The Bride With A Doll...Epilogue UPDATED ON PAGE 9 :)

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Drkk

@Drkk

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#201

perfect ending.
Beautiful epilogue.
Vl miss story

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sunitikapoor

@sunitikapoor

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#202

A perfect end to a beautiful story...thanks Jenny for a wonderful story...I hope we get another one after your break...have a wonderful time...fabulous epilogue and very beautifully written...as usual.

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Nikita

@zoobie-doobie

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#203

Awww..that was a mind blowing ending !!

Loved the epilogue !

This was an extremely beautiful story...and the end was just excellent.

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yoga123

@yoga123

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#204

Hi, Thank you for the PM...when I got a PM with epilogue link...I read the epilogue and felt very intriguing...I had goose bumps all over...I did not want to comment until I read the entire story...so here I am... read it all the night...couldn't stop after I started with the prologue and chapter 1...the backdrop you have chosen was very interesting...you just transported me back to early 1900s...the social scenario, the political scenario at that point of time was presented really well...your research in this field is really commendable...the confusion among the youth about taking a stand during the freedom fight ...was very clearly depicted in Arnab...being a strong and matured man he wanted to take control of the situation he was presented with...his letter to his father and khushi's letter to her mother in-law showed their love for their family...loved thammi very much...she herself being a child bride...knows very well what it is growing up from a child to womanhood...she was there for khushi and arnab all the time...loved little khushi a lot...her life from childhood to womanhood was not easy...I could see the pain the little one felt when she was rejected by her husband who she thought was the only one for her in this entire world...her attempts to become a woman soon was really heart wrenching... beautiful epilogue...thank you for a wonderful story...thanks for the PM

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luckygal99

@luckygal99

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#205

beautiful ending...and Happy Diwali to you too !

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hmm.. guess karo :P

@jas0308

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#206

unres'd on page 13 ----> heresorry for the delay!!!

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kushiarnav1

@kushiarnav1

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#207

beautiful epilogue...sorry for late comment..

starting the letter ,very emotonal one,i can understand aranb parents turmonil...feel really bad for them, he is their first child and he become doctor in those days its a big and pround degree but they can not celebrate ,because of the circumstances, they r living separately...and the second one kushi 's letter, beautifully written at her age she is quite matured...

Liked ARHI moments ,the way kushi is waiting for arnab in the evening and her hug so cute and romantic,i loved it the way she went in a defensive mode that her husband will think that she is still child😃 so cute...

family reunion is so emotional and touchy, and arnab and kushi symbol of hteir love ARJUN( i didn't expect this part is a surprise for me complete and content...
i liked the way arnav thinks about kushi in the end and they shared moments...

thank u for giving us beautiful story...

cheers...
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@flowers4u

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#208

Loved it a beautiful story i will miss it

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_disha_

@_disha_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#209

Oh Jen what an epilogue! ❤️

Seriously is there any genre you cannot write ... I swear when i say this i am not trying to flatter you but i truly mean it .. the kind of variety you bring about with your unique story lines is such an enormous treat. As a reader i feel so elated to see you churning out such amazing concepts with Arnav and Khushi as the protoganists.

The epilogue was very well written closing all the loops effectively.

Seeing Arnab and Khushi finally together as how they were always meant to be was such an enriching experience.

Thank you Jen once again !🤗

Ps: Sorry for late comment !

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Achu

@arshy4ever

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#210

Story is a brilliant one... There is no other suitable word I think...

I don't know was it a coincidence or not, I was reading the book 'I'm Nujood Age 10 and Divorced'... When I started reading TBWAD I felt so relived... Because the book is about the WORST that happend to a 9 year old girl child... Saiyu's [Rasgulla_SP] shuddering thoughts were haunting me at that time... But your attempt of writing Child Marriage in a new light made me calm, sit back N read... It was a wonderful experience... I really enjoyed it...

Arnav who kept khushi's childhood safe...

Innocent Khushi...

Exasperated , amused sometimes confused Arnav because of Khushi's innocence...

Khushi who learned to Love her husband gradually the way he wanted...

Arnav's patience which shows his deep rooted love for Khushi...

All were mesmerizing ...I would like to appriciate you for taking such a challenging step N making a fool proof ARSHI story ...👏

PS: Sorry for the late comment dear...