Polemic Jackanapes #2: [COMPLETE] Chapter 13-27B - Page 37

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Posted: 11 years ago
I am so sorry that I have been reading this fantastic piece of writing without leaving a few words acknowledging the brilliance! I had meant to leave a comment the after the previous chapter, but, looks like life got busy & I forgot, but, here, goes!
Your story has a charm that has its epicentre in the reality to which you have your characters & situations stubbornly rooted to! Its a rare gift, I'd say, because, its so easy to go overboard, & so little can make that difference between what's believable & what is just fantasy!
Your characters are so likeable-there's no other word for it! I relate to Payal, the most, in this story, but its just as easy to understand where every other character is coming from! The ease, the strength in Arnav-Khushi's relationship that seems to have come from them having been together for years! They fit, beautifully! In slight contrast to that, is the Payal-Akash relationship which is so full of such heartwarming sincerety, one forgets, that this FF is based on ArHi & these two become just as important & reading their story becomes as enjoyable! That's, exactly what happened with the latest chapter-I did not miss Arnav-Khushi!
Arnav-Khushi were amazing in the previous chapter, making up for all the time spent apart, yearning for each other, longing to be together, loving just being with each other-its amazing!
The Gupta sisters are getting busier with their lives, but evidently, theiy have the Raizada brothers with them, every step of the way! I have to ask, do they make men like that, in real life, though?
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Posted: 11 years ago
I dunno if i fairly just fangirled over Aakash here, that his reaction or sudden outburst didn't seem wrong to me.

It happens such often with everyone of us. We tend to say things in the moments of surprise that we don't really mean. But putting that aside even, i mean, what else can you expect from a guy who seemed totally blown by your appearance and had showed it quite number of time, just after making out with him, you just drop this bomb off, and he was shocked, is just putting it mildly.

Payal who through those weeks felt too that Aakash had been too 'Busy' to even talk, tells him she might be going away for 2 yrs and if he suddenly reacts, to badi baat thode na hai, he is human, and ye sab to hota rehta hai, she knows her man enough to not take his those words to heart.

But at this point from Payal's aise, i can confer that in a satble state she herself would have justified his behaviour, she herself was too caught up in telling him and fearing his reaction that his sudden outburst, hurt her and she couldn't help breaking up. Hota hai.

But at the end o the day, after such a perfect date, a few glitches, at the end of the day Payal has Aakash to shoulder , when is vulnerable and Aakash has his home in her. :)

In this web, i realised ye sab kitni baar Hota hai. Its just so real that Twiggy di, i takes me by surprise everytime i read a chp of this FF!
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Posted: 11 years ago
I think both Payal and Akash are right on their own way. She thought she'd never get into Duke, so she never mentioned it. But he's right, they have been in a relationship. And this is the most important thing for her, careerwise. She could have shared with him that I had sent this application. But Akaash is a gem of a boyfriend. It takes a very big person to be the first one to apologize after a fight. Hope Payal realizes that.
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update. Even I feel Payal should have mentioned Duke to Akash during their courtship. Doesn't matter if their relationship wasn't serious. Admire the fact that Akash could tell something was bothering Payal ... a proof that he knows her inside out. hope they work out their problems.
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Posted: 11 years ago
I started reading, I like the fictions which seems to be happening in real life like something which happenes in door next door. Arnav who is trying to survive like an average man and Kushi the girl who wants to please all of them who are surrounding to her.


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Posted: 11 years ago
This was such a sweet update. Too cute. Too romantic.
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Posted: 11 years ago
super awesome update
loved it
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago

Their tiff was so realistic. I sooo love this story! <3

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Posted: 11 years ago
superb banner and update..
the way akash reacted i think its realistic and natural...
i agree with akash..payal should shared this news with
him before..but he cool down and apologize to payal
seems like payal is a dominant one in their relationship..lol
how romantic their 'date' was...i loved their moments..
Epic update twiggy..outstanding..thanks for p,..

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awww sad/cute chapter! I can see why Akash would panic as soon as Payal mentioned her news. The evening was going so perfectly, I wish Payal didn't have to break the news to him :( I love flirty Akash ahaha
But I'm gad that their little fight didn't go on so long and broke them up, good thing Akash saw what a pig he was being and righted the situation immediately :')
They'll work it out! I know it
great to see a chapter on just these two :)
can't wait for the next update!

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