ArHi Drabble Dabbles- Part 17 |Lesson Learnt| p74, 6/1/15

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pearl.b

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Posted: 11 years ago

#181

Superbly cute drabble...u portray their emotions so effortlessly through ur beautiful words...

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#182

You've established it with these stories that you are comfortable with all genres.

From cute stuff to angst, you're a pro at all.

Keep them coming.

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Simran

@dmg123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#183

Totally awesome!!

I really liked each new sentence alternating between Arnav and Khushi! It all flowed really well!

Awesome job!

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avantika_2012

@avantika_2012

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Posted: 11 years ago

#184

I'm here when I should be doing something else! *sigh* The story of our lives :P Hehe!

I'll be commenting as I read; leaving it for later only worsens matters :P

You're welcome

Ah! So adorable! Your writing is usually detailed and I'm super impressed by the fact that you reduced me to a giggling fool with only a handful of words. I guess we all love a smirking, confident Arnav making Khushi flustered! ;)

Adorable!!! 😃

Edited by avantika_2012 - 11 years ago

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avantika_2012

@avantika_2012

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Posted: 11 years ago

#185

Opportunism

I've only played a little bit of Prince of Persia - Sands of Time. Assassin's Creed is probably one of the most popular ones I've heard about; haven't played it though. But 90% through the drabble and I was wondering what you were trying to get to. So here I was sitting with my eyebrows furrowed and then BOOM, I reach the last line, read it and instantly let out a loud laugh. Uff! You're too good!! ;) :D And you definitely know what you're doing!! :D :*

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avantika_2012

@avantika_2012

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Posted: 11 years ago

#186

Tea or Coffee?

I know I skipped a few in between but hey, this one is about tea+coffee! It obviously caught my eye *wink*

Khushi sounded like my Mother talking about the kind of coffee I drink! Hahaha! :P This was such a wonderful piece!! I don't know who's side to take...coffee probably. Umm...wait...tea! Khushi?? Or Arnav? Ugh! Whatever! Why should I have to pick sides as long as I can have both as and when I want! 😉

Do I need to tell you that it's well written? I thought that was understood now! :D

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Itu

@simi58

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#187

I hv just read all the dabbles accept wht goes around just now. How do u manage to write such adorable cuteee sweeettt ones?? Awesome..

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#188

That was so cute.

They both know each other so well.

You brought out how both are so different from each other.

And yet they are compatible because they give each other space.

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aquagal

@aquagal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#189

Just read "Tea & Coffee" and realised I've messed the order. 😃
I started backwards.. 😉😆
But it was great. The way their choices are connected with their personality and the way they like to be. Arnav wants to be strong - always even when there is a turmoil going on inside his mind and heart.
Khushi loves tea, a mild drink which is sweet and tasty like she behaves. 😊

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avantika_2012

@avantika_2012

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#190

Attention Seeking Syndrome

Hahahahaha!! How did you come up with that one?? It was so funny and cute! The fact that their mutual attraction is so apparent to the family makes it even better! I'm thoroughly enjoying reading these!! :D

PS - I thought of Christmas too instantly after reading 'green and red' :P Shh!! Don't tell Khushi I said that ;)