TR OS - PYAAR KI ROSHNI

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anagharaj

@anagharaj

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

romantic os, really liked it very much, a diwali bonus.
Happy belated Diwali.

Keep writing taarey os and pm me, also update
your SS, waiting for it.

superb os, reading it again and again.

Waiting for TAAREY ON D3

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karan

@Karan_TaaRey

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Unreserved ! At Page 5 ! 👏

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Namita

@anatomy_nerd

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

hmm...now wat should i call this OS?? awesome, superb, stunning, amazing, most romantic or breath-taking? well for me its all of them👏 in the begining felt very bad for taani😭 n at the same time felt very angry on rey😡...how he could talk to his wife like that????😲 agar mera esa husband ho na to mai use ek laat maar dun...huh then loved taani n sharon's bond...accha tha..!! the part when rey was carving for taani😭 was magnificently written by you...i could feel that👏
then doctor ke advice n explanation se hi lag raha hai ke exams ka pressure kaafi zyaada ha😆😉

then reyam convo was also nice...agar vo nahi hota to uss gadhe ko to pata bhi nahi chalta k vo taani ke saath kitna galat kar raha hai😆

afterwards that letter part made my eyes moist...both the letters were beautifully written...i would use both of them to woo my crush😳

then the romance part was indeed breath-taking☺️ the intimate part was perfectly written by you

being a reader of many of ur stories, i realized that u r developing urself in writting these kinda parts...nyc job hima

do write these kinda OS's more😃