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InvisibleSmile

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Posted: 11 years ago

#171

I will be updating today once I get home from Uni :')

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janu

@Janu75

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Posted: 11 years ago

#172

A different story and a very intriguing one

when physical abuses become intolerable ,they effect the state of the mind in such a way that one would often go mad.

the kid is too cute and my🤗

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Japonica

@Japonica

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Posted: 11 years ago

#173

Shiza, the prologue and the first chapter have shaken me up so much and yet I can't stop wanting to read more.

Khushi has clearly had the most horrific marriage that is exactly how violence in a marriage happens - in cycles of violence followed by remorse followed yet agian by another bout of violence and with each cycle the perpetrator wears dowm the victim till he/she becomes convinced that they deserve it.

But Sarah is such a bundle of joy, a rather precocious for a 2 and a half year old. . I love the kids in your stories, S, they are absolute angels.

If Aman has his way, hopefully Arnav and Khushi will finally meet, though she has not seen him, though it is curious that though she had her back to hi, there was nothing about her that rang a bell,

Edited by Japonica - 11 years ago

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KrishVeer

@KrishVeer

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#174

Me first🥳

Another amazing update👏

So Arnav is still hanging onto the memories of a woman who broke his heart? He truly is an awesome person from one angle, but from another angle, I feel he is pathetic. It's time to let go and move on. If that woman doesn't care even a bit about Arnav, why would he ruin his life by staying single forever. I really hope Khushi and Sarah would bring light to his darkened soul😊

I loved the mother-daughter duo. Sarah is an angel. So she is in love with plants, huh? Wonder Arnav is a plant freak as well. The bonding you showed between Khushi and Sarah is really beautiful beyond words. And I really would love to see a similar bond being shared between Arnav and Sarah in the future. I want Sarah to be the one who bring the two lost souls together😳

So Khushi is going for the job interview. Awe, so Arnav has been an intimidating brat since the time he was small. I'm really glad that Khushi agreed to go for the interview despite knowing that her brother was Arnav's best friend. Lets see how their first meet goes, hopefully in the next update😉

I would say Neel was an over possessive boyfriend. Khushi must have been a tough woman to bear all his harsh words and acts. She truly had been an amazing life partner. Staying still through every thick and thin moments in her life with him, I wonder how she did it. Wonder what made her decide to leave the house. Something truly big must have happened. Eagerly waiting to know what it was with time

Thanks for penning down another fabulous update. This story is a heart touching one and I love it to the core🤗

I know it's not possible for you to give quick updates with your busy schedule, but if possible try to give an early update. Staying for one week for another update is really hard🤔

Thanks for the pm😃

Eagerly waiting for the next update😛

Update soon😉

PS: Did I say that I love Sarah and her cute Mr.Ellie☺️

Edited by V3Od - 11 years ago

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Stimmy

@Stimmy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#175

Edited . .

Sorry for the delayed comment..😊

Loved the update.. I have read the chapter atleast 3 times..

My heart went for both Arnav and Khushi..both of them are still having the inner battle constantly though they seem to moved on..

Yes there are these people who are extremely possessive of their loved ones that they don't know how to deal with and tortures the same person..

I am very poor at putting my feelings into words.. But I have loved the chapter very much..it touched my heart..

Waiting for the next update..update soon pls

Hope we get their meeting this time😳

And thanks for the PM 😊

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janu

@Janu75

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#176

Thanks for pm

Sarah,the cute little kid and her Mr Ellie

Arnav still not able to come to terms with this present And the stand he took that he couldn't jeopardize another life is commendable.

and waiting or their first meeting

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-HEAVEN-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#177

bookmarked...i cant possibly miss any of ur ffs😉

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badfaith4u

@badfaith4u

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#178

Khushi has a lot of strength
She got away and started her life again
Hope these sessions help her

I hope she gets the job at R&A

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jisa

@jisa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#179

very nicely written...
u have showed the inner turmoil they are going through in their present time...
w8ng for next..!!

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mpuhan

@mpuhan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#180

I had always held this conviction that if I ever was treated badly in any way by my man, I'll be out of his life in a jiffy. This was when I was very young with 'garam khoon' and was yet to know the way of this world.
Now, after a decade with a wonderful husband and 2 kids, I know it's not at all easy. To practice what you preach is very very difficult in this case.
Even though I haven't been a victim of domestic violence myself, I have seen people who were and still are. It's a very delicate issue and our so called society plays a big role in why almost 90% of the time the victims are forced to stay in an abused relationship and endure the mistreatment until they fade.
nice update.