NEW ARSHI SS: ENTRAPMENT - Sneak Peak of Pt 12 Pg 141 (02/01) - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: fanipkknd0

I couldn't resist to write my another thought - may be chote will fall in love with her and then Mr. he will be brought by Astha to separate them.


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Posted: 11 years ago
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VERY VERY INTERESTING...
FULL OF SUSPENSE, MYSTRY, DRAMA...
OHH...I LOVED IT...DIFFERENT CONCEPT...
EXICTED & EAGER 4 NEXT UPDATE...
PLS PM me when u update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Captivating update..
Filled with loads of mystery
Lookng forward to read more
Thnks for d PM..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Interesting.. Waiting to read further..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 2

Khushi: No I cannot do this. I cannot fool an old lady only because I do not have any other shelter than this house.

Mrs Raizada: You have no choice girl. Do you think I saved your life for free?

Khushi: Who asked you to save me? Did I plead to you to save me before I attempted that Suicide?

Khushi's anger was justified.

Mrs Raizada: So it was a clear Suicide attempt? Well not that I didn't realize it before. I did but you confirmed it now to me. I guess there's only one way left with me then. Call the police and inform them you are trying to end your life so that they can investigate who your family people are and then hand you to them?

Khushi was very much depressed and scared hearing this .

Khushi: No. I don't wish to go to them.

Mrs Raizada: Why? What have they done that you tried killing yourself. I am sure it must have been a very cruel some act. Let me guess. Did they try to sell you?

Khushi: That's none of your business. I am going from here. Right now.

She turned to leave but Mrs Raizada caught her hand and turned her angrily.

Mrs Raizada: Do not underestimate me Khushi. If I have saved you and got you here spending so much, then its only because I have a work for you.

Khushi: But why me? I am not interested to do anything for you. Just hire someone else.

Mrs Raizada: You are the only one resembling that face which I needed. And that mole you have on your neck, will make me earn Billions. So you are precious for me and my future. I won't let you go so easily from here.

Khushi touched the little black mole she had on her right side of neck and looked at this lady suspiciously.

Khushi: What has this mole to do with you and your money?

Mrs Raizada: I will tell you all only when you are IN this plan of mine. Not otherwise. Take an hour to decide. And I want a YES.

She clutched Khushi's wrist tight in anger and looked in her eyes.

Mrs Raizada: People say I am a very rough mother. Don't make me demonstrate that on you.

She left her and walked to the door warning her again

Mrs Raizada: I am closing the door Khushi. But remember this is my house and you won't be able to flee from here.

She left the room and Khushi sat on the floor helplessly. What was all this about? What should she do in such a situation? This lady seemed to be very strong in terms of power and money. She would definitely stick to her words and not let her go out of here. Should she just go that old lady who was Mrs Raizada's mother and tell her everything? She looked decent and simple. Will she be able to help her come out of this?

She instantly got up to follow this command of her mind but stopped thinking about the consequences. What if she is caught before uttering the truth to the Old lady? What will this Mrs Raizada do with her then? What if she really calls the police and hands her to them? She will have no option left but to get back to her home in Mumbai.

No. This can't happen. She can never go back in that house or else HE will punish her brutally. Then what else she could do? She checked the clock. It was sharp 06:00pm and it was getting dark now. Her heart started ticking fast. The darkness would help her elope. So she has to stick to this lady and her plans till its really dark so that she can run away from here when the lady will sleep in peace in her room thinking she agreed for her task.

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Arnav Singh Raizada was back home after knowing his mother and his so called wife have reached home. He stormed inside the house calling the servant and asking him where his mother was. He was guided in his Nani's room where his mother seemed to be busy in giving medicines to her mother. She saw her son standing right before her eyes and looking at her angrily. She always expected him to be so. Without feeling scared, she just called him inside.

Mrs Raizada: Chotte is back home Maa.

Nani smiled seeing Arnav and extended her hand calling him and asking him to sit beside her. He sat beside Nani and checked her temperature.

Arnav: Did the Dr's check you today?

Nani: Yes. They did. They said my temperature is normal today.

Mrs Raizada: And she will be out of danger very soon.

Arnav: I guess the new medicine is working then. Keep taking that Nani. You will be alright in few days.

Nani: Not the new medicine Chotte, but the new Bahu of this house is the reason for my good health.

His face reddened hearing this from his Nani and he turned to see his mother who was busy smiling seeing him so frustrated.

Nani: Don't see her. She did what I wanted her to do. How long do you wish to stay away from your wife Chotte? Whatever differences you both have just sort it down and accept each other. Please.

Mrs Raizada: See Chotte. Maa has confirmed I am not at fault. She wished to see her Daughter's Bahu before she falls sicker and I just fulfilled her order. I had no intention to worsen your mood.

He knew his mother very well. Nani's wish of seeing her daughter in law was just an excuse. She had her own reasons of getting an unknown girl in their family proving she is the daughter in law and making her do things which would profit her in terms of money. He stood up to leave but Nani's words stopped him again.

Nani: Chotte. Please don't be angry on her now. She already looks much tensed for coming here. I want you to give one chance to your relationship.

Before he could reply anything his mother walked out of the room hurridly. He wished to follow her but not like that. Not before answering Nani. He sat beside her and then held her hand tight.

Arnav: Nani you stop worrying about us. I will work things out. Happy?

Nani smiled and patted his hand in return

Nani: That's like my Grandson. Now go before your mother informs her that you are here. Go and give your wife a surprise. She will like it.

Arnav unwillingly got up and left the room not to meet his so called wife but to see his mother and talk to her about these things. She wasn't doing right by forcing him to act in her Play. He will never let this happen. He had seen his mother entering the guest room and he followed her there.

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Hearing Khushi's approval for acting as per her wish, Mrs Raizada couldn't let a sigh of happiness. She could hardly read Khushi's real motives behind this.

Mrs Raizada: You took the right decision girl. Sorry. I mean Bahu. Now you see how happy I keep you here. No one will ever feel you aren't my Bahu.

Khushi faked a smile and moved a step back not showing much interest in her talks but she continued.

Mrs Raizada: My Son is here. And obviously your first attempt should be making him comfortable with you.

Khushi: Is he a part of this game too?

Mrs Raizada: The most important one. But not that clear enough in knowing my intentions. He just wants his Nani to be happy which she is after seeing you. So rest all doesn't matter.

Khushi: I am so confused Mrs Raizada.

Mrs Raizada: Sasuma. Call me that Bahu. I would love to hear that from you.

Khushi was feeling very disgusted at the moment but she did speak things which this lady wanted her to so that she could gain her trust which would help her later to elope.

Khushi: Fine. Saasumaa. Now tell me what is this all about. What do I need to do here? Does your Son know I am his fake wife?

Mrs Raizada: Yes. He very well knows I have picked a random girl and have designated her to be his wife. He is not happy with me for this but I know seeing his Nani happy, he will be accepting this fact too. Your task is just to behave like a Good wife and a good daughter in law for some days and then I will tell you what your real motive would be. Is that clear?

Khushi confirmed a yes and the door was opened. She saw a handsome man entering the room in a three piece black suit looking dangerously towards Mrs Raizada as if he would strangle her the next moment in anger. Probably he had failed to realize that there were another pair of innocent eyes which were seeing him from the other side. He just barged inside the room shocking his mother too.

Arnav: How dare you do this to us? I warned you , didn't I? Then why did you get some unknown girl in this house claiming her to be my wife?

Mrs Raizada looked scared at his words but she knew to handle her Son and blackmail him for her own selfishness.

Mrs Raizada: You don't love your Nani Arnav? You wish her to keep waiting for a day to come when she will see die without seeing her Grandson's wife? Didn't you see she almost is recovering after I got your Fake wife here in this house?

Arnav: She is recovering from the medicines she is been given not by your selfishness.

Mrs Raizada: This is what you think. But I know what the truth is. I have seen that happiness on her face. I have seen how she has started loving her life all again only because she has a new reason now. You wont agree to this now Chotte but may be as days pass you will realize it.

Arnav was still looking angrily towards his mother for doing this but she looked very casual as if she really didn't do any mistake saying such a big lie to her own mother.

Arnav:Ohh Well. In all this. Let me not forget to introduce her to you. There she is.

She pointed towards Khushi who was standing behind him, a little far away, with fear in her eyes and she had never seen any person like him who had the courage to raise his voice on his mother. He turned back angrily to lash this girl too who agreed to play such an act but the moment he saw her, his heart stopped beating. His eyes sparkled seeing her face. His hands itched to touch her. For the first time in his life, his mother would have done something really beneficial for him. His mother coincidently had got the same girl as his fake wife who was his first crush ever though he knew the other two hardly knew about this truth.

Mrs Raizada saw her Son completely lost in this girl and she couldn't help smiling on her success.

Mrs Raizada: Isn't she beautiful Chotte? Very perfect to be your Wife. Hai naa?

Arnav heard it but he was hardly in a sense to reply back. Khushi on the other hand was very uncomfortable with the way he was staring at her. She wished to hide herself somewhere to ignore his heated gaze but that looked impossible.

Mrs Raizada: Let me introduce you to her. Come.

She held her son's hand and dragged him to Khushi who moved a step back in fear as she was totally scared of this man who didn't even blink since the time he had seen her.

Mrs Raizada: He is my Son Khushi. Arnav Singh Raizada. You need to be act as his wife. Hope you will that very easily and happily.

Khushi faked a smile at him while he continued admiring her innocent face which was all red with mixed feelings. A servant knocked the room and came inside diverting Arnav's attention and gaze now.

Servant: Maam, Naniji is calling you.

Mrs Raizada: I am coming.

The servant left and Mrs Raizada turned back to them.

Mrs Raizada: I will tell her you both are sorting your problems. Meanwhile, Khushi I will arrange some clothes and jewelleries for you. Wear them and come down.

Khushi remained quiet after Mrs Raizada left the room. She didn't know what and how she should be taking this entire drama to be. The way things were going around her felt like she will not be able to leave this place anytime soon. She just hoped she becomes successful in eloping from here tonight.

He moved aside giving this girl some space of her own while he texted someone from his mobile "She is in Delhi. In my house. She has no idea she is with the same person who was searching for her from past few hours. I will handle things from here. Do not interfere. She is mine now."

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Next Upcoming Scene posted on Page 12 ☺️

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Edited by tintin_ruble - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
His mother coincidently had got the same girl as his fake wife who was his first crush ever though he knew the other two hardly knew about this truth.
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while reading this line ... my reaction was this...OMGGG

too many surprisess...from what i guessed...

"She is in Delhi. In my house. She has no idea she is with the same person who was searching for her from past few hours. I will handle things from here. Do not interfere. She is mine now."

am i dreaming...

utteriii its arnie who was behind her

searching for her...

so much suspence in this story...

more than mrs raizada's motive...

its intresting to know the past of khushi...😆

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after a so long...

i am back with long comment...

i wasnt able to control my feelings...🤣

first of..all mrs raizada behaves as she is so strong n can

handle her son...but truth is she is afraid of him..only

thru blackmailing she can handle him...😳

next comes up with khushi...y she want to die...

who goin to punish her brutually... main point WHY?????/ 😲

then comes up arnie...

i was open mouthed hearing arnie first crush...then finally it

turned to a small blush...

and im feeling reddish cheeks...reading "SHE IS MINE NOW'

aww... wht an updt...

fidha hogaayiii aapke ss par
Edited by Nichuss - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: Nichuss


tintin its for u...


Thanks Nicchuss 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
interesting ss just read
looking forward
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
So he is same man whom she had feared ... great update. Thanks.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hmm interesting some childhood crush of ASR or something else, maybe he wanted to make some deal with her to be with him, loving the suspense.

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