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Posted: 11 years ago
#51
its a concept that needs to be embarked upon. I'm glad you're writing about this issue, and judging by the prologue, I'm sure you're going to do complete justice to the issue. This story is going to be a memorable one.

love and best wishes
Sonia
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
loved it
she is running from her husband

most girls try to mend relationship even if they r hurt they try till it is beyond their patience to go on n they feel dead inside abt that relation.

y is ASR in so much pain who is S?
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
& here i come with My official comment for the FF<3
but before that I made this for you<3 !! u very well know what a CRAZY fan I am of Choice#1 ! n I know i will be loving this<3 so here i made a banner for this FF<3 !

Now coming to FF the prologue it self is telling us what a painful intense journey this will be.
who ever that neel is! im sure once he comes infront of THE ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA :@ ! he is gone 😡 because arnav will not leave him! sick sick wonder what all khushi went thru :'( !!
this girl is very strong :'( ! she is still a fighter but i wonder how she Took all this shit from that man :'( !

i like Kaka<3 hope we get more of his bonding with both arhi<3 ! cuz i can say he is special to arnav<3

and Arnav <3 What to tell u ! hardly any FF make me love arnav! n you have that magic ! u prove an FF can be intense n MIND BLOWING even without making arnav a jerk !

the prologue itself tells one that this arnav will be even more better thn 1st arnav<3 ! I feel he will do everything to keep her safe n not just but the fetus

but wonder who S is n why is he in so much pain :'( <3

cuz the journey doesn't stop here ! but it will start in delhi... cuz theres aman n kinjal in the frame n im sure they know arnav<3 ! i just can't wait for next update ! so please update ASAP :'( !

Love you shizuu<3

Edited by .FlawlessSarun. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
I used to read Choices and this new one is just as promising as it. Congrats on the new story as well as revised choices. Will look forward to read both of it :)
As you suggested, I'm adding you as a buddy, please accept my request.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
A very deep topic...and you have written beautifully.
Looking forward for the story.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
i absolutely loved the prologue and waiting for update...looking forward to the story...
very intense ,dont know will survive till the end or not...prologue is already giving me goosebumps...
thankyou for update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
I wanna welcome your this new effort by giving us a new story. Prologue was very sad. Good concept. Will be ready to explore wrong mentality of some human beings. All The Best..😊👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
OMGG cannot wiat to read more of this storyyy
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
This was really painful to read just with the allusion to abuse but it is a reality. You portrayed Khushi's fear so well. Good subject to write a story about .


I was a regular reader of Choices but somewhere along the way I could not relate and I thought that story should have ended a long time back. I hope this will not be a copy of characters from Choices but stand on its own merit.
Edited by Anamika100 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60
Really pleased that you started another story.

Seems like they're both victims, Arnav of his past and Khushi of her present.
Destiny has made their paths cross.

As always, amazed with your writing and eye for detailing.

The characters seem interesting.

Being it on.

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