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farru786

@farru786

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Posted: 11 years ago

#291

MashaAllah wat an update
It's soo soothing to read sucha beautiful story
Der love is soo divine out of the world feeling
Thanks for the sharing this story
Update soon will be waiting 😊

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aayt

@aayt

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Posted: 11 years ago

#292

it was beautiful

khushi is luck she even didn't know what she means to arnav

that is way more then love janoon ishaq sanseen zindgi for him

loved it

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pmehra300

@pmehra300

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Posted: 11 years ago

#293

Fantastic chapter

Loved it

Hayye...is shayari par to hum aap par qurbaan huye

I just loved what khushi said it was soo...beautiful and intense I bet arnav just wanted to grab her and kies her senselessly

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nikhila

@sanjanasree

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Posted: 11 years ago

#294

Hi, very nice update
Loved ur story
Im a hyderabadi girl
I can speak hindi but I dont know urdu
From ur ff im learning urdu
The way u write is beautiful

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yeshyeshna

@yeshyeshna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#295

lovelu update

loved khushi's poem

it was so nice

also loved arnav's poem but could not understand some words

as i do not understand urdu & do not stay in india

loved the way u write

it touches my heart😊

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phillips_2909

@phillips_2909

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Posted: 11 years ago

#296

minblowing dude
love d shayari
no words to express the feel
waiting fr next...!

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kamtokdin

@kamtokdin

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Posted: 11 years ago

#297

A beautiful, tender n mesmerizing love story. The restraint n purity of their interaction only increase the passion n intensity of their love n desire.

In this day n age of instant gratification n overt display, this story stands out with its simplicity n intensity. Love your story to bits.

Can I get rough meaning to the shairi. I don't speak Hindi n feel that I'm losing a lot by not understanding the shairi.