Case SS: Shadows of Past: last part:page 28 - Page 7

Wonderful update Helena...I expected Arjun to be angry and hurt too, which is what you showed, although anger is very visible and hurt is hidden somewhere deep within him.

I trust him to do his job, but that doesn't mean he will leave any stones unturned to make sure he is reaching the right conclusions and I get the feeling he is sure his father is innocent.

Anyway...lets see what happens when he comes face to face with his father.

Loved the update, thank you for the PM and please continue soon.

superb update
Arjun's mind state was well written
his anger reflects in the things he's doing
but deep down his pain his hidden
n as you mentioned he has learnt to hide his true emotions from his father
eager to see both facing each other in the interrogation room
thanks for pm
cont soon

awesome update di.

Awesome di... 👏
so arjun is going to meet his dad
I am eagerly waiting for next update
cont soon di...
Thanks for pm

Nice part, poor arjun really felling bad 4 him. Update soon...
(sorry 4 short reply, using mobile)

Sr Rawte Vs Jr Rawte! Interesting case!

Awesome part Arjun and his father
Now what have he thinking
How he crack the case
Waiting for update

Awesome update...waiting for these two to meet each other...n next twists in the story 👏

Dear Kunchu,

This is what I would call a humdinger of an opening. I know that you will be very busy for some time at least settling into your new job, but I hope you will follow up on this one and complete it eventually. It is a very, very promising opening shot.

Shyamala Aunty

PS: How I wish Rathore could come back to the serial just as he does here!

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Kunchu dear,

This is coming along very well, and as it is early days yet, I have no comments right now on the story proper.

Of course, every false murder suspect HAS to grasp the murder weapon, a knife stuck in the dead body or a gun dropped on the floor, and leave fingerprints all over it for the cops to find and nail him/her! I have not seen a single case where the false murder suspect did not handle the murder weapon, So much for commonsense!

One important point. Arjun's stoicism, dedication to finding out the truth and his apparent hardheartedness have all come across very well. But in real life, he would NEVER have been allowed to be associated with a case where his father was the main murder suspect, as the conflict of interest would have been blatant and would have invited adverse comment in the press and elsewhere. Also the strain on Arjun would have been too much for him to take.

I shall put this deviation from the norm down to literary licence on your part!

Shyamala Aunty


Hello All...
thanks for all the great comments and likes. It such a great feeling to see many new people coming up liking the story. thanks a lot...
Hope to keep up to your expectations.

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