INTOXICATION THREAD #2 / LAST PART UP ON PG 54 :)

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#271

part 6
awesome...
OMG poor Khushi...
she hasnt done anything...
why is she being arrested?
poor her she trusted Arnav...

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kondhili

@kondhili

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#272

Chapter 6:

Well you are damn right i hate Arnav! God what a bas***d he is for treating khushi so contemptuously.

Not that i am absolving khushi of cheating on her so called 'husband', like i said the last time at the end of chapter 5 i am very curious to know the kind of relationship that existed between shyam and khushi given that she could cheat on her husband so easily with Arnav.

So i will hold on to the whole 'blame khushi' and find fault with khushi till i know more about her 'marriage'.

I wonder how you will make this cold, heartless and manipulative arnav pay??

Waiting eagerly for the intoxication marathon...its going to be a roller coaster one with lots of ups and downs.

P.S1 : I am going to miss u so much Jen...milte rehna par.🤗

PS2: Since i am assuming that u have fallen asleep with the laptop 😆i thought i might as well get with my comments for chap 6. 😉

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rukuswasthika

@rukuswasthika

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#273

poor khushi.why arnie had to be like this?eager for the next update

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songcouple

@songcouple

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#274

😊 aww it was heart breaking to know she went through so much ...
so much pain poor girl how will this torture in her life end .
and arnav he double crossed her ...
he deserves this response from her ...
well i do want them to reunite so
waiting for next update

Edited by kannansangee - 11 years ago

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leena

@aleena.1884

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#275

aren't the 4-5 hrs. over???? 😔

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MAS_5253

@MAS_5253

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#276

Arnav is a jerk poor khushi yaa n hoe can he use such words for her ..m.heartbroken jenn

loved it

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Pooja

@poojasidd123

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#277

too sad. so shyam was the serial killer. arnav used khushi and on top of that used such insulting words to describe her character which cant be taken back. why oh why did he have to utter such abominable words? just bcoz khushi is a married girl who surrendered to him, he just cant draw a conclusion that she is like every other woman who cheats their husbands.cant imagine how khushi must have felt. for her its as if her entire life has turned out to be a harsh joke. first shaym married her for fulfilling his lust(who knws she cud also have been his nxt victim) and then arnav used and threw her off like trash. so much for being a respected major, huh. i dont understand why she works in a bar. was she being forced to do that by her husband?

cant wait for nxt. so happy to see the good news that u'll be updating this ff every othr day ..

Edited by poojasidd123 - 11 years ago

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sunitikapoor

@sunitikapoor

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#278

Waiting dear!!!

more than 5-6 hours dear!!!

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basanti108

@basanti108

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#279

Heyy, I know it would be better if I wait for the next update but I can't help to comment now, so this is for chapter 1 till 6

Dark, Mysterious, addictive!!

Such a amazing story, its brought out so many different aspect of each characters, and I realised that there so much more than meet the eye...i.e. I honestly think there is a connection between arnav and khushi in the past because of couple of 'flashbacks' that I read but I don't know...there is a air of mystery and I don't know about anyone else but it seems like a 20s old noir film...brilliant setting and the characters are just bold and strong

Amazing story!!👏

Thank you for the PM also I have a question what does AD stand for? and why you taking a break? sorry if I sound behind in times...

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Deepti

@deepti1906

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#280

PART 6 :

It was just what I had predicted after last update... And I should have been ready for this. For Arnav's apathy and hatred for Khushi. But I was NOT... It broke my heart completely to see this happening with Khushi.💔💔 To see his cold indifference towards Khushi. :"( One thing is sure, that he couldn't see truth in her eyes, even after telling her that her eyes attracted him.. Any girl would have fallen for it especially a girl who has lost all hopes in her life. But it was lie altogether, wasn't it? If he was, he should have seen what anybody in the world could see in her eyes. That is the Truth and helplessness.

And that Shyam... I hope he rots in prison for all his life..😡

Actually now that I came to think of it, Shyam and Arnav were no different.. Shyam used Khushi to satisfy his needs in this sham marriage and Arnav to get Shyam.

I know he is going to regret this later but please make him pay for this... I strongly want him to pay... What right he had to use Khushi like this?? Let alone Khushi, no one has rights to use a girl like this...😡 And he truly broke my heart... :"( Let him pay, and then I would think of forgiving him later.. :D

Only one thing is left, mystery behind Arnav's wife's and friend's murder.. There can be many reason for him to do so. I used to feel that there is something more to it, that he could not have murdered them. But I don't know what I should be feeling now...urgghhh

Screw Arnav...😡

But I'm lovin' the story...❤️❤️ Totally, Completely...!!! And cannot wait for the next part, abhi se...

Update soon...😊😊

Edited by deepti1906 - 11 years ago