TASTE OF FREEDOM- A ASTHA-SHLOK FF(ch 17 Part 2 updated ON Page 47) - Page 23

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Vsoujanya

Aww thats awful for Astha but Shlok needs to explain himself as well. Great update.

Thanks dear. Keep reading n commenting😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: niki795

awesome update dear
loved it
shlok is guilty for his deeds
continue soon

Thanks dear...it's okay I guess that u asked for an update n actually I made me happy seeing u r eager for my next chpp😛Keep reading n commenting😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: latha_555

nice update, i especially love when he said that he already got the wrong idea at the restaurant when she wanted to pay and the whole anorexia part was so good...didn't see that coming...looking forward to more

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Posted: 11 years ago
The story has got a good pace...
thanks for sharing it! continue soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
sure dear,,,i will update soon the second half of the story its just i am very busy wid exams n college but be patient😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

CHAPTER: 13



"I know. Aai came to see and told me everything" said Astha shocking Shlok. "What did Mrs. Agnihotri tell you? Let me just say you should not believe her" said Shlok suddenly out of control, anxious to find out exactly what Anjali told her. "Oh, is it not true that a year and half ago you, Dada and Aai planned to take Niranjan Agnihotri down. She told me that she is not your biological mother and your biological mother was murdered by your And to do that you originally planned to marry me to get your hands on my farm to take revenge on your father. Or that you faked your love for me and married me under pretence without their knowledge. She also told me that what you didn't plan was to genuinely fall in love with me. And when you realised you that you gave up your plan for me and started to protect me. You switched to another plan. She thought if I knew the truth I can forgive you and we can both start a new life together. I guess you are. I should not believe a thing she said" said Astha with a slight quiver in her voice to which a flabbergasted Shlok replied half stuttering "I...hmm...it's all true. Although Mrs. Agnihotri should not have interfered between us. I did plan to marry you to get your farm. But I didn't plan on falling in love with you. I know that you probably feel I am trying to black mail you emotionally to reconcile with me but it's the truth."

"Tell me the whole story Shlok" said Astha taking a deep breath preparing to hearing probably the darkest secrets from the Agnihotri closet " A year and half ago Mrs. Agnohotri came to me and Dada with some files and some journals. The files were some old police reports and the original autopsy reports along with the fake belonging to a woman now I know as my biological mother Sanskriti.My ... I mean Niranjan married my mother Sanskriti for the same piece of land I married you. But before her father could give him the farm for dowry he sold the farm to your grandfather. This angered Niranjan and he became bitter towards herto a level where he treated her no better than an animal. He constantly hit her and used to beat the hell out of her so much so that I found her dried tears on the pages of her journals. She bore him two sons hoping he would change and treat her better but still his attitude towards her worsened and he tortured and abused her to a point that she was planning on leaving him with us but before she could flee he caught her and hit her so badly that she died bleeding out which we figured out from her journals where she wrote how she feared that he will kill her if he found about her plan to escape. And the worst part is I was a year old and Dada was three when this happened so we don't have any solid recollection of her or how she looked or talked. Mrs. Agnohotri found this in that SOB's safe. Turns out Mrs. Agnihotri is a battered woman who was being abused and tortured like my mother and she was only 19 when that monster abducted her and forcefully married her. She rebelled in a manner which she could by being an unemotional robot and behaving with us as an ice queen. And now I think of it cannot blame her for that, being 19 and thrust with a monster of a husband and his two unwanted kids. She helped me and Dada to get a closure and we are thankful to her for that. Continuing with the story I found the perfect plan to take a revenge on Niranjan..."

TO BE CONTINUED...

So sorry guys for an update after a month and half. I was stuck with exams and practicals but that's no excuse to leave you hanging. Also I want to thank all of you for patience with me and would like you to read and comment. Also want to gloat a moment at +11,000 views...I know today's update is a bit boring from romance point of view but necessary from story point of view. I just want to assure you that Ashlok and Sorad romance will continue in the upcoming updates so bare with me on this one!!!!I now on promise to deliver regular updates which will leave you asking for more!!Once again apologizing for the delay and thanking you for your patience ...Don't forget to press like and comment

Edited by skm27395 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Quite a sensitive update dear...

The way you explained the 2 mothers' lives, one who was battered to death and the other who was battered until she became a stone👏

Take your time and please continue ...

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: priyavin

Quite a sensitive update dear...

The way you explained the 2 mothers' lives, one who was battered to death and the other who was battered until she became a stone👏

Take your time and please continue ...

Thanks for the pm

thank you so much dear for your patience and support...and don't mention the pm😊😊😊
I know this update was high on voltage and low on romance which you are hoping and will get in coming updates so keep reading and commenting😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

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Nice update thank you

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