short but beautiful...

Truly intoxicating ...would love to read a beautiful epilogue of their journey together.

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arnshi

@arnshi

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#422

Awesome update.
Perfect ending to their painful journey.
Not everyone gets a second chance and once you get ,take it.
Khushi had such a beautiful heart.
Have a good time in your break and be back soon with your wonderful work.

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ranogill

@ranogill

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#423

Wonderful ending to the story of two restless souls...awesome ...

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.ButterCup.

@.ButterCup.

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#424

beautiful last part...

very intense and emotional story..truly intoxicated...

glad that khushi gives arnav second chance...

i'm addicted to ur stories..👏

come back soon with such amazing stories..

and enjoy ur brake..have a nice time..🤗

Edited by chandni00 - 11 years ago

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Pooja

@poojasidd123

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#425

wow.the last chap just took my breath away thru its intensity and the portrayal of hurt n pain of arnav n khushi. so glad khushi decided to give him a second chance. finally both his n her bruised souls can find peace in each other's company. this has been a great ff.

jenny i really want to see arnav in his endearing and lovable avatar at least once. something which i've wanted to see right from the beginning.so please can u please please write an epilogue for this ff? even if its short? doesnt need to be very long. there u can show us glimpses of the changing/changed arnav in khushi's company. pls try to give us an epilogue before u take up leave for your wonderful vacation.

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Archna

@archnahardik123

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#426

Brilliant update.

I am so relived that he came in time, I was very scared before reading about Khushi's condition.

She had given up all her hope to survive. She has given him right treatment what he deserve.

It was a perfect ending.

Can't believe this was last part and you are going on holidays after this . Already missing you and your wonderful stories.

Please do come back after holidays. And don't go forever.

Thanks for beautiful ending. Will be waiting for you.

Good luck and take care.

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#427

It was awesome ending

Loved it

Good Khushi slapped Arnav he deserved it hhehehehe

Will miss the SS

Thanks for giving such an awesome SS

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incandescent

@incandescent

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#428

UNRES...

Jenny,

A beautiful ending to a hauntingly beautiful story.👏

After the pain and suffering they went through, they deserve peace and happiness. Indeed it was catharsis... they opened up their hearts and found solace in each other. They found hope. It's a new beginning for these two lonely, tortured souls.

This story must have been difficult write...not just because of the genre but also because you gave marathon updates. But nevertheless, you have a done a splendid job and did complete justice to it.

Loved it.

When things settles down in AD, please do continue to write. I would love to read non-Arhi stuff from you too...but I hope you would write on Arhi once in while...maybe one shots, two shots if not FFs or SSs.

Thanks so much for giving us such beautiful stories. 🤗🤗

Hope to you see you soon.

Will miss you and your writing a lot.

Take care and God bless.

Fari.

Edited by incandescent - 11 years ago

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#429

What a lovely end.

Khushi's emotions were written to perfection.

Her reaction to Arnav was so natural.

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srilathas

@srilathas

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#430

superb story dear...the characters of both arnav and khushi in this story touched my heart...very well written...so one more feather to your cap...hats off...great work...I just love your work...I will definitely miss you in IF but it's ok...all the best and take care...