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Posted: 11 years ago
I can't believe the excerpt was a dream however I think the title of your update kind of gave it away.

So the letter is still a mystery but however Arnav did not believe her initially but still wants a relationship of seduction.

Wow the need and attraction from both sides is very strong, loved the powerful and passionate kisses they shared.

So Arnav thinks if he believes Khushi that means he will lose another loved one, I've still got a feeling Khushi is ill or it might be something to do with Anjali.

Wonder what Arnav has seen in the room, is Khushi standing there stark naked, lol my vivid imagination.

Loved both parts to the update, absolutely amazing and phenomenal.

The updates were written exceptionally well, amazing writing.

Thanking you in advance for the PM,

Eagerly waiting for the next part xx
Edited by P4rveen12 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
I was waiting with bated breath to know about Khushi's past though I know somewhere it wont happen right after.
As always loved this chapter and you are always pushing me to the edge by this suspense element and of course intriguing too...And the way you end the chapter, makes me crave for the next update...
Looking forward for next one and thank you in advance for PMs

P.S. But something in this chapter making me feel that Khushi is having some health problem which Arnav dont want to believe...?
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Posted: 11 years ago
Can I just 🤣 🤣 🤣 at the Title.


TFS.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh my! This is such an awesome story. I absolutely love it. I can't wait to read the next chapter already.
I recently stumbled upon your story Sins and now have read all of them. I love your work, your stories, your creativity and imagination and mostly your writing and style of presentation. Thank you so very much for keeping the magic of Arnav and Khushi alive for fans like us.
With love and gratitude
Vinaya
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Posted: 11 years ago
This update has left me thinking-- Is Khushi a supernatural creature?
A vampire or what?

Because Khushi knowing everything about Lucknow's history, they not being able to be together, Arnav claiming the letter is fiction ---- Indicates the same things.

Ps. Don't think I'm stupid but I'm a great fan of the vampire diaries and I found a sheer resemblance.

Last thing--- Update soon.

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Posted: 11 years ago
Ramanchi! 😔
Ya it had to be a dream...nahi toh how could juhi tease us and leave us hairan pareshan. Humai pata hona chahiye tha ke sapne itni jaldi sach nahi hote. God Juhi you are such a tease!😆
Maza toh tumhe bahut aaraha hoga...😆
I am going to give u some more laughs and say dammit is she a Ghost/ spirit/ angel???? What the hell am i supposed to think.

I want to know the contents of the letter right now...Juhi really excited about this story and can't wait to know what lies ahead...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ok needed to get that out of my system before reading this chapter.

Main gita pe kasam khaati hu, ki:
- I wont LOL again, and will take this chapter seriously.
- I wont think or make guesses about Kay.
- I wont think about how epically teased I feel right now.
- I wont think about how I need to book a session for hair loss therapy.

Because that is the only way I can forget about an incomplete storyline...jiss ne mera CHAIN cheen liya hai.





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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: LooneyLuna

Ok needed to get that out of my system before reading this chapter.

Main gita pe kasam khaati hu, ki:
- I wont LOL again, and will take this chapter seriously.
- I wont think or make guesses about Kay.
- I wont think about how epically teased I feel right now.
- I wont think about how I need to book a session for hair loss therapy.

Because that is the only way I can forget about an incomplete storyline...jiss ne mera CHAIN cheen liya hai.






Mujhpe kyon kasam khaaya ja raha hai yahan????

- Why are you LOLing at the chapters... they are super serious, man... I am breathing heavily as I read them
-Why no more guesses? I was here all ready with my next guess...
(Khushi is really a ghost, and that is why she can't be with him! - Which also explains his vivid dreams... she visits him in his dreams. you know like Ghosts do!)

Good luck with finding your chain. maybe the ghost took that too.



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Posted: 11 years ago
Juhi you can't do this to us ! 😡 GRRR ! What was in the letter, why will she be lost to him becaase of what's in the letter. OMG this is why I don't read ongoing stories , they make me go crazy !!😆
I'm gonna stalk you twitter till write the next update.😆

By the way that was an amazing update...this whole story has a different feel to it. LOVE IT !👏

P.S: Are you and Semanti gonna update the Tales ?
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Posted: 11 years ago
unres...
Awesomely written...👏..was waiting eagerly to read it..and as soon as I woke up I checked I-F..n found the chapter was waiting for me to read it...

the decoration of the room n her thoughts of the other man who seemed to be the only problem out of all the major problems that could have been for a normal being..
what did Arnav see her doing in the blue mysterious room?Was she dancing alll again in some different avatar?or was she ready to surrender herself to him fully?😕
waiting for next update eagerly..update in time..we cant wait to know what you had planned for the story from so long and are bringing it now aftr so long...Mystery unresolves in next update..😛😃
Edited by Aryancha - 11 years ago

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