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Posted: 11 years ago
#51

Super Duper Fantastic updates dr...!!!!

Idea of Riya n Raj living together pissed Arjun big times..!!!! Loved his reaction on that...!!

OMG Arjun is still unware that he fall in love with her... I hope he realised it soon...!!!!

Awww he was lost in Riya n to make her jealous...he praised Saakshi...wow it's going great...!!!

Wht the...Saakshi wanted to make Arjun jealous but instead of him Liza got jealous...!!

Awww Samsha was so lost in eachother...wht's cooking btwn thm..?????

Wow Arjun was looking lovingly towards Riya...that's so cute...but Raj broke their sweet trance...!!!

OMG Arjun got super jealous whn Raj asked her for dance...!!!!

Loved every bit of it...

Continue soon...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
Awesme update
Riya n raj superb plan
Shree too joined them
Arjun ki maza aya
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update dear.
sosad of arjun...a little revenge 4m arjun side will be so superb
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
thanks friends for your nice comments and appreciate yr messages .will try update it soon by the end of this week . just to to write lol still on it jaise he ek part complete hoga i will post it ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55

hey friends i just completed writing one part . just have to proof read it . thought before to write it in the weekend but then thought my friends will miss the story so i wrote it now. will post it in few minutes .. read and do coment how u guys like it and if u want me to add anything more do let me know n message me .

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 5 C

The manager made an annoucement ke now they will choose the partners from the crowd and they will dance on the competition. The lights fell on many people and finally it fell on riya and our hero , arjun ..

Riya was shocked but happy while arjun ,his face dint show any feelings its hard to read his face .on the otherside sakshi was super jealous n angry and talking to herself ke yeh manager ki toh mei baad mei khabar lungi.Rathod , raj and shree shared a smile ,victorious one .

Rathod : arjun jao riya ko leke dance floor par

Arjun: rathod mujhe insab mei interest nahi hai aur nahi kisi mei toh dance toh dur ki baath hai

Sakshi mann he mann mei khush ho kar smile kar rahi hai. shree aur raj ki planning ki toh band baj rahi hai .they looked at riya while arjun said this and riya ki chehre par se muskaan gayab hogae.but she smiled and said ' koi baath nahi arjun sir mei jaanti hu ke appko naahi mujh mei naahi dance mei interest hai aur appko koi force bhi nahi karega. Yeh toh hamara naseeb he kharaab tha ke hamare uppar light aan pari.yeh kahe kar woh chup chaap apne table par baith gayi.rathod riya ki wor dekha toh use bahut dukh hua.he saw arjun n hw knws arjun is somewhere hurt too when riya is hurt but woh yeh kisi ko dikhana nahi chahata isi liye hamesha kharosh wala attitude apne face par rakhta hai.so he takes the lead and say ' acha koi nai riya tum udaas math ho, raj tum jao riya ke saath dance karlo..

Raj:(pov) yeh kiya hamara plan ulta par gaya , rj kuch socho dimaag laga aur baath sambhal .aaj nahi toh kabhi nahi , in dono ko aj he karib lana hoga.

While he is in deep thought arjun takes the opportunity as he doesn't want riya to dance with raj again aur woh bhi itne romantic wala song. Nahii

Arjun goes to riya holds her hand and drags her to the middle of the dance floor.while the rest of the team are gaping at them with open mouth.' SHOCKED

Rathod: yeh raute bhi nah ,kab kiya sochta hai aur karta hai kisi ko maloom nahi

Sakshi :par abhi abhi toh usne mana kiya tha nah phir kiwu (making a sad face)\

Raj: thank god

Sakshi:kiya?

Raj: huh ! nahi kuch nahi

Rathod :team chal lets sit and watch rautes dhoom performance , ajj paheli baar isko dance karte huwe dekhenge .maza ayega

Chotu: waise rathod sir , kiya arjun sir dance kar lete hai, warna hamari ri ki insult ho jayengi

Sakshi: shut up chotu , arjun ko under estimate math karo aur waise tumhari riya kaha ki dance champion hai

Rathod :areh yeh liza aur shree kaha kho gaye

Chotu: ailaa sir who dono bhi dance floor par hai

All team: kiya .yeh dono tom aur jeery ek saath

Manager on mike , welcome to all dancing partners DJ will play one song and you all will dance so jaise he song end hone ko hoga light ek he team par ayega aur who winner hoga.toh DJ lets rock the party .

Song: 1 2 3 4 Lyrics

Yenda, yengepora yen
Anbukk-uhnidaandaaal-u
Vund-u kattikada yen
Udambellakaayad-u paar-u

Arjun:saying to riya : what the ! what type of song is this and how are we suppose to dance .

Riya: arjun sir meine toh tumko nahi kaha tha aane ko aur waise bhi tumko naachna ata bhi yaa...

Arjun; kiya tum mujhko laalkaar rahi ho ?

Riya ; huh no no sir mei.. mei .. toh bas

Saying this arjun pulls riya to him n rounds her around him while team is watching surprised at arjun n thinking areh wah yeh toh nachta bhi hai ..

Aye pilla, Tamil-uh, teriyada
Hindi la...
ONE SECONDA
..

riya started to sing :

Poonam ke chand ko
Ghoonghat ke neeche chhupa ke
Laayi tere liye
Duniya se nazarein chura ke

arjun starts singing looking at his team and riya:

Peechhe kuaa, aage mere khaai
Tu hi bata jaaun main kahaan
Mujhko duaa kiski lagi bhai
Aake padhara hoon jo yahaan

While whirling riya , arjun goes to other side of her and she sings

Ille fikar, aaja idhar
Beat pe laga le tu thumka


arjun pulls her ,picks her up and slowly slides her down while getting in the music n
putting his hands on her waist , riya closes her eyes .arjun smirks n pulls her moore closer to him and gets on his kness he bangs his hands on her hips n stands up n moves her with one hands to one side n shaking his legs up and downs and sings:

(1 2 3 4 - get on the dance floor)
1 2 3 4 - get on the dance floor
Booty shake, booty shake
Dappan koothu hard core

While holding riyas shoulder he pulls her to him and back and sings :


Shoulder hichak michik
Body hichak michik
Gimme, gimme, gimme
gimme, gimme, gimme some more

At the side the teams are so shocked that no one is thinking any thing just watching ..

they lose there trance when the DJ says next songs ready guys :

Song: Jeene Laga Hoon Lyrics

the song is a romantic number riya and arjun look at each other feeling little uncomfortable . but arjun says riya would u like to continue dancing with me or if not then its ok , I wont mind ,but riya could see love in arjuns eyes for her so she said she will do it.

So arjun puts his one hand on her bare waist and one hand he holds her hand while riya puts her one hand on arjuns neck. Both start swinging to the music beat .

Jeene laga hoon, pehle se zyada
Pehle se zyada, tumpe marne laga hoon

Main mera dil aur tum ho yahaan
Phir kyun ho palkein jhukaye wahaan
Tum sa haseen pehle dekha nahin
Tum is.sey pehle thhe jaane kahaan
Jeene laga hoon pehle se zyada
Pehle se zyada tumpe marne laga...
hmmm... ho..

Arjun and riya are so lost with each other .rathod smirking n thanking his god ' thank god for bring my friend back '.. raj smirking while chotu stunned says ' urri baba yeh toh arjun sir he hai nah aisha , aisha says ha yaar chotu mujhe bhi yakeen nahi hota yeh aise , mera matlab itne romantic aur who bhi riya ke saath .while sakshi is fuming with anger n about to burst any time shouts at them ' tum log chup raho and runs out of the restaurant.

Rathod: ab ese kiya huwa

Chotu: aisha yaha toh romance ho raha hai ,zara uss konne mei bhi dekh ..'' rathod, raj ,and aisha looked towards other side and saw shree and liza dancing so romantically

Raj:yeh kiya ho raha hai , ajj toh sab romance ki mood mei hai and he looked towards rathod and aisha and says ' tum dono bhi jao join the team.aisha looks at rathod and smiles shyly while rathod looks away.

Idhar arjun aur riya ek dusre mei aese khoye huwe hai key eh bhool gaye hai ke inko sab log aur pura ETF dekh raha hai still romantically in each others arms they are swinging

Rehte ho aake jo tum paas mere
Tham jaaye pal yeh wahin
Bas main yeh sochun...

Sochun main tham jaaye pal yeh
Paas mere jab ho tum...

Chalti hai saansein, pehle se zyada
Pehle se zyada, dil theharne laga...

Hmmm... ho...

The light comes and flashes on riya and arjun , who chauk kar ek dusre ko dekhte hai aur alag hote hai . everyone clapping and manager comes to them ans says in mike '

Ajj ki hamare contest ka winner hai yeh dono ,mr arjun aur miss riya .

Toh mr arjun aur miss riya kiasa laga app logo ko but they are not listening they still looking at each other while manager goes to arjun aur uski shoulder hila kar bolta hai , paaji song khatam ho gaya . arjun: huh

Manager: ap dono winner hai aur app dono ko milta hai ek romantic candle light dinner treat yaha par aur yeh gift and gives a male and female dolls to each of them and takes their photo and gives each the foto as well.

Sab clap karne lagte hai aur arjun waha se mur kar chala jata hai apni table ki oor ,riya bhi piche se jaati hai

Rathod : woh kiya tha raute ,mujhe toh laga tum nahi dance karne waale the

Arjun gives a rude look to rathod and moves out of the restaurant while chotu and aisha goes to riya and says : areh wah riya kiya dhasu performance tha ek minutes humme aisa laga tha ke tum dono sach mucj mei ek couple ho and laughs

Riya thinks kash aisha aur chotu tum dono shai hote .. and looks aways

Raj holds riyas hand and drags her to one corner outside the restaurant and holds her in his arms n hugs her while riya also retrns her hug and said to riya in her ears ' arjun hame dekh raha hai start acting lovey dovey yaar, waise dance bahot acha tha maana parega arjun ko lol jaise he sam ne mujhe jaane ko kaha tere saath who jhat se tumko ghech le gaya

arjun was standing a bit far away from them so he could only see them but could not listen to their chats.raj was saying something in riya's ears and riya was blushing like a new bride . arjun clenched his hands n furious at raj shouts yeh kiya kar rahe ho tum dono kuch sharam nahi hai kiya

Raj: kiya arjun yeh office nahi hai aur waise bhi mei apni riya se baate he toh kar raha ho

Arjun: apni riya ! huh

Raj: kiya kuch kaha app ne sir

Arjun: nahi bas yeh ki yaha aur bhi sharif log apne family ke saath aye huwe hai tum dono aese and he looks at riya.

Riya sees hurt and pain in arjuns eyes n says to him ' sorry sir who raj bas...

Arjun cuts her in between and starts saying ' mujhe interest bhi nahi ...

While raj cuts arjun and says ' kiya jaan tum bhi , humme apni personal baath kisi se baatane ki koi zarurat nahi aur nahi koi safai dene ki . yeh office nahi hai and drags riya away while arjun painly watches her go and he thinks to himself agar yeh dono ek dusre re pyar karte hai toh mei ... nahi aesa nahi ho sakta riya ki ankho mei meine sirf apne liye pyar dekha hai aur mei yeh pata laga kar rahunga .

At the other side of the restaurant rathod ,Ayesha and chotu stand watching the drama between these three tabhi achanak se liza aur shree ki zor zor se larne ki aawaaz ati hai .they turned towards the voice and shocked at the scenepre cap ; about shree liza fight sakshi and riya fightarjun taunts riya and rathod and aisha's closeness
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Posted: 11 years ago
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😊😊👏 yippee finally part 5 completed did pretty big writing lol but olls good at the end . hope u guys will like it
i will start part 6 later ...
toh do tell me ke kaisa laga app logo ko as m new here n this is my very first story .
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awsummm part 😊 love it cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
Superb update dr...!!!!
Awww Arjun didn't want to see her dance with Raj n so he himself drag her to the dance floor n danced with her...!!!
Ariya dancing segment was beautiful...!!!!
Awww Saakshi was got so irritated coz of all that...!!!
Wow Raj again played a trick n made Arjun jealous...!!!
Precap looks damn interesting...
Continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60
Superb update
Ariya dance wonderful
Precap more interesting

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