The Bride With A Doll...Epilogue UPDATED ON PAGE 9 :) - Page 14

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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome story. soory it had to end. will follow your new story, Inshallah.
Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
It was a perfect ending. So wonderfully written.
Loved their little world. And their cute baby.
I loved that part when Khushi says that she loved watching those two kids playing and arnav knew her well, that she also loves playing but she hate being called a child.
Their reunion was so beautiful. Glad that arnav and his dad resolve their problems and all family members are together.
Going to miss this little bride and her loving husband.
Thanks for such a fantastic story.
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely Jen!

The wait was totally worth it!

Like you had mentioned you had it all covered in a single epilogue! Their struggle at the beginning, their bonding later on! The love that later surfaced up and fought for staying! The confessions and professing that love!

Be it under the moon light in a hut or under the lamp in their modest dwelling the essence was intact!

So Arnav Singh Raizadha he became known as!

Loved the way she would wait up for him n perfect timing!!

The reunion was so sweet! It was heartfelt!

And Arjun aww! Loved how everything fell into place!

The ending was the best full circle all that I need I can see in your eyes!

Sweet and amazing finish!

Missing it already! And like you mentioned there was nothing that was lacking for someone who hasn't been around in the country for that long! It just shows the deep roots that you have here! ::)


Cheers
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome epilogue..will miss this beautiful ff :(
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Posted: 11 years ago
What a wonderful epilogue!!! 👏👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
I read all in a go...lovely ...you are a amazing writer...loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
It was such nice story to read... can't believe it's finished. This was sweet end to a cute story. Thanks for the PM :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awsome
Waiting for ur nxt arshi ff
Happy Diwali u too
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Posted: 11 years ago
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That was a beautiful epilogue Jenny ...
you touch upon reality so easily and realistically ...
Arnav writing to his parents and telling them about his innocence and
then coming to Benaras to meet them ...
and then coming to Prayag to meet their grandson was so beautifully written ...
Thammi holding her great grandchild was so touching ...

The journey of those eight-ten years has been truely memorable for Khushi ...
Khushi's journey starting of as a twelve year old ... coming into their house and
growing up into the perfect wife for Arnab has been commendable ...

Thanks Jenny ... just loved the story ...
Edited by Kishmish - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful ending
in the end even I thought that khushi who came to Arnav house with doll in her had. 😳

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