Ashlok FF: My Heart Whispers, but I can't Hear...Part-1 to Part-19 - Page 93

Originally posted by: niki795

awesome update
loved it
their car broke down and they took lift...
they both are really fighting like husband and wife😆
then they danced on road
the motel scene is superb... He punched the manager😆
and they slept with pillows in middle
then the police ride
superb update

the precap is interesting
first shlok slapped the police... Then astha also did it wantedly😆🤣
now both in jail
continue soon😊

Originally posted by: Ladygirl

Both in same room, bed and next jail cell. Really awesome, you can really come up with cute romance. I love the car fight, very hubby, wifey moment w/o they realizing.

Originally posted by: jeenia123

Now this is known as superb reading...
Just loved at least someone read it completely. you know what, first i had written jungle/Stable scene on friday...but i found this idea better..jail scene will be something different than ipk1...so i went for Jail scene and wrote motel part and police raid in fifteen minutes now..
thanks a lot dear...

Originally posted by: latha_555

once again very nice update. I love the bonding between the two. Police raid...poor ashlok!!! They will probably need to call Niranjan. Please update soon.

Originally posted by: niki795

ya the jail and motel idea is better than the jungle one
and its more funny to read

Originally posted by: niki795

see I'm spamming from now itself...

Originally posted by: jeenia123

And it is going to be a bit different as jungle scene is normally shown in tvs and movies...
Will just try to write good...

Originally posted by: jeenia123

Thanks a lot dear.you are such a sweetheart. my new thread will be dedicated to you only...by the way where are you from? i think not from India