ArHi Drabble Dabbles- Part 17 |Lesson Learnt| p74, 6/1/15

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avantika_2012

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Posted: 12 years ago

#191

Here Come The Rain Again

You posted this one on November 17th saying that you had an awful week :( *pouts* Whyyy?? Email me.

You have one related to rain...couldn't resist, could you? 😉 I'm seriously wondering how I missed it!!!

Coming to the drabble...I'm like - Oh my God!!! This one was perfect!! I don't know how to tell you this but you managed to portray their characters sooo well. I mean, Arnav will try hook and crook to get Khushi under the umbrella only because he finds that simple exercise romantic but would not make any efforts to tell that to Khushi. Not even in simpler, less intense words. That was so characteristically Arnav!

And Khushi...oh I can exactly relate to her excitement!! I'm sure you can too. Hai na? ;)

Btw. I absolutely loved their little demonstration around the puddle. 😆

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avantika_2012

@avantika_2012

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Posted: 12 years ago

#192

What Goes Round

Wow!! That was intense. But It'll be a a totally random, non-ArHi piece for me! You know me, this has to be non-ArHi for me. But your writing skills...ahh! They are to die for! How do you do it? Write about anything and everything; any genre; any length, any style and it will turn out wonderful.

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avantika_2012

@avantika_2012

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Posted: 12 years ago

#193

You Know

It's been a full five minutes since I read this one and I'm still here, sitting and grinning like an idiot :P

I don't want to (and even if I tried, I don't think I'll be able to) express how happy I am right now or even say anything else about this drabble. Just imagine me giving you a bone crushing hug and refusing to let go off you even after it becomes awkward and suffocating (for you) :P :P

I LOVE you for writing this 🤗

Edited by avantika_2012 - 12 years ago

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IPKKNDTheWorld

@IPKKNDTheWorld

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Posted: 12 years ago

#194

Your drabble #7 made me think of only one thing-I wish I too would get a boyfriend like him.I know its wishful thinking-but still *sighs*😭

Thnx for the PM😊

Luving all your drabbles and the one-shots

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aarrsshhii

@aarrsshhii

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Posted: 12 years ago

#195

lovely... short n cute :)

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Addicted87

@Addicted87

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Posted: 12 years ago

#196

This one just made me go all 'awww'... Loved it😊

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samarablog

@samarablog

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Posted: 12 years ago

#197

PLEASANT!

thats what came to my mind!

wow!

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-doe-eyes-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#198

9 chances out of 10 this won't make very much sense...

The title comes from Shakespeare's play 'Romeo and Juliet', the balcony scene. However, this drabble has NOTHING to do with Romeo and Juliet :P

ArHi Drabble |What is in a Name?|

The first time he meets her, she asks him questions.

What is your name?

Arnav.

Who named you that?

My mother.

...She loved you a lot.

...How do you know?

She named you 'Arnav', didn't she? That means 'ocean'. It means that she thought the world of you. It means that her love for you and her hopes for you are as vast and as depthless as the sea.

...What is your name?

Khushi.

It is only several years later, and they have grown from the teenagers they used to be to the adults they have now become, his wife slips her dainty fingers around his numb ones, and he feels her grip them reassuringly and tug him forward, that he realises she had given him the answers as well.

He draws in a deep, bracing breath, steels his nerves and ignores the racket his heart makes, and hands entwined with hers, he braves his way through the gates of the graveyard he had never been able to set foot through since he had been fifteen.

To make up to his parents for not visiting all these years.

To tell them he loves them too.

To finally meet her parents.

To thank them for giving him Khushi.

Hope this isn't TOO weird or random...I blame exam prep for it!
Please leave your thoughts!

Edited by -doe-eyes- - 12 years ago