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jallwa_taarey

@jallwa_taarey

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

very lovely Osthank you for PM

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Fatima Faiq

@-Fam_TaaReY-

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Hima hats off to you 👏

Again an outstanding OS 👏

Amazing 👏

You are very good in writing love after marriage stuff 😆

Loved it ❤️

Each and everything was just perfect 👍🏼

Keep writing more and more 😉

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karan

@Karan_TaaRey

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Res/Unres !!

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏👏 👏 👏 👏 👏👏 👏 👏👏 👏👏 👏👏 👏 👏 👏

*Pats* *Claps* *Standing Occasion*

👏 👏 👏👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

OMG ! Hima !

Y u write so wonderful ?

It made my day 😃

At start, i was like - Seriously Hima ko chhodunga nhi 😡 😆 😛

But slowly n gradually I was like - Hima,Itnu bhi buri nhi h 😆 😉

Taani's Love For Rey 😭 😭 😭 so touching n wonderful ! 👏

And when that heartless Dog, reads her cards ❤️

That was the most wonderful part of this One Shot !

And Tumhara, READ AT YOUR OWN RISK !

To hamesha ki tarah FANTASTIC ⭐️ 😳

And That Dialogue at the end .

"Besharami ka maza hi alag h Jaan" 😆 ! I LOVED IT 👍🏼 !!!

This Os was just perfect re !!

Awesome ! I loved it reading ⭐️

Each n every word was perfectly described with all situations !
The way she avoids him,the way he started missing her nd evrything !!

Just PERFECT ! 👏👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Keep Writing More n more !!

Edited by Karan_TaaRey - 11 years ago

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Ankita Bora

@reyanks

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

This os just made my diwali way more special...!!!

It was beautiful...!!

How Taani suffered...how swayam made realise about the love...how rey missed her...n finally how he got her back!

Their feelings n emotions...you portrayed it in a fantastic way!

Loved it!

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Divyana maheshwari

@divi_divyana

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Nyc udate super se bhi upar nd happy diwali u 2

Edited by divi_divyana - 11 years ago

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vrinda_fan

@vrinda_fan

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

awesome and fabulous os ...👏

i love it ...😉

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meenakshi

@meenu_taarey

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

sorry diii

for late comment

as u know

na that i m

really

very busy these

days...

so come to the

update

it was

super dooper

awesomeee

n i

really like ur

arrange marriage

concept

pls aise hi stories likhte

raha karo n thanx 4 pm

n WISH U ALL

A VERY VERY

HAPPY N SAFE

DIWALI BYE TAKE CARE

LOVE U

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Viji.Chandran

@Viji.Chandran

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

awesome os hima
awesome diwali gift
loved it a lot

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kriti094

@kriti094

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Thnks for dis amazing diwali gift
lovely os

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Aditi

@taarey-forever

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#40

awesum OS .. ! 👏

it was vry emotional .. 😔

main toh rone bhi lag gye the .. 😭

rey was missing taani ..

reyam convo was nysh .. ! 😃

TR in each other's arms .. ! aaw .. 😳

d box vich taani hid from rey .. it was nysh ... ! 😳

poem's were to cute .. !

TR romance was superb .. ! ☺️

der cnfession was amazng .. ! 👍🏼

Rey looked at his angel; she sat next to him pouring the coffee from the kettle into the cup. Rey adored her lovingly and when she handed him the cup, he kept it in the tray and he slept on her lap, taani caressed his hair and

T: rey aapko office nahi jaana?

R: nahi

T: par jijaji toh chale gaye!

R: toh?

T: keh rahe they ki aap bhi jaldi pohonch jaaye kisi Mr. Gupta se meeting hai aaj.

R: oh! Freak!!! I am late taani (rushing into the washroom)

By the time he came out, he saw all his things on his bed and she was arranging his clothes in his wardrobe.

Rey caught her from behind and kissed her hair! Taani shivered

T: rey aapko late ho raha hai!!!

R: I love you!!!

Taani stood there silent staring at him.

R: kitna gadha hu na main, kal hi bolna chahta tha, aur ab dekho!!!

Taani hugged him and "I love you too"

R: ab chorr do mujhe, warna towel girr jayega!!!

Taani suddenly parted from the hug and

T: rey aap bohot besharam ho!!! Ap change kro and me jaa rhi hu!!!

R: besharmi ka mazaa hi alag hai jaanemann!!! (to himself)

luvd dis part alot .. ! ❤️ ☺️

thank u 4 d pm .. 😊

keep writing .. ! 😃

PS - Belated Happy Diwali .. 😊

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