FF : Ariya - kahi pyar na ho jaye -note - pg 49 - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
#61
Wow
Awesome update
Love it
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62
Awesome part...
Ariya dance was romantic... Arjun lol
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63
Superb update
Ariya dance wonderful
i'm feeling so sad 4 Arjun...bcoz jealous can be upto some extent...if it goes out of the limit surely it will hurt the person more...
Precap more interesting
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64
Superb update dr...!!!!
Awww Arjun didn't want to see her dance with Raj n so he himself drag her to the dance floor n danced with her...!!!
Ariya dancing segment was beautiful...!!!!
Awww Saakshi was got so irritated coz of all that...!!!
Wow Raj again played a trick n made Arjun jealous...!!!
Precap looks damn interesting...
Continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
hey i read all th part
love raj riya jealousy plan
rathod is enjoying all
cont soon
and pm me when u updt next
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
superb yar..!!
just read the three parts..!!
lol arjun is full on jealous..!!! bechara ka face color keeps on changing..!!😆😆
raj aur riya sai ja rhe ho dono..!!
omg arjun trying to make riya jealous bt plan backfired😆 he himself again got jealous😆
dance was beautiful...!!! ariya were awesome so were sasha n shriza..!!!
hmm arjun determined to know about riya's love..!!
ab ye shriza mai kyu fight hui???😆
continue soon..!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67
PART 5 D

Just after the song ending , arjun and riya got their prize, shree led liza outside and says to her ' liza mujhe tumse kuch kahena hai'', liza says ' kiya specky ,dance nahi kar paye ache se issliye sorry bolna hai ?

Shree:nahi liza , woh baath yeh hai ke mei tumse pyar karta hu , I love u'' . saying this he exhaled his breath 'whosssh''

Liza stunned and shocked as if she became a statue.after few minutes she found her voice to say something, jaise he woh reply karne jaati hai waise he sakshi comes and pulls shree away from liza to another corner making liza hurt,while going shree looks back at her and then went with sakshi.

Sakshi:shree, tumko maloon haina ke mei arjun se pyar karti hu, toh riya aese kaise kar sakti hai.i thought who meri friend hai par usne toh ... khair she knew how I felt about arjun phir bhi .. I am not going to leave her ,she cant do this

Shree:hey sakshi , wait a second, you what?you love arjun sir , how?when?i mean we all know ke u have a crush on him and you also knw from the very first moment you came ke riya was also interested in arjun sir lekin tum phir bhi riya ko kaise blame kar sakti ho

Sakshi: I don't know anything .shree, mei na kahe deti hu I don't want anyone to come between me and my love aur tum riya ko samjha dena ' and goes away leaving a very shocked shree .

Just as sakshi went liza came and gave shree a tight slap .shree apne gaal par haath rakhke shockingly liza ko dekh kar kaheta hai ' what the liza ?

Liza : wah shree wah yeh tha tumhara pyar, mujhse pyar ka izhaar karke sakshi ko chipke . chii tum itne gir jao ge yeh maine kabhi socha nahi tha shree. U have hurt me very much I don't want to see your face ever , suna tumne ' and goes away crying but shree stops her and says 'wait liza , meri baath suno . mei sirf tumse pyar karta hu nah ke sakshi se aur woh dance meine uske saath isliye ki ke u feel jealous and I only love u yaar aur woh abhi hamari nahi balke apne aur arjun aur riya ki baath kar rahi thi 'u don't trust me huh 'he said making a puppy dog face

Liza:tum sach bol rahee ho nah.

Shree: ha ma kasam yaar i only think about you

Liza hearing this gets happy and hugs shree and says ' I love u too specky'' and shree says ' kiya yaar liza ab toh specky bolna band karo meri jungly billi '

Liza:waise yeh ri, sakshi aur arjun sir ka kiya story hai ?

Shree deep in thinking and says 'patani ' toh liza kaheti hai ' pata lagao shree '

And they hug .

Rathod , aisha and chotu on the other side were looking at tom and jerry (liza n shree) with shocked and surprise .

Rathod:dammit! Ajj yeh ho kiya gaya hai sab ko , shock ke upar shock de rahe hai sab hame '

Chotu:ailla aisha yeh shree saale ko toh mei chorne wala nahi hu ,mujhe bhi nahi bataya''

Aisha:kiya chotu tum bhi . waise acha hota jo bhi hota hai.dono loved each other aur mil gaye toh yeh toh khushi ki baath hai nah,hame toh god ko thanks bolna chaheye, warna yaha toh kae logo ka pyar adhura he rahe jata hai , she says making a sad face looking at sameer , while he is listening qieutly

Rathod:anyways chalo chalet hai and he calls raj and riya as well but riya tells raj to go with them and she will come later. Rathod asks them where arjun and sakshi are but they don't know.he drops everyone to their hotel and takes aisha to their room and holds her hand and told her ' aisha mei jaanta hu tum kaisa feel kar rahi ho but thoda sabr karo tumko bhi koi mile ga ' saying this he hugs aisha and aisha starts crying and tells sameer ke ' sir meine bahut duk sahe hai ab aur nahi sahan hota , mera koi nahi hai aur mei jisse pyar karti hu woh toh yeh bhi nahi jaanta'' and rathod wipes her tears and tells her ' koi baath nai tum udaas maath ho mei hu tumhare saath , mujh par bharosa karo''

Aisha:ab toh bas app par he yakeen hai .

And they hug again ..while on the other side raj goes to his room which he was to share with arjun and saw a fuming and angry sakshi marching outside the door ' yeh kiya kar rahi ho sakshi'' , aise yaha kiwu march kar rahi ho jaise kisi ka murder karne wali ho huh '

Sakshi: arjun ka wait kar rahi hu aur waise bhi tum ko kiya

Raj:kiya huwa itne gusse mei kiwu ho tum?

Sakshi:sab tumhari girlfriend ki galti hai ' aur itne mei riya waha aajaati hai.sakshi sees her there get more angry, shout at her ' bahot maza aya nah tumhe arjun ke saath dance karte huwe , mujhe nahi pata tha tum itne giri huwi larki ho .

Riya: sakz what are you saying

Sakshi:don't call me that . mei ab tumhari dost nahi hu.you are trying to take my arjun nah , sirf dosti ka bahana kar ke

Raj: enough sakshi'' and he holds her hand and drags her away from riya, while she is still cursing riya

Riya eyes filled up and tears rolled down her cheeks and woh arjun ki room ke aage baith jaati hai shock ho kar ke sakshi nei aese kiwu kaha ,woh toh jaanti thi nah , aur rote rote wahi so jaati hai. After few hours later arjun came to his room thinking to himself (pov) agar riya mere saamne ajaye toh uski toh ajj khair nahi .raj ke ssaath closeness hai aur phir bhi mere saath itni romantic dance , itni giri huwi hai yeh meine kabhi socha nahi tha. Sab ke dil ke saath khelwaar kar rahi hai yeh larki yeh sochte what he saw infront of his door shocked him and made his heart stop for a second . he quickly went to riya shaking her up but she didn't burge so usne riya ko godh mei utha kar apne bed par sula diya aur jaane wala tha ke riya nind mei susakh kar balbara rahi hai ' sakshi meine aesa kuch nahi kiya ,mujhe se naraaz math ho , u like arjun sir nah toh mei he tum dono ke zindagi se dur chali jaungi , tum dono ke beach nahi aungi but pliz and she is crying ', tabhi arjun riya ko naam se zor se pukarta hai aur riya chauk jati hai aur uthke ' arjun sir app , mei ... yaha ...''and he hugs riya

Arjun: riya kiya huwa tum ro kiwu rahi thi

Riya:kuch nahi sir. Wohh I am sorry sir mujhe maaf kardi jeye.

Arjun remembers riya ki nind wali baath and he gets angry on sakshi and says 'riya kiya tumhe sakshi ne kuch kaha''

Riya chauk ke arjun ki wor dekhti hai aur rone lagti hai aur waha se jaane lagti hai yeh kahe kar ' mei apni friend ka trust nahi tod sakthi'' tabhi arjun holds her hand and pulls her back to him and she lands back and hits his chest and both r lost in each other.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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PHEW finally another part completed .. sorry to post so late thoda busy thi .but i hope you guys will like it and dont forget to give your preview after reading . i love to hear from you guys ,your coments . thanks

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Posted: 11 years ago
#69
it was awesome blossom and mindblowing update dear.
love shree confession.
love shree liza fight.
i hate saashi.
omg arjun was thinking wrong about riya.
so riya sleep in front of arjun door.
arjun hears everything what was riya saying in her sleep.
love ariya talk.
kya yaar tumne issi point pe rok diya.
continue soon.
and thanx for the pm dear.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: farana786

PHEW finally another part completed .. sorry to post so late thoda busy thi .but i hope you guys will like it and dont forget to give your preview after reading . i love to hear from you guys ,your coments . thanks

please next part jaldi update karo

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