Asya Mohabbat Ki Jeet FF(Part-18-A updated on page-118) - Page 12

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this is absolutely beautiful
continue soon and pm me plz

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Originally posted by: anopama

this is absolutely beautiful
continue soon and pm me plz


Thnku so mch dear nd i ll surely pm uhšŸ˜›
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Thnku DearšŸ˜›
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Thnku dear😊
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I ll definately update soon dearšŸ˜›
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Part-4
In khan mansion
Zoya was sleeping peacfully in her room cuddling in her pillow, she was in her dreamland, dreamland of her nd mr.khan. Siddenly she woke up with a sound and felt something fall on her, she opened her eyes and noticed rose petals falling on her and mr.khan standing there, thn she realised tht mr.khan has burst a baloon full of rose petals to wake her up.
Asad-happy b'day to uh miss faruki.
Zoya gave her dimple smile-thnku so mch mr.khan aur yeh sab kya hai[Her room was full of heart shaped baloons and rose petals]
Asad-kuch nahi aj ap meri princess hai aur main apka gulam so aj ka din bht special hona chahiye na? Ap jaldi se washroom jaiye and apka breakfast wait kar raha hai. And bathroom mein bhi ek surprise hai. Saying so he leaves her room
Zoya enters her bathroom and is surprised to see it decorated, bathtub was filled with water and rose petals and whole bathroom was decorated with rose petals and fragnanced candles. After sometime asad was waiting for zoya on dining table, after waiting for sometime he decided to go to her room and check. Asad opened the door and saw zoya coming oit in her bathrob which covered her half thies water droplets trailing from her neck. Asad was mesmerised in her beauty, on the other hand zoya was uncomfortable but expected something from him she cleared her throat and to gain hi attention.
Asad snapped out of his chain of thoughts-um vo actualy vo main dekhne aya tha ki ap ready hui ke nahi ap jldi se niche aa jaiye. And saying so he walked out of her room in a rush
Zoya-mere sharmile ahmad khan haha.
Asad was waiting for her and zoya came in a black top and jeans black small stud in her ears and hairs in a ponny tail.
Asad get up and lyk a gentleman he slid the chair for zoya.
Zoya-thnku acha mr.khan phoophie kaha hai?
Asad-vo bahar apni frnd ke ghr gyi hai sham tak ayengi. Aj breakfast maine bnaya hai khas apke liye.
Zoya-aww thts so swt of uh kya bnaya hai apne?
Asad-omellete and juice hope uh lyk it.
Zoya-ya sure she tasted it wow yeh bht yummy hai.
Asad-sach mein? Let me also taste it.
Zoya-nh yeh mra hai na main nahi dungi.
Asad-plz and he taste it, as soon as he taste it he spit it out and coughs
Asad-chi yeh kitna ganda hai ap ise rehne dijiye maine
Zoya-pr mjhe khana hai yeh apne itne pyaar se bnaya hai.
Asad-plz ise mat khaiye apki tabiyat kharab ho jayegi. With that door bell ring
Zoya-maine dekhke ati hu. As she opens the door there was a delivery boy holding a pizza box-mr.khan yeh apne order kia hai kya.
Asad-ha le lijiye. Zoya takes the box and brings it to the table she opens it and found some papers which were hiding the pizza.
Zoya-mr.khan yeh kya hai?
Asad-pata nahi kholke dekhiye. Zoya was so busy in seeing the papers that she didnt notice that the pizza was in a heart shape. Zoya read the papers and was shocked to see thm[In my story asad and zoya have not sighned on any talakh nama]. There were divorce papers of zoyaan on which ayaan have signed
Zoya-OMG mr.khan yeh toh divorce papers hai yeh apne kia?
Asad-ha yeh bhi apka gift hai.
Zoya-oMG THNKU SO MCH i lv uh saying so she jumped on Asad's lap and kissed hin tightly on his cheek and hugged him tightly asad also hugged her back.
Asad-ok now eat the pizza.
Zoya still on his lap looked at the pizza-aww yeh kitna cute hai she fed him one bite and asad also did the same. There was a little cheese near asad's lips, zoya saw him and went to her naughty mode
Zoya-mr.khan apke face pe cheese laga hai.
Asad rubbing his other side-kaha hai?
Zoya-wait let me clean it, she cleaned the cheese with her tongue[Asad was shocked but now he is used to her boldness] wow thi is so yummy
Asad-miss faruki nikah se pehle yeh sab cheeze thk nahi hai?
Zoya making a puppy face-par maine kya kia main toh sirf cheese saaf kr rhhi thi and started fake crying
Asad-ok fn kuch nh kia apne happy now?[Zoya nodded] Ok now lets go out for shopping and lots of masti. Zoya was shocked so checked his forehead
Zoya-ap thk toh hai na? Shopping and masti vo bhi ap?
Asad-aj ke liye main apka gulam hu and ap day special bnana mera farz hai so go and collect ur stuff.
Phew finally done plz guys have a luk on the note given below. Take care guys bye
Love Vishā¤ļø
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Note:-
Hiii guys i want to tell uh something. I am very disappointed with ur responsešŸ˜• inspite of my xams preparation i am updating for u guys but uh guys are only giving comments in one word or maximum one line which are torturing me. If i dont get good response than sorry to say but i ll stop thi FF in between. And if i ll continue it thn i ll pm only those who ll comment on my FFs infact this note is for my both FFs. Now its upon uh whether i ll continue or not.
Love Vishā¤ļø

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And im first😊
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Wow awesome part asad is so sweet exicited for next part
plz pm me for next part and dont stop them plz
continue soon
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Thnku😊

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