SwaRon OS: My last breath is for you ❤️ - Page 3

Finally you posted this.😳 I read it long back even though you didn't tell me about this.🥺 Meanie showed it to me and I love this OS <3 Hope we see something like this on the show .

AWW...THIS IS SO AWESOME...👏

Awesome OS nami aapi 👏

Well written
Loved it!!
It was so realstic 😊
Wish SwaRon patch-up aesa hi hota 😭

Originally posted by: Shilpa_SwaRon

Res...

Unres...

Namu kya fadu os tha yaar..

Simply Outstanding...

Its always a treat to ready ur os n mein dekh ke hee itni excited ho jati hun padne ke liye...

N u never fail in making me smile n enjoy reading ur stuff..

Dis was one more brilliant writing frm u..

I simply loved it..

D dialogues dey were like superb..

Loved hw u started wid d break up..

Phir un dono ka pov very well written..

Swayam remembering d skate dance n sharon seein all dat.. Perfctly done..

Classroom scene again nicely penned..

Den cums d highlight RH sequence dat was awesome frm start till end..

Patch up was awww

Boys gossipping swayam shutting der mouths n den sharon answering them..

N sharons dialogues der were superb...

Fadu os..

Ps: priya n prags ke toh maze hai everyday aisi BTS sunne milte hai woh bhi frm d guruji herself😆😆

Awww I'm touched! Tu excite ho jaati hai padhne ke liye? 😆
I'm glad you liked it :)

Aur haan unko roz nahi sunati 😆
And thank you for helping me with the publicity :)

i cant xpress how amazinggly you have written this os

flower shower---no ande, tamatar.

It was a nice OS.
loved it. 👏