taarey: the opposite characters

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hey people!!! I am Praneeta. This is my first OS. I hope you people read and tell me your views about it. I don't mind if you throw eggs and tomatoes on me but I really want to know your thoughts because I have some 3 more stories which I have written a plot on and thought to post it but I really want to know your critics and please mention after reading should I post it or not??? Love you people.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Character sketch :-
1) Taani Kapoor : She is a 22 year quiet girl. She was just perfect. She did not do anything wrong in her life. She never used to roam around with friends at night. She was born and brought up in Delhi with her parents but recently shifted to Mumbai for her studies. She studied in St. Louis college after Topping Delhi university. She was a topper. She is the GS of the college. She is studying in 1st year.
2) Reyaansh Singhania : He is a Casanova known as "REY". He is 24 years old. He believes in living "Today" because no one knows the future. He is hanging out with his friends day and night leaving studies on side. He also studied in St. Louis college. He is in 3rd year.He is clean at heart and respects girls. He is AGS of the college.
3)Swayam Shekhawat : He is totally opposite to Rey but is his best friend. He is calm and solves all rey's problems including girls. He is in an relationship with Sharon. He is in 3rd year with Sharon and Rey. He is one woman man. He is ACS of the college.
4)Sharon Rai Prakash : She is the diva of the college. She is 24 years old rich brat. She is a daddy's girl. She loves to be pampered. She is also in 3rd year of her graduation. She is CS of her college.

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Scene : Delhi (Taani's house)
Taani : dad I wanna go to Mumbai to complete my MBA course even you know I want to do my graduation from St. Louis. I know you don't want me to go but I can dance there as well. Please let me go naa.
Dad : OK kiddo!! stop racking your brains to make me agree to your decision.
Taani : Matlab you allow me to go.
Dad : Yes princess.
Taani : love you dad. I will go and start my packing as I wanna leave as soon as possible.

This was a wonderful morning for taani. At last she could go and pursue her dreams of becoming a dancer as well as a MBA graduate from St. Louis as it was one of the famous colleges for MBA.

Scene : Mumbai (St. louis college)

Swayam : Hey rey sun na yaar iss baar new entries hone wali hai toh kaam badhega.
Rey : ha Swayam I know right. So whats the matter?? We are there to handle.
Sharon : Swayam is right Rey. New entries matlab ragging. Oh god!! how to stop this nonsense.

This is the start of a new term in St. louis. As the AGS, CS and ACS, the three best friends are discussing about rules.

Scene : Delhi (station)

Taani : Mom!! Dad!! take care of yourself. I will reach Mumbai and call you.
Dad : ok darling take care of yourself and be careful.
Taani : Yup!!! I do that dad.

Scene : Mumbai (station)

Taani : Oh god !!!! atlast reached Mumbai, the city of dreams to fulfill my dreams.

Scene : St. Louis college

Taani enters the college wearing a short one piece. She looks pretty in it.

Boys (standing near the enterance) : kya item hai boss !!!
(they start teasing her but Sharon sees this and saves her.)

Taani : Hi I am Taani.
Sharon : Hey I'm sharon, the CS of the college. Got to go. Bye. beware of these jerks.
Taani : thanks.

Taani collects her ID card and goes towards rehearsal hall to see it.
Some girls come and start ragging her.
Girl1 : hey what type of clothes are you wearing?? newbie right?? looks like??
Taani : Yes!! I joined today.
Girl2 : so we are your seniors. now listen to what we say. ok???
Taani : Tell me what's wrong??
Girl1 : wear this.
Taani : (astonished) I can't. I will never wear a bikini.
Girl2 : listen you have to wear it.

Rey enters here for his practice and sees this. He enters inside and stops the girls.
Rey : girls!! whats going on ?? stop all this cheap stuff now.
girl1 : even you rag newbies then why are you stopping us??
Rey : I do rag newbie but not this cheap way. I don't want any discussions. I am the AGS. So follow my orders and leave.
(they left.)
Rey : Listen miss this people are cheap and gross, so please don't mind them.
Taani : Its ok, dude. I'm fine. Thanks to help me.

Slowly slowly Taani, Swayam, Sharon and rey grew into good friends and then best friends.
After an year...

Rey : lets go disc tonight.
Sharon : right waise bhi jab se we all are at a post in college. We can't go anywhere.
Swayam : fine. I don't mind.
Taani : No guys you people go. I don't like being out at night.
Rey : Taani you are such a spoilsport we are there naa. lets go, babes.
Sharon : taani you are just so descent.
Taani : guys even I have done bad things in my life.
Sharon : give an instance.
Taani : like that day I spoke a foul word when that guy irritated me on the first day.
Rey : come on taani!! you call that bad.
Taani : ok guys!! I can prove myself.
Rey : so come with us.
Taani : deal. I'm coming.

Scene : Disco

Rey : why don't you have shots haa?? it's awesome.
Taani : No Rey !! not alcoholic drinks.
Sharon : why are you behaving like a looser babes??? nothing happens in one or two shots.
Taani : please guys !!!
Swayam : guys don't force her.
Taani : thanks dude.
Rey (to tease her) : you are a looser.

Taani just asked the bartender to give three strong shots. She had them one after another and climb on the deck. She pulled up a guy with her who was sticking to her like a glue. Rey was guilty as well as angry.

Rey : Taani stop it!! come down.
Taani : rey let me enjoy the freedom.

Sharon and Swayam had just gone out for 10 minutes as them had got a call from college about the preparations of upcoming fest. Rey got his dad's call, so he just got out to check.
When he returned Taani was nowhere to be seen. Rey had an idea what would have happened!!! He went to the rooms present on the top floor of the disco. He found a guy taking Taani to a room.

Rey (to the guy) : hey you!!! leave her.
Taani : Rey you wanted me to enjoy right? so now let me be!!

Rey was irritated.He caught Taani's hand and pulled her to the room where he had booked for the girls(sharon and taani). He was angry.

Rey (shouted) : you wanna have fun right??? I'll show you what fun that guy was gonna have with you??

Taani was scared because she had never seen rey so angry but she was under the effect of alcohol, out of her will.

Taani (with a pout like a child) : what?
Rey : you really wanna know?? You'll regret it??
Taani : no I won't.

Rey was getting more and more angry.He pulled her hand and pushed her to bed. She some what knew what would happen but Rey was now out of control. He just forced his hard lips onto hers soft rossy pink ones. He bit her lower lip. She winced in pain but rey continued till he felt breathless.

* NOTE : Everything written in this part in red is a bit mature. I myself am only 14 years but I would suggest only people above 13 to read, as after that mostly all are mature enough to know all this.

He slowly opened the threads of the dress worn by Taani and placed wet kisses all over her. She was not in her senses to react. a little while later all her clothing was lieing on the floor and a blanket was over them.

(end now all can read)

He asked...
Rey : now you got it what fun would you have???
Taani : rey its paining.
Rey : (he realised he was out of control as he was also under the same effect as Taani, he just realised what had he done with Taani) I am so sorry Taani. I am really sorry.
Next morning...
Taani woke up. Her head was paining like hell. She tried remebering what had happened the previous night. When she saw rey sleeping next to her, she remembered everything.She was ashamed of last night. By her movement, rey got up and both were embrassed but Taani was hurt.

Taani : rey this why you brought me here and provoked me to drink???
Rey : Taani you are getting me wrong!! A guy was just taking you with him and you were drunk so...
Taani : so you thought why not you yourself take advantage of my state. You are such a cheap gross guy.
Rey : Taani just shut up!! you are crossing your limits.
Taani : rey what you did last night was crossing your limits. It was wrong Rey.
Rey : no Taani it wasn't wrong because I love You and can't see any other guy touching you that way, so I got angry and was drunk so became out of control and you were not ready to listen to me and speaking shit. thats the reason I did the thing what happened last night. I know I should have taken your permission but you were not in your senses. You can punish me for that but please don't say it was wrong.
Taani : Rey I love you too and Listen if you would this with permission then also I would say yes. I thought you just don't love me and used me for a night to fulfill your desire.
Rey : I am sorry.
Taani : Never say sorry again and do boyfriends say sorry to girlfriends????

They were happily into a relationship and soon after the college ended, they married. now after 4 years of there marriage, they have a daughter of 6 months,named aayushi.

*****Happy End*****






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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: taarey_vrimar

Seems interesting
do continue



posted do reply and thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice os
do contii ur other stories also
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb...loved it
keep writing more :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: navk

nice os
do contii ur other stories also


thank you dear
and now i'll surely continue my other stories
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: taarey_vrimar

Superb...loved it
keep writing more :)


thanks all your comment really mean a lot to me and encourage me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: pd786


thank you dear
and now i'll surely continue my other stories


pm me also when u updated
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it was damn good...intimate scene was perfectly written 😳
Do post other stories also n pm me for sure 😊

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