Polemic Jackanapes #2: [COMPLETE] Chapter 13-27B

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Camb

@Camb

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Posted: 11 years ago

#421

Beautiful update as always, you never fail to impress with updates. I love the relationship that Arnav and Payal share, that's unique and I believe Payal's words held some truth and if Arnav give it a good thought then he could use it for best - as Garima says, he is going to be a man with success soon, he is strong, capable, its just that he is not realising it and not utilising his full abilities to the best... I love the way you are shaping up each character and giving out the details about them, its brilliant, and would love to read more...

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mpuhan

@mpuhan

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#422

ok ... I know Payal understands Arnav and has always given her pov without any inhibitions to his feelings. Arnav might be shy or a greater man to not retort back but rather choose to reflect on what Payal says and work on his shortcomings.
BUT for once I would like Arnav to give as good as he gets from Payal. Let's see how it feels to be reminded and dissected of your so called failures be it in professional or personal life.

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AquaSandhya

@AquaSandhya

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#423

Comment updated Here

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#424

Mindblowing update

loved it

thanks for the pm

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.ButterCup.

@.ButterCup.

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#425

superb update dear...worth the wait update...i like payal and garima conversation...garima has great faith on arnav..like a mother have on her child..and they shared great bonding..such a special relation they shared...{ zindagi mein kuch baatein ap un se share kr paty ho jo ap ko smjhtey hain...jin se ap apni preshaniyan share kar skte ho..jo bazahir apky kuch nahi lagte...jin se apka relation just pleasantries tak mehdood ho... jo apko daant skte hain...ap per tanqeed kar skte hain...jo apki ki weakness and strength ko jante hain... jin se ap khaar bhi khaty ho per waqt ane per mashwara bhi unhe se krte ho }..and payal and arnav relationship just like that...Hazrat Ali a.s ...{my Imam said : Success is not final, failure is not fatal; it is the courage to continue that counts.}..what was payal trying to said to arnav..ya toh wo arnav ko mazeed dishearten kreingi.. ya phir payal ki yehe talkh o shereen baatein usko courage deingi...ek path deingi to overcome on his issues..his insecurities and failures...but payal ko arshi ki life mein itna interfere nahi krna chaheye...missed khushi in this update..continue soon..thanks for pm..

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Meena

@chotidesi

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#426

While I do agree that Payal was a little too harsh, I also think that Arnav needed what she said. I don't consider him to be a failure, per se, but I do think that he's defining himself by Khushi- and no matter how serious you are in a relationship, that's something you should never do. I think he's lost himself as a person- he doesn't know what his identity is on his own- and that's something he needs to learn. I think Khushi being away can be the perfect catalyst for this. But you've probably already got that planned.